I haven't seen any sort of roadmap for what is planned in future updates, but I'm hoping that aside from the obviously unfinished finale, that some of the intermediate scenes will get some more love. A lot of them seem like either placeholders or finish with a scene that is just BEGGING for a followup.
For instance the first hot tub scene seems like it should have more to it and as hot as the 2nd hot tub scene can be, when Jessica heads to the bathroom it really feels like there should be another scene there... (especially if certain triggers are met in the hot tub). Same goes for the bedroom scene if the first hot tub scene is skipped. Just begging for followup.
Also Jess seems particularly excited about the hottub and even mentions wanting it use it on a regular basis but only does twice. Seems like a missed opportunity. Maybe Jess and Christine spend some time there while the MC is out with Sonya. Maybe Sonya sees the hot tub and wants to start there instead of the bedroom. Maybe Christine comes home early and joins them before they can really get started... A hot tub is like a holodeck for a game like this, the possibilities are endless.
The movie theatre is another example of a scene that really seems like just a placeholder where lots of interesting things could happen. How focused is Christine on the movie? How desparate is Jess for the MC to convince Christine to work with her?
Some of the scene's at Jess's place are nice but that also feels incomplete to me. Seems like her brother could be developed as a bit more of a threat (obviously with some sort of options for the MC to thwart him). In fact maybe the MC is the one who gets him caught after he starts to become a threat.
The shower scenes at Jess's place also seem like they could really heat up more than they do depending on your choices (assuming I'm not just missing things now). In fact the MC seems pretty interested in some scenes like that himself and probably has the leverage to get Jess to try and make something happen on camera...
There are already several scenes where Christine reveals herself as a bit of a voyeur. That could definitely become more developed as well...
Also for a guy who's specialty is spyware/surveillance software, it seems like he could be making more extensive use of it himself. How hard would it be to plant a camera in Jess's bathroom when he goes and picks her up? Or in Christine's room, or his own bathroom?
Anyway, not really meant as a critique, just throwing ideas out there. Loving the scenes that have been fully developed.
For instance the first hot tub scene seems like it should have more to it and as hot as the 2nd hot tub scene can be, when Jessica heads to the bathroom it really feels like there should be another scene there... (especially if certain triggers are met in the hot tub). Same goes for the bedroom scene if the first hot tub scene is skipped. Just begging for followup.
Also Jess seems particularly excited about the hottub and even mentions wanting it use it on a regular basis but only does twice. Seems like a missed opportunity. Maybe Jess and Christine spend some time there while the MC is out with Sonya. Maybe Sonya sees the hot tub and wants to start there instead of the bedroom. Maybe Christine comes home early and joins them before they can really get started... A hot tub is like a holodeck for a game like this, the possibilities are endless.
The movie theatre is another example of a scene that really seems like just a placeholder where lots of interesting things could happen. How focused is Christine on the movie? How desparate is Jess for the MC to convince Christine to work with her?
Some of the scene's at Jess's place are nice but that also feels incomplete to me. Seems like her brother could be developed as a bit more of a threat (obviously with some sort of options for the MC to thwart him). In fact maybe the MC is the one who gets him caught after he starts to become a threat.
The shower scenes at Jess's place also seem like they could really heat up more than they do depending on your choices (assuming I'm not just missing things now). In fact the MC seems pretty interested in some scenes like that himself and probably has the leverage to get Jess to try and make something happen on camera...
There are already several scenes where Christine reveals herself as a bit of a voyeur. That could definitely become more developed as well...
Also for a guy who's specialty is spyware/surveillance software, it seems like he could be making more extensive use of it himself. How hard would it be to plant a camera in Jess's bathroom when he goes and picks her up? Or in Christine's room, or his own bathroom?
Anyway, not really meant as a critique, just throwing ideas out there. Loving the scenes that have been fully developed.
