- Oct 1, 2020
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this game is getting weirder which each new update,,,would almost say it's beginning to look like Dual Family
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- May 9, 2018
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I had high hopes for this games as I saw it as a potential replacement or something to fill the void that Bad Teacher left. The MC surprisingly was a teacher also. He had hot wife, sister and daughters and the school was filled with competition but the good kind and then something happened..
I remember being excited after the playing the first release but after that is when the changes started happening and not for the betterment of the game. I speak for myself when I say this but I am sick to death of mafia storylines in games, three games I follow has something similar and it's becoming a nuisance.
I remember being excited after the playing the first release but after that is when the changes started happening and not for the betterment of the game. I speak for myself when I say this but I am sick to death of mafia storylines in games, three games I follow has something similar and it's becoming a nuisance.
- Sep 22, 2017
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I can still play games with mafia storylines if they are well written. The main issue here, for me at least, was that for the first 2 releases it seemed like it was going to be a corruption game with the family and the girls in the school and then out of nowhere it just shifted into the mafia storyline. It just felt really out of place. After that the dev only had 2 options, he either sticks with a plotline that most people don't like or he removes it from the game and comes up with a new story. I think he would've been fucked either way but now the game feels like it doesn't have a clear direction.
- May 9, 2018
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It's not everyday your punk rock niece is involved with the Mafia. Normally, it's a camstar storyline with those type of characters but the Dev decided to up the ante and involve her with killers and when you add the random hooker into the equation, I quickly became lost.
- Mar 6, 2021
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Well, everyone has their own opinion, some want a slower burn, others something faster.
A slow burn is good (no AWAM, for God's sake, that's not a slow burn, there they pissed in the fire and only smoke comes out now).
I like a good tease, but I haven't seen it in this game, like that teasing that sometimes makes you as excited as the sex scene itself. Let's be honest, we see these things (I believe most) to jerk off, don't we? And in many games, the teasing and dialogue are so hot, that sometimes we come before we even get to the sex itself.
And unfortunately I don't see that in this game, the teasing doesn't exist, the dialogues before the few sex scenes they had, were so bland, meaningless and very childish for an MC who is already married with kids.
The game doesn't give us eroticism, it doesn't make us immersed, it doesn't have the atmosphere of a porn game.
It seems like they just played a bunch of beautiful characters, and some dialogue to see if they could get some money out of it.
I say again, the Dev has the potential for rendering, he manages to make some very good images and animations, but he is not good for a screenwriter, unfortunately.
I think if he just focused on what he's good at, and hired someone to write the story, it would be a good one. It may even be that the story he has in his head is good, but he is failing to convey it to the game.
Or maybe it's time to really change, do something warmer, more adult, I don't mean put ntr, sharing, that stuff, sorry fans, but I don't think these themes match this game, let alone these cute little things. But to make a more elaborate plot, something that keeps us in the game, that doesn't make us keep advancing the dialogue so we don't see the boring conversation.
When he said on discord that this update would have lewd scenes with Roby, my heart raced, and when the update came out and I went to see it, does he call that lewd? Here in the 7 pm soap operas, it shows more things than that.
Seriously? A panties from my grandmother's time, not even the tits showed, that boring maid talk (the way it was written, it could have been much better than that poor text).
That rape scene (fantasy), what a dull thing that was, it didn't pass a bit of excitement, it didn't even look like a sex scene, it seems that he simply threw the scene there to add volume.
Now I wonder, in the next update, are you going to stick with Ruby, or are you going to pick up another random girl?
Extremely disappointed.
A slow burn is good (no AWAM, for God's sake, that's not a slow burn, there they pissed in the fire and only smoke comes out now).
I like a good tease, but I haven't seen it in this game, like that teasing that sometimes makes you as excited as the sex scene itself. Let's be honest, we see these things (I believe most) to jerk off, don't we? And in many games, the teasing and dialogue are so hot, that sometimes we come before we even get to the sex itself.
And unfortunately I don't see that in this game, the teasing doesn't exist, the dialogues before the few sex scenes they had, were so bland, meaningless and very childish for an MC who is already married with kids.
The game doesn't give us eroticism, it doesn't make us immersed, it doesn't have the atmosphere of a porn game.
It seems like they just played a bunch of beautiful characters, and some dialogue to see if they could get some money out of it.
I say again, the Dev has the potential for rendering, he manages to make some very good images and animations, but he is not good for a screenwriter, unfortunately.
I think if he just focused on what he's good at, and hired someone to write the story, it would be a good one. It may even be that the story he has in his head is good, but he is failing to convey it to the game.
Or maybe it's time to really change, do something warmer, more adult, I don't mean put ntr, sharing, that stuff, sorry fans, but I don't think these themes match this game, let alone these cute little things. But to make a more elaborate plot, something that keeps us in the game, that doesn't make us keep advancing the dialogue so we don't see the boring conversation.
When he said on discord that this update would have lewd scenes with Roby, my heart raced, and when the update came out and I went to see it, does he call that lewd? Here in the 7 pm soap operas, it shows more things than that.
Seriously? A panties from my grandmother's time, not even the tits showed, that boring maid talk (the way it was written, it could have been much better than that poor text).
That rape scene (fantasy), what a dull thing that was, it didn't pass a bit of excitement, it didn't even look like a sex scene, it seems that he simply threw the scene there to add volume.
