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Don't you hate it when you're reading a post that references another post and you click the referenced post and then end up reading surrounding posts, then you start "liking" the posts and then realise these posts are fucking thousands of years old! Then you have to decide, do you unlike them to avoid looking like some weird stalker, or do you leave the likes standing, I mean you liked them for a reason right, they deserved that like! Fuck this First World and its dilemmas, is just doing my head in!
Anyway...
Among the excessive meming and Jill hate of late, I'm curious: For those who've walked the straight and narrow path that is "The Path of Jill", was the (to put it daintily) "Jill fucking scene" everything you wanted it to be?
I mean the mc got to come deep, deep inside Jill's womb (you came inside her didn't you, of course your did, no one saves their balls for 8 seasons and then cums on a girl's tits just for her to wipe it off...), but was the scene all it needed to be?
So it's time for a bit of a breakdown. It's probably already been done, hell I probably already did it 5000+ pages ago, but I don't remember... So humor me...
It definitely started off right:
So the first misstep, when Jill starts to remove her clothing, the fucking idiot mc is like:
What's going on with your brain, dickwad? His response should have been (like it was in the mind of every cunt playing this game right then and there):
The mc then, white knight moron that he is, checks to see if Jill is ok going forward. You trying to cockblock yourself or what, Fuckface?! If she had responded, "On second thoughts, maybe this is rushing into things, sorry to interrupt your evening, I'll be going now", there wouldn't be anyone left on this forum to defend Jill, because they all would have killed themselves!
Then the mc is all like:
As cliched a move that it is, it's still a good move.
But her response was funny:
Umm... way to sound enthusiastic Jill. He didn't just ask "Would you'd like fries with that?" He's going to fuck you, girl, and fuck you hard! If she answered, "Yeah, whatever..." it wouldn't have sounded any less enthusiastic. Maybe a, "Yes!! I... I mean yes, I want to." Would be more like the Jillybean we know and love.
Alright, I'll chalk it up to nerves, she was clamping her ass tight to avoid shitting herself, so maybe she wasn't thinking straight.
Anyway, we've missed a critical step here.
Right now, while they were standing up, removing their clothing, this is when the mc should have removed her bra. You don't wait until you're lying down to remove a girl's bra, especially if it's the first time you're seeing the goods up front. This is your opportunity to see them hanging as god intended, in all their untouched spender, perfectly protruding from a vertical chest. Some groping and sucking (this has nothing to do with that horrible Madame choice...), and then, when your girl starts to get worked up, you stop. Yeah you stop, that gives her the opportunity to say, "Don't stop..." and then you say, "Wanna go to bed?"
Anyway, after that, things proceed fine. They lay on the bed, make out a bit over their clothes, and we get that classic exchange:
To which our intellectual hottie responds:
Classic Jill with her foot in her mouth (figuratively speaking), stumbling over her words when she's worked up.
Then out come her tits. Her tits were the focus of this part, which makes sense, but I would have liked to see more of Jill's reaction, both her lust and her shyness. We're assuming this is the first time a guy has seen her in this state, it would have been fun to see her internal reaction (we hear her thoughts in previous encounters where she's freaking out), and maybe had her instinctually trying to cover up as the mc coaxes her to give him an eyeful.
Then bam, she's deftly removed the mc's boxes in two frames, and she's a little more nervous now due to the size of his cock. She has to compliment the size of his cock, every other girl has.
Then she starts to play with it (his dick I mean, not the mc's guitar... Why the fuck are you even thinking about his guitar right now, fucking hell...); she just dives straight in and she's very serious about it. Her stare is almost analytical, I'd suggest if she were with Tybalt she'd possibly pull out a magnifying glass.
Then it's time for her remaining garments to be removed. So off they come while she bites her lower lip and looks the mc in the eyes. I wouldn't have it any other way.
After which the mc proceeds to play with her cunt. Now we get a bit more intimate with Jill's thoughts. Typical confused thoughts that we've come to expect whenever the mc is working her up.
