VN Ren'Py Because I Love Her [Ep.1 P1] [The Typist]

[Deezcheezz]

I shouldn't have played this game, I really shouldn't have. The love route ending In chapter 3 has left me feeling betrayed, after I gave Jenni the attention, affection and closure she needs, letting her know that I'm available, betrayal was the thanks I got, I hope there'll be an option in the future update that'll allow me to throw all this in her face, so she can feel the guilt of what she has done or she could just gtfo of my house for the better, and as for the DEV, you've made a whole lot of us disappointed. The story could've been placed way better.

 

[Alexia@69]

So, what's going to happen next? Is the Typist still going forward with the way things are, changing stuff up, giving up or what?

 

[BeardedJack]

So, what's going to happen next? Is the Typist still going forward with the way things are, changing stuff up, giving up or what?

Tbh even if he will change half of the story, with all the bad decisions he made and the terrible taste he showed, this won't go anywhere. Nobody forced him to make it this way so i don't think there's hope anymore.
I can understand that he wanted to do something completely original and unexpected but it can't work, it would be so easy to just keep 3 simple paths for this type of game: pure love, love where the MC is the dominant one and corrupts her into some exhibitionism/sharing cause he wants it and the last one, full cheating/cuckold.
This with just more lewd scene and good dialogs will make everyone happy, cutting all the bullshit like landscapes renders and just dumb plot twists for when the game is already developed and just needs some finishing touches, so we don't have to wait months for content.
Hope Mr. Typist will read this and will get enlightened.

 

[exxxe]

I think the Typist is waaaaay too blinded by his insistence you won't get both girls that the story is screwed

Fine we get it you want us to pick just one girl great I picked the fiancee so why do I have to see jenni fingered in the pool supposedly in front of the man she is in love with

The dev must rework the game if he wants to save it and best path that is perfectly set up is actually the one the dev is most against it which is winning both chicks
Edit ,: ok sorry it's the dev game he gets to do what he wants my role is to like or dislike that's all so this is just opinion )

( unsatisfied innocent fiancee that is experimenting and a desperate best friend so deep in love and an MC who lives with both like seriously !!!)

 

[Ghostman95]

Lol someone who didn't like the way the game is going snitched to Patreon, someone on here very likely. What a weak manipulative thing to do.

 

[Segnbora]

Really? That's vile. Based on what?

 

[RedPillBlues]

Lol someone who didn't like the way the game is going snitched to Patreon, someone on here very likely. What a weak manipulative thing to do.

What did Patreon have a problem with exactly?

 

[Kellan]

Lol someone who didn't like the way the game is going snitched to Patreon, someone on here very likely. What a weak manipulative thing to do.

His patreon is up and I see no message about it from Typist neither here nor on patreon or his discord...Where did you hear this?

 

[Ghostman95]

His patreon is up and I see no message about it from Typist neither here nor on patreon or his discord...Where did you hear this?

You can judge for yourself, here are their community guidelines on Adult Content, emphasis added:

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So i guess patreon snitches dont go the ntr route

So, what's going to happen next? Is the Typist still going forward with the way things are, changing stuff up, giving up or what?

 

[Kellan]

@bobbywoby
I read it as someone had already done so...like everyone else seems to have done.

 

[Ghostman95]

I read it as someone had already done so...

I assumed they had based of off context.

 

[Kellan]

I assumed they had based of off context.

Well many didnt like the new update (myself included) but doubt anyone would go that far.

 

[Segnbora]

As his Patreon is still up, I'm starting to wonder about this warning. I hope it's just a false alarm.

 

[TheTypist]

I believe the vocal minority has outspoken those who actually support me. I’ve read a lot of private messages sent to me both here and on patreon and have actually gained much more support in the form of both encouragement and joining me on patreon. While I recieved much criticism, and some believe I’ve messed up so bad in their eyes, I know what I should listen to and what I should avoid altogether. This is the most patrons I’ve had and the most positive things have been for me aside from F95 comments. Personally, if people don’t like it, no one is forcing you to come back really. If your soul purpose is to come here and just look down on devs or criticize a game without any real substance, then just leave and play the other games you hopefully will enjoy more. I do this as a hobby, and it takes a lot of time while I work full time myself and pay bills and am going to school and dealing with family issues. I’m not trying to impress anyone really, rather I’d just like to continue making my game. I’ll fix what should be fixed, but I’m not gonna cave to the negativity. It’s not healthy for anyone.
When I’m done with this game, what will I do? Well, make a different one of course. I’ve invested all my earnings, as well as personal money, into a better pc and spent a lot of time trying to do the best one person can. It’d be foolish to give up or cave in to negativity when in my eyes, I did this for me. You can either come along for the somewhat bumpy ride, or you can go anywhere else. No ones begging anyone to stay here. Better yet, make your own game that has everything you want. That’s what I did with no experience. You might be much better, who knows, I’d do nothing but motivate you guys to do the best you can, rather than tear you down. But, I doubt hardly anyone complaining about a free game they don’t even have to play wants to actually take the time to even attempt what most devs are doing.
Yes I’ll continue with the game of course, why wouldn’t I.
No, I won’t be giving up on it.
Don’t like it, then I’m sorry, but I can’t please everyone.