Now I wonder, in the next update, are you going to stick with Ruby, or are you going to pick up another random girl?
Extremely disappointed.
- Apr 25, 2017
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I left his patreon and discord after the scene he did with the wife, forcing the mc not getting it up for such an amazing milf....
I mean there is nothing worse than forcing impotency on the players... then all of a sudden he can jerks off to a wall in the shower
You have to be very bad at writing or blind if you think people will enjoy such a scene.
Since then, this game has been going downhill.
- Mar 6, 2021
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Yeah, and it looks like he removed the discord chat, I can't write anything there. I think he's creating a bubble for him and those few supporters he has. Such a shame, so many beautiful models wasted with such a bad story.I left his patreon and discord after the scene he did with the wife, forcing the mc not getting it up for such an amazing milf....
I mean there is nothing worse than forcing impotency on the players... then all of a sudden he can jerks off to a wall in the shower
You have to be very bad at writing or blind if you think people will enjoy such a scene.
Since then, this game has been going downhill.
I guess it's time to unwatch this one now. It had a great opening with plenty to look forward to. In hindsight, going immediately to a side story with the next release was a red flag, but at the time it seemed like the dev had a direction to go in. Then the infamous mafia release came along and it became apparent that this dev really needs to study about how story structure works.
If this were a TV show, it would be like having episode 1 establish a school/family drama, episode 2 focus on 2 side characters, episode 3 randomly digress into a violent mafia story, and episode 4 basically go "episode 3 didn't happen". No one would keep watching a show like that because there's no plot to latch onto. You stop caring about where it's going because it's not clear it's going anywhere.
Competently written stories are planned beforehand, and they start by establishing the story they want to tell, the setting, and the characters involved. Once they've done that, then the author is free to introduce twists and turns if they service the overarching plot they have in mind. You don't just take a 90 degree turn in chapter 2 or 3.
If this were a TV show, it would be like having episode 1 establish a school/family drama, episode 2 focus on 2 side characters, episode 3 randomly digress into a violent mafia story, and episode 4 basically go "episode 3 didn't happen". No one would keep watching a show like that because there's no plot to latch onto. You stop caring about where it's going because it's not clear it's going anywhere.
Competently written stories are planned beforehand, and they start by establishing the story they want to tell, the setting, and the characters involved. Once they've done that, then the author is free to introduce twists and turns if they service the overarching plot they have in mind. You don't just take a 90 degree turn in chapter 2 or 3.
- Apr 1, 2018
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since everyone got a theory about this, i think this will either be abandoned within the next 6 month, or milked for the next 10 years with nonsense updates.
it started so good, looked promising, the characters look pretty nice, but the story feels like they already ran out of ideas and have to make up some random nonsense to keep earning money for as long as possible without delivering actual content.
it started so good, looked promising, the characters look pretty nice, but the story feels like they already ran out of ideas and have to make up some random nonsense to keep earning money for as long as possible without delivering actual content.
At this point I just feel the only suggestion I could give to the author is to just discard the long story game and just stick with doing small scene. The whole thing feels just disjointed that it might just be him doing nice renderings and do visual novels instead. I do not like them, but it seems to play to his strength.
- Jun 26, 2018
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- Mar 24, 2019
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Meh... too many changes. Scenes that got taken out (which I only noticed because I happened to have saved during those scenes and got kicked back to a previous time and then the scene was gone); the aforementioned plotline changes and lack of anything going on with the family and students; all terribly confusing, which is the last thing I need in an H-game. ANd the change with teh niece's character model now -- we get used to her as a hot blonde, then suddenly she chops off her hair, dyes the rest of it some weird color that doesn;t even flatter her face, and we're supposed to find that hot. Even Ruby's model has changed over time. So.. yeah. I've been playing this one since the very first Prologue release, but after the dev made so many changes it's basically a totally different game, so I'm done. It *had* a lot of promise, but those days are gone. Dropped and deleted. Next!
I had forgotten I played this game before, dled the new version, but it still seems to end in the same place, with the MC choosing to bang the purple haired niece or not, which I had a save just before from months ago. Is that accurate? Or was this an issue with the multi mod?
- Jun 26, 2018
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I guess he's lying, as far as I remember, in my game the MC doesn't get any footjob from the wife:
There is the option, but I didn't choose it (as long as I can, I will not see the footjobs)In the end I opted to go for a route that doesn't have a footjob (same for the walkthrough mod, but the fact is that the game seemed determined to get to that scene, although in the end I managed not to see it).
There is the option, but I didn't choose it (as long as I can, I will not see the footjobs)In the end I opted to go for a route that doesn't have a footjob (same for the walkthrough mod, but the fact is that the game seemed determined to get to that scene, although in the end I managed not to see it).
- Oct 24, 2020
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lol I was enjoying this game until we met Luna, then it became retarded. MC didn't know what a stalker was?? How tf is that even possible?.. And he was knocked out for four hours??? Really? Does the dumbass who made this not realize how bad that is for you?
- Oct 9, 2017
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The dev doesn't seem to think about much. Before he was just knocked out the dev thought it was a good idea to have him get shot. So being knocked out for four hours and not having anyone around smart enough to call an ambulance is actually a better scenario, if you can believe that.