My personal opinion is that the author does not need to rewrite anything globally.
It is enough for me to avoid 2 sex scenes and a confrontation with Luna. I have no problem that he punches her as it shows the dark side of MC, but punching a woman by fist is too much. I think a slap in the face would be enough.
He can also add doubts in the form of inner thoughts before every foolish or hasty decision.
I liked the update itself, and I think I understood what the author wanted to show us - a life-changing event pushing MCs to reconsider his beliefs.
Only in my opinion, this was done a little hastily and ... wrong.
I think the problem goes a bit deeper.
Sure beeing able to make meaningfull choices is important, like rejecting both of the girls.
I honestly don't care much if a girl get's a punch, not everything needs to be on a lvl like MNF or the like, just plain boring imo. But the complete motel scenes was just really bad and made not much sense, thats my problem with that.
I mean, if the choice beating her, would have been just after he got one with the bat, i would have punched her without a second thought...
Really i don't get how some make such a large fuss about this, how can u enjoy many movies or games like that...
So satisfying:
The larger problems i have is:
The MC acts completely different than a he did in ep1.
-He never cheated on his wife, was traumatized, had a dominant but controlled/level headed personality and apparently one of the most capable teachers to deal with problematic students.
-Now he has no problems to fuck some slut, or worse that young junky.
-Instead of being traumatized, he has now some anger problems and a inner beast he barely can control.
-And for a teacher, which is very good at dealing with problematic students, his reaction is completely off.
Than u have the plot.
The plot goes from family/school where we only got some introductions done, to the twins and their family problems, to Luna has a gang, to the junky girl i just fucked has some very powerful antagonist father so lets help her to, to the mob is involved and being shot in 2ep's and a side story...
It's way too much in that short amount of time, u barely start something before hopping to the next thing and start some new arc, again and again.
Also a whole ep focused on Luna, bit too much imo, if u look for how many LI's this game has and we just start the mob story with her.
Than there is the problem, how or who will rescue Luna...cause the MC is bussy, trying not to die.
How much time will u need to solve that mob story and can go back to family/school, as well as to all the other characters.
How will u continue the school plot, if the MC is out for long time.
Honestly i wouldn't be surprised if the next ep starts with: the MC awakens his beast, screams ''MC angry'', turns green and hulk smashes to whole mob into a bloody pulp...