 

[DA22]

Well that is the right attitude in the end, a dev should make the game he wants to make and tell the story he wants to tell and not the game others want him to, you might want to re-tag your game though or make very clear in OP what you understand as avoidable NTR. Good luck with the rest of the game.

 

[Alexia@69]

I'm happy to hear that you won't let the negativity get to you, and at the end of the day it is kind of a "choosing beggars" thing to complain about something that is free, or at least might seem so in certain cases (while in most others it is exactly what it is). But, not meaning this in a bad way, there were also some people who made some good points regarding the game and gave some, perhaps poorly worded but still constructive criticism and intriguing possible ways for "improvement".

Perhaps I should ask, is there anything that you might take into consideration going forward? If so what and if not that's still ok.

 

[numanumani]

Don't change anything, go with your ideas as you get them. It's your game.
Patreon guidelines suggest you're in the clear. Don't let the threats of a minority get to you.

 

[lockhear]

@TheTypist I stand by your side, don't let those so called "experts for everything" ruin your imagination. In their eyes all cuckolding, NTR, cheating, corruption etc genres should be eradicated from Earth's surface, because only correct fetish in porn games is incest harem with only one male - MC, of course .

 

[TheTypist]

I'm happy to hear that you won't let the negativity get to you, and at the end of the day it is kind of a "choosing beggars" thing to complain about something that is free, or at least might seem so in certain cases (while in most others it is exactly what it is). But, not meaning this in a bad way, there were also some people who made some good points regarding the game and gave some, perhaps poorly worded but still constructive criticism and intriguing possible ways for "improvement".

Perhaps I should ask, is there anything that you might take into consideration going forward? If so what and if not that's still ok.

There is plenty of great ideas and proper criticism that I have considered, and there’s so much to talk about and discuss, it’s difficult to word it out and not make anyone upset or expect something different. In the beginning of course I always do what I can and throughout the scripting and posing, sometimes I change things up to make more sense or to more of my liking. Personally, to say the least, I think the Jenni portion of this update will change slightly, not to please everyone, but to just have things make more sense. I know where I’m going with it, and a few others can guess too if they’ve actually read the script well and thought about it enough, but I think where I’m going makes sense and can really work.
As far as the ntr update of course, there’s a lot that can be fixed and improved. There’s some background work going into this storyline, and it’ll make more sense later. And there’s some issues I had with renders that didn’t even allow me to implement more conversations (such as the random “oh we talked about it yeah it’s cool” type of deal after the glory hole. That wasn’t supposed to happen, but I’ll fix it as I wanted to) and there’s just so much more to it all. I believe what I have here is special for many, and I can tell by the outrage/support at the same time that people actually care/cared about my game, and this is great. Again, this is all a learning process for me, and it’s helped me greatly. Now, as far as that goes, i’m Already excited for the other game I have planned in the future. While in class bored I’ve spent time creating my own compelling stories for a great game, one that should spark much more emotion than this game has. And a whole different story altogether.
This has all helped me greatly and I’ve made amazing friends in the process. Seeing names like yours pop up multiple times is one of the most humbling experiences. It shows me A lot. Anyways, I digress. I believe the update will be pretty good in my opinion, but what do I know. It’ll make me happy atleast haha. A lot of my supporters have had great ideas, and it’s always great to implement what I can.

 

[Ghostman95]

There is plenty of great ideas and proper criticism that I have considered, and there’s so much to talk about and discuss, it’s difficult to word it out and not make anyone upset or expect something different. In the beginning of course I always do what I can and throughout the scripting and posing, sometimes I change things up to make more sense or to more of my liking. Personally, to say the least, I think the Jenni portion of this update will change slightly, not to please everyone, but to just have things make more sense. I know where I’m going with it, and a few others can guess too if they’ve actually read the script well and thought about it enough, but I think where I’m going makes sense and can really work.
As far as the ntr update of course, there’s a lot that can be fixed and improved. There’s some background work going into this storyline, and it’ll make more sense later. And there’s some issues I had with renders that didn’t even allow me to implement more conversations (such as the random “oh we talked about it yeah it’s cool” type of deal after the glory hole. That wasn’t supposed to happen, but I’ll fix it as I wanted to) and there’s just so much more to it all. I believe what I have here is special for many, and I can tell by the outrage/support at the same time that people actually care/cared about my game, and this is great. Again, this is all a learning process for me, and it’s helped me greatly. Now, as far as that goes, i’m Already excited for the other game I have planned in the future. While in class bored I’ve spent time creating my own compelling stories for a great game, one that should spark much more emotion than this game has. And a whole different story altogether.
This has all helped me greatly and I’ve made amazing friends in the process. Seeing names like yours pop up multiple times is one of the most humbling experiences. It shows me A lot. Anyways, I digress. I believe the update will be pretty good in my opinion, but what do I know. It’ll make me happy atleast haha. A lot of my supporters have had great ideas, and it’s always great to implement what I can.

You know what man just do you, you where the one that made all these people interested in the first place and they're trying to tell YOU how to run YOUR own game. Let them go out and make thier own game (they can't).