Don't worry about the people wanting romance rather than rape, their intelligence is questionable.
A romantic relationship with a family member is so much more fucked up than a one-sided rapey one that it's on a whole different scale - especially between a parent and child.
Maybe a writer could swing a believable and not fucked-up-beyond-all-belief incestuous sibling relationship (it'd just be super unhealthy) but, there's no way that a parent/child romantic relationship isn't entirely fucked up.
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This board is surprisingly simp-y (reflected in most m protags being simp af) given its purpose so the rape (and to a lesser degree, maledom) hate is usual for here.
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Personally, I enjoyed the game and appreciate its kinks. Short, self contained and kinky af.
Though, I'm totally a buttstuff guy and the lack of anal in the game (& the tags) almost made me skip without entering the thread. A combination of the other tags did bring me in though and I'm glad I landed here.
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Also, the thoughts of the father that you made the "Conscience" character, it's not your conscience.
Conscience is simply the process of asking yourself if something you're about to do is morally right or wrong and, afterwards, the deployment of the relevant parts of all three parts of your psyche to bother or praise you about the action that you did or did not take. In other words, listen to your fucking conscience if you want to like yourself.
Your conscience supplies you with yes, no and the mental equivalent of a pat on the head or a kick up the arse. It doesn't supply you with a coherent and logical thought-chain, it only supplies a judgement & associated reward/punishment.
The thinking bit that you are quoting is going to be your un- or sub- or just plain conscious -ness.
In most cases, it'd be the consciousness. Next would be the subconscious (head voice #2) with the unconscious in a very distant 3rd.
iirc Disco Elysium's (neat little indie game that's definitely worth playing) dream sequences are split up thusly.
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But, tldr, Conscience is just wrong.
The father's conscience would be (normally screaming but presumably we're at the end of a long and lost internal battle) pestering him about his actions being wrong.
And he'd always consider it wrong (just to a far lesser degree than a healthy person), as soon as it is no longer wrong it is no longer perverse and if it's not perverse then it's not interesting and he won't do it anymore.
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However, labeling this dialogue as Consciousness (or one the other two) is clunky. I'd go with Thoughts or Thinking or just plain italics.
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tldr#2
Don't reinvent the wheel, italics is the accepted norm for internal monologue - coloured for the relevant character if multiple PoV.
A romantic relationship with a family member is so much more fucked up than a one-sided rapey one that it's on a whole different scale - especially between a parent and child.
Maybe a writer could swing a believable and not fucked-up-beyond-all-belief incestuous sibling relationship (it'd just be super unhealthy) but, there's no way that a parent/child romantic relationship isn't entirely fucked up.
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This board is surprisingly simp-y (reflected in most m protags being simp af) given its purpose so the rape (and to a lesser degree, maledom) hate is usual for here.
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Personally, I enjoyed the game and appreciate its kinks. Short, self contained and kinky af.
Though, I'm totally a buttstuff guy and the lack of anal in the game (& the tags) almost made me skip without entering the thread. A combination of the other tags did bring me in though and I'm glad I landed here.
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Also, the thoughts of the father that you made the "Conscience" character, it's not your conscience.
Conscience is simply the process of asking yourself if something you're about to do is morally right or wrong and, afterwards, the deployment of the relevant parts of all three parts of your psyche to bother or praise you about the action that you did or did not take. In other words, listen to your fucking conscience if you want to like yourself.
Your conscience supplies you with yes, no and the mental equivalent of a pat on the head or a kick up the arse. It doesn't supply you with a coherent and logical thought-chain, it only supplies a judgement & associated reward/punishment.
The thinking bit that you are quoting is going to be your un- or sub- or just plain conscious -ness.
In most cases, it'd be the consciousness. Next would be the subconscious (head voice #2) with the unconscious in a very distant 3rd.
iirc Disco Elysium's (neat little indie game that's definitely worth playing) dream sequences are split up thusly.
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But, tldr, Conscience is just wrong.
The father's conscience would be (normally screaming but presumably we're at the end of a long and lost internal battle) pestering him about his actions being wrong.
And he'd always consider it wrong (just to a far lesser degree than a healthy person), as soon as it is no longer wrong it is no longer perverse and if it's not perverse then it's not interesting and he won't do it anymore.
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However, labeling this dialogue as Consciousness (or one the other two) is clunky. I'd go with Thoughts or Thinking or just plain italics.
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tldr#2
Don't reinvent the wheel, italics is the accepted norm for internal monologue - coloured for the relevant character if multiple PoV.
