VN Ren'Py Because I Love Her [Ep.1 P1] [The Typist]

[CobraPL]

TheTypist Selecting NTR mode ON/OFF at the beginning of the game would be handy.
Showing NTR alert just before scene start spoils some fun. It is out of mood/story.

 

[Lucioleee]

Simply cheating as in the Mc doesn’t know it’s happening? Possibly, it’s difficult to answer as the entire story hasn’t been written yet, if the opportunity arises, maybe

I mean, in the ntr route, the MC allows/tells Claire to go to Darryl who is sleeping on the sofa.
But is there a way for the MC not to want this kind of situation and in the future she will still do it behind his back, a bit like a love route where the MC wants to choose Claire but she cheats on him ?

 

[Resizer]

What the hell are all the characters in all RenPy games buying clothes in the same store ???

 

[Angmir]

I mean, in the ntr route, the MC allows/tells Claire to go to Darryl who is sleeping on the sofa.
But is there a way for the MC not to want this kind of situation and in the future she will still do it behind his back, a bit like a love route where the MC wants to choose Claire but she cheats on him ?

This

I dont want cuckold route.
I want NTR to happen despite MC not wanting his Girlfriend to do it.

 

[Kame-Sennin]

Simply cheating as in the Mc doesn’t know it’s happening? Possibly, it’s difficult to answer as the entire story hasn’t been written yet, if the opportunity arises, maybe

Then scenes should be on the third person or girl's perspective, not with the MC's POV

 

[Kame-Sennin]

TheTypist Selecting NTR mode ON/OFF at the beginning of the game would be handy.

I am favor with this one , Maybe this is the best alternative way to eliminate the whiners and the pussies

 

[Angmir]

How to get the scene wih MC's girlfriend clinbling on top of black dude and ride him reverse cowgirl ?

 

[Avaron1974]

How to get the scene wih MC's girlfriend clinbling on top of black dude and ride him reverse cowgirl ?

That was the scene that was removed. The one people hated.

 

[yvb]

TheTypist You have done a great job!!! Love you game. Don't listen to the NTR haters

 

[Xpl0it]

Fantastic Game man, beautiful renders and very exciting slow pace! I love it so much!
And Claire is just drop dead gorgeous. Love the NTR stuff and cant wait to see her getting fucked by the black guy.
Great game!

 

[Claudio83]

How to get the scene wih MC's girlfriend clinbling on top of black dude and ride him reverse cowgirl ?

That was the scene that was removed. The one people hated.

Yeah, this time MC push Claire to have fun with the black man, and this scene is more realistic and more exciting that the previous one, also if she don't fuck the BBC (for now!)… i'm eager to see the second part of the Chapter 4!
Great work TheTypist, keep it up!
P.S. When MC suggest Claire to present herself in lingerie i hoped in black stockings (optional with garter belt) and high heels... maybe next time!

 

[kanekidom]

The changes made are very good! I'm excited to see what comes next

 

[Ero - Sennin]

Sex is slow on both routes (Dream,Oral,Removed scene don't count) Done playing both

 

[TheTypist]

What the hell are all the characters in all RenPy games buying clothes in the same store ???

Current trends.

 

[berny]

So this game was actually rewritten to make the NTR more believable? I have to admit I'm having a hard time imagining that.
It's still a big incoherent mess (the bj of the childhood friend at the restaurant, wtf?) like some of the reviews here suggest (imo of course).

 

[BeardedJack]

Yeah tbh i really like that dev wanted to make ppl happy changing some messy mistakes, but still i think that since its so early into development remaking it entirely should be the best option. I like the direction the dev wants the game to go, problem is, to make the game believable and immersive enough he still has to fix a lot, i dont know if thats worth the time when he could just start from 0. Anyways ill still support him for a while just cause atleast he's trying.

 

[Segnbora]

In the previous version, if you were on the NTR path, Darryl showed at the pool party and after a while the MC got drunk and fired a gun that was definitely not Chekovian. The bullet put Darryl in the hospital. The MC then randomly sent Claire to the hospital to apologize, at which point Darryl (who turns out to be a gangster, also out of the blue) blackmails and rapes her, then promises she's in for more of the same. This after all the previous NTR work set up a scenario in which the MC and Olivia were both pushing Claire towards towards a little side action and Claire was willingly responding to Darryl's advances. In other words, it came out of nowhere and didn't follow from what preceded it.

Trust me, this version is much more coherent, at least on Claire's NTR path. I agree about Jenni's blowjob, but compared to the Claire/NTR issue in the previous version it's relatively minor. I guess we'll see what it looks like in the context of more MC/Jenni story.

 

[fauxplayer]

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[Kripke]

I believe that chapter 4 revision appeared to be perfectly successful. Great job, TheTypist!

Could you please share some info on the piano menumusic theme?

BTW, if we change Claire's name to custom, there are places where her name in pink 'Claire's thoughts' is not changed.

 

[St. Valadeez_Jade]

Current trends.

still, we haven't seen the Boys or Men doing any shopping pretty much every other game clothing is the same Ashley's Boutique