Meanwhile the mc seems like he's ticking boxes on a checklist:
It's important to read your girl's responses, but he's making it almost clinical...
Then it's time to fuck, and Jill kinda panics that he's not wearing protection. Almost the first time in the entire game (other than Neil's insistences and that one scene with Maya) that someone even gives a shit about protection, and she chooses not to say anything. That was a bit of a strange one, that she thought about it and then just forgot about it.
Now we get lots of fucking in different positions, mostly with Jill just lying prone and the mc doing all the work, and he gets to lick her asshole which was cool.
Then we segue into some horse riding, the banter from which is a bit of fun, and this includes probably the most flattering shot ever of Jill with her mouth open (of course she hasn't given the mc a blow job yet, so that'll probably soar to the top of the "Good Renders of Jill with Her Mouth Open" list when that occurs):
Then, as the mc warns Jill that he's about to explode, Jill replies in her "Propper" way:
It's not like she was going to say:
Finally the mc blow his copious, steaming hot load deep inside Jill (there's no choice, if you get the option to "cum outside", your game is probably bugged). And she doesn't even give a shit. She just lies there grinning like a fucking idiot, so does the mc for that matter:
And then we get all that, "Are you my boyfriend..." "... it's my destiny that my sister carked it (Aussie slang for "kicked the bucket)..." bullshit which we'll ignore for this post.
And there you have it.
The mc finally got to fuck Jill in the 8th episode of the game. It was a long haul. Was it the payoff you were looking for?
All the joking aside, I thought it was ok, but I would have liked Jill to be a little more bashful. Even though she initiated it, it would have been cool if the mc had to coax her a bit.
She kinda went from someone who was a nervous wreck about sex, to someone who was inexperienced but wasn't too fussed when it finally came down to it.
Maybe that's a good thing; none of the scenes in the game come across too creepy (unlike pretty much every scene in every other AVN). So coercing Jill might leave some people feeling that it wasn't right.
On a somewhat side note, I'm loving that I predicted the "unofficial" name of the episode a while back.
Anyway...
Among the excessive meming and Jill hate of late, I'm curious: For those who've walked the straight and narrow path that is "The Path of Jill", was the (to put it daintily) "Jill fucking scene" everything you wanted it to be?
I mean the mc got to come deep, deep inside Jill's womb (you came inside her didn't you, of course your did, no one saves their balls for 8 seasons and then cums on a girl's tits just for her to wipe it off...), but was the scene all it needed to be?
So it's time for a bit of a breakdown. It's probably already been done, hell I probably already did it 5000+ pages ago, but I don't remember... So humor me...
It definitely started off right:
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So the first misstep, when Jill starts to remove her clothing, the fucking idiot mc is like:
mc: "(What's going on?)"
What's going on with your brain, dickwad? His response should have been (like it was in the mind of every cunt playing this game right then and there):
mc: "(Oh fuck yes!!)"
The mc then, white knight moron that he is, checks to see if Jill is ok going forward. You trying to cockblock yourself or what, Fuckface?! If she had responded, "On second thoughts, maybe this is rushing into things, sorry to interrupt your evening, I'll be going now", there wouldn't be anyone left on this forum to defend Jill, because they all would have killed themselves!
Then the mc is all like:
mc: "Wanna go to bed? "
"As cliched a move that it is, it's still a good move.
But her response was funny:
Jill: "Ok."
Umm... way to sound enthusiastic Jill. He didn't just ask "Would you'd like fries with that?" He's going to fuck you, girl, and fuck you hard! If she answered, "Yeah, whatever..." it wouldn't have sounded any less enthusiastic. Maybe a, "Yes!! I... I mean yes, I want to." Would be more like the Jillybean we know and love.
Alright, I'll chalk it up to nerves, she was clamping her ass tight to avoid shitting herself, so maybe she wasn't thinking straight.
Anyway, we've missed a critical step here.
