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Okay, chapter 3 was a major improvement. Except for the very end, I need to know what Byron and Penny talked about goddammitt!!! 
All the characters are fantastic, I wasn't going to play the Octavia route but it turns out her's was far more interesting. Penny is such a great character, she is almost worthy of her own game. This is such a well written and crafted VN, a real gem.
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All the characters are fantastic, I wasn't going to play the Octavia route but it turns out her's was far more interesting. Penny is such a great character, she is almost worthy of her own game. This is such a well written and crafted VN, a real gem.
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Now that I've played a little longer, I must admit: please don't change them. They have grow on me now, too...
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Personally, I prefer the bigger eyes of the original screen but I suppose everyones tastes are differents
I'm so happy to hear that about the faces. I don't see what they see, I guess. My girls look incredible to me. I loved Frozen, I'm a huge Disney fan.The whack a mole with mjolnir got me.
Also here I am, getting all excited about taking avalons top off, and then.......i think i verbally said "you sonofa bitch" while also silently applauding the fuck out of your genius. Certaintly keeps me entertained.
Some of the things ive been seeing in this thread about the faces/eye sizes. I kinda love it, it has this kind of 'frozen' esque feel to the faces which i find really adorable. New penny seems much more playful and less actual crazy, so i like it. In terms of the story im not so sure i care much about byrons father, Id be more interested in just the girls backstorys and adventures.
Lastly here I gotta give a huge shoutout to you lockheart, whos quickly becoming my favorite dev. You truly read and take into consideration feedback ie, rewriting that 3rd act ending to stray a little from "we are going to die" path and very quickly at that. And I mean come on....that scene with Myrabelle, my reaction was like "stooooooop he did not just single me out." I loved it man, was awesome. And if your kink is armor clad ladies...I see no reason why avalon and dallas cant go to a cosplay convention/ren fair
I'm going to talk a little bit about Byron's father. It's difficult because I see some people just want the feel good, flirty parts and some people want the suspenseful, intense stuff. I have an idea to sort of please everyone. Here's hoping it works!
Ahaha, yeah I didn't expect anyone to comment on Myrabelle. It made me really happy to hear someone liked her. So thank you! She will definitely be apart of future updates.
Thank you again for the kind words, they really make my day!
Thank you so much! I'm really glad you're enjoying it! I'm happy to hear you'd like to donate. The best possible donation right now would be spreading the word about Avalon. I cherish this hobby and really want to share my work with as many people as possible. Thank you for reading!
Oooh, look at you, Mr. Observant! Perhaps he's not as cunning as you think.Okay, chapter 3 was a major improvement. Except for the very end, I need to know what Byron and Penny talked about goddammitt!!!
All the characters are fantastic, I wasn't going to play the Octavia route but it turns out her's was far more interesting. Penny is such a great character, she is almost worthy of her own game. This is such a well written and crafted VN, a real gem.
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These are realistik facets of the mold dev sculpt every time there is need of a new babe to water the eyes!
I bet dev washez and sponges every inch of their bodies to make sure they are smooth as butter ans sweet as
candy! Be a dear and also wash their feet ... sneak a peak and make us all happy)!
I bet dev washez and sponges every inch of their bodies to make sure they are smooth as butter ans sweet as
candy! Be a dear and also wash their feet ... sneak a peak and make us all happy)!
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Personally I like the big eyes. and Penny is great. The ending felt much more in tune with where the characters are in the story. And yeah Myrabelle is a little hottie. Maybe we will get to see her in some way in the future or even a future game. Look forward to the next episode keep up the good work!
As for your request at the end of the game: Johnny is a must in my opinion. As he is important to both Ava and Byron. Byron seems to care little for his father and really why should we. I really like both sides of the main story so hopefully you get the good mix down between the love and suspense.
As for your request at the end of the game: Johnny is a must in my opinion. As he is important to both Ava and Byron. Byron seems to care little for his father and really why should we. I really like both sides of the main story so hopefully you get the good mix down between the love and suspense.
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Thank you so much! We're going to explore Johnny's story a little bit starting in the next act. It's actually a really interesting tale! But you're right, the mix has to be right and I don't want to tilt too far to either side. Balance is key!
Thank you so much for the support! That's my first donation! The ultimate goal is to add more graphics cards to my setup so I can kick out renders faster and add some better animations. I really appreciate your help towards that goal!What the hell? Am i the only one donating a coffee??? That better not be true.
Amazing game, great story (a tiny bit too much male bashing now and then) really looking forward to more!
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Wowow hold on, you like Disney? Clearly you've got no idea what Disney has done to me and the Dark Side of the Force. Myrabelle is kinda cute, but I really like Dallas! I'm a sucker for bad girls.
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So Avalon is 18 now, and the rape happened years ago. Tyler has saucy photo of his young daughter on his dresser. He's probably a hebephile, but he's black too isn't that a violation of the Woke Code 69?Oooh, look at you, Mr. Observant! Perhaps he's not as cunning as you think.