Right now, while they were standing up, removing their clothing, this is when the mc should have removed her bra. You don't wait until you're lying down to remove a girl's bra, especially if it's the first time you're seeing the goods up front. This is your opportunity to see them hanging as god intended, in all their untouched spender, perfectly protruding from a vertical chest. Some groping and sucking (this has nothing to do with that horrible Madame choice...), and then, when your girl starts to get worked up, you stop. Yeah you stop, that gives her the opportunity to say, "Don't stop..." and then you say, "Wanna go to bed?
"Anyway, after that, things proceed fine. They lay on the bed, make out a bit over their clothes, and we get that classic exchange:
mc: "You are so beautiful."
To which our intellectual hottie responds:
Jill: "You too."
Classic Jill with her foot in her mouth (figuratively speaking), stumbling over her words when she's worked up.
Then out come her tits. Her tits were the focus of this part, which makes sense, but I would have liked to see more of Jill's reaction, both her lust and her shyness. We're assuming this is the first time a guy has seen her in this state, it would have been fun to see her internal reaction (we hear her thoughts in previous encounters where she's freaking out), and maybe had her instinctually trying to cover up as the mc coaxes her to give him an eyeful.
Then bam, she's deftly removed the mc's boxes in two frames, and she's a little more nervous now due to the size of his cock. She has to compliment the size of his cock, every other girl has.
Then she starts to play with it (his dick I mean, not the mc's guitar... Why the fuck are you even thinking about his guitar right now, fucking hell...
); she just dives straight in and she's very serious about it. Her stare is almost analytical, I'd suggest if she were with Tybalt she'd possibly pull out a magnifying glass. Then it's time for her remaining garments to be removed. So off they come while she bites her lower lip and looks the mc in the eyes. I wouldn't have it any other way.
After which the mc proceeds to play with her cunt. Now we get a bit more intimate with Jill's thoughts. Typical confused thoughts that we've come to expect whenever the mc is working her up.
Meanwhile the mc seems like he's ticking boxes on a checklist:
mc: "(She's wet... That's good.)"
mc: "(She enjoys it... Good.)"
It's important to read your girl's responses, but he's making it almost clinical...
mc: "Ok, this one passes. Next!"
Then it's time to fuck, and Jill kinda panics that he's not wearing protection. Almost the first time in the entire game (other than Neil's insistences and that one scene with Maya) that someone even gives a shit about protection, and she chooses not to say anything. That was a bit of a strange one, that she thought about it and then just forgot about it.
Now we get lots of fucking in different positions, mostly with Jill just lying prone and the mc doing all the work, and he gets to lick her asshole which was cool.
Then we segue into some horse riding, the banter from which is a bit of fun, and this includes probably the most flattering shot ever of Jill with her mouth open (of course she hasn't given the mc a blow job yet, so that'll probably soar to the top of the "Good Renders of Jill with Her Mouth Open" list when that occurs):
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Then, as the mc warns Jill that he's about to explode, Jill replies in her "Propper" way:
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It's not like she was going to say:
Jill: "Cum in my fucking pussy!"
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Finally the mc blow his copious, steaming hot load deep inside Jill (there's no choice, if you get the option to "cum outside", your game is probably bugged). And she doesn't even give a shit. She just lies there grinning like a fucking idiot, so does the mc for that matter:
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And then we get all that, "Are you my boyfriend..." "... it's my destiny that my sister carked it (Aussie slang for "kicked the bucket)..." bullshit which we'll ignore for this post.
And there you have it.
The mc finally got to fuck Jill in the 8th episode of the game. It was a long haul. Was it the payoff you were looking for?
All the joking aside, I thought it was ok, but I would have liked Jill to be a little more bashful. Even though she initiated it, it would have been cool if the mc had to coax her a bit.
She kinda went from someone who was a nervous wreck about sex, to someone who was inexperienced but wasn't too fussed when it finally came down to it.
Maybe that's a good thing; none of the scenes in the game come across too creepy (unlike pretty much every scene in every other AVN). So coercing Jill might leave some people feeling that it wasn't right.
On a somewhat side note, I'm loving that I predicted the "unofficial" name of the episode a while back.
