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Hi, I have to tell you, I love this game concept. I have only played the prologue and I am hooked. The images and story line are compelling. However, the grammar, syntax, punctuation, and spelling were driving me crazy. So, instead of complaining on the game page (which I hardly ever do), I edited your script file (which I have never, ever done-honestly, I barely know how) and attached it. I could send money (which I will) but I wanted do something proactive. Thanks and keep up the good work. Looking forward to more stuff.
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Damn, I really appreciate the trouble you went through. I had a few people go through CH 1 and fix a lot of the errors already. I see no reason not to share it here instead of waiting for next update. I'll use the compare program to check the 2 scripts and make changes you have, but the one I have doesn't.
once again, thanks for taking your time to go over my bad script lol.
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Without consent I definitely do not like sleep sex in a game and won't play it unless I am allowed to choose to not do so. Most games luckily give me the choice to not do it.
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clowns234 said:
If the aunt makes it so he has sex with his family member, is that a bad end for the MC? I'm just comparing it to other games I have played. For example, I have yet to see a complaint about sleep sex in a game.
If the aunt makes it so he has sex with his family member, is that a bad end for the MC? I'm just comparing it to other games I have played. For example, I have yet to see a complaint about sleep sex in a game.
Sleep sex by definition is without consent - but I see what you meant.
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Actually me ex gave me consent and there are games where they give you consent to do anything to them at anytime.clowns234 said:
If the aunt makes it so he has sex with his family member, is that a bad end for the MC? I'm just comparing it to other games I have played. For example, I have yet to see a complaint about sleep sex in a game.
Sleep sex by definition is without consent - but I see what you meant.
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I seemed to have missed that question when it was originally asked. I would say yes, because that makes Silvia in control of the situation. If she is telling you when you can and can't have sex with any of the girls, she already won.
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If the aunt helped corrupt his family so that the MC could have sex with them, I doubt too many here would see that as a bad ending - even is she is forcing / controlling him through blackmail. In a porn game, the MC not being able to fuck all the hot women would be the bad ending. In real life, manipulating your family members into having sex, no matter how 'noble' the cause, would be considered deplorable by most people.
Just my opinion.
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I started this game? with high hopes, I liked the premise and the build- up, so far, so good; the 'son' discovers his evil Aunt's scheme and has to try and thwart her plans to impregnate his siblings and mother.......(Power Vacuum-esque) and I thought the bad choice would lead to 'OOPS!.......one sister lost but he still has others to save/spare...But NO.......rollback and choose other option....... what a shame...and a cop-out.....cant really see the point of such 'non-canon NTR' (if it is in the least possible to tag something NTR when it is one's own family?) so does that make a non-canon orange an apple? Garbage. just a rip off without giving the bad guy (or in this case the hermaphrodite) a success when the MC makes a bad choice.. let him suffer the consequences of his mistakes/bad decision and carry on, and let HER savour her victory over him..... a much better and more visceral storyline......{@,@} Lovely renders BTW...I enjoyed and then got bitterly disappointed.......XxX I wish you every success tho'
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Bonjour et merci très bonne histoire ! j'aime bien la tante ! bref, très bon jeu beau graphisme je recommande.
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Hello and thank you very good story! I like the aunt! in short, very good game beautiful graphics I recommend.
I took the liberty of translating it into French
Bonjour et merci très bonne histoire ! j'aime bien la tante ! bref, très bon jeu beau graphisme je recommande.
je me suis permis la traduction en Français
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Hello and thank you very good story! I like the aunt! in short, very good game beautiful graphics I recommend.
I took the liberty of translating it into French
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Had to double take at the summary three times, definitely not my thing... but if it's optional. Might be good definitely gonna try it out.
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As i said in a previous post, I just wish the NTR was not a bad end, but just the beginning of the struggle between MC and hermaphrodite Aunt, although these two have had a confrontation and her predatory purposes with his (MC) siblings and mother are made clear, even though he sees his Aunt 'bouncing' his younger sister on her lap, he does not know for certain that anything other than that is happening, nor that the drink was drugged, and 'may' not believe that his sister is actually being seduced. I.E. She (the Aunt) could look over her shoulder at the MC and coax the sister to speaking that she is only saying 'Hello' or some such thing, leaving the MC to ponder his own eyes and if his Aunt really does have a dick. or conversely, invite the MC to have his turn with the drugged sister after the Aunt has fully impregnated her.....? I don't know, but , really, anything other than a NTR bad ending choice or where is the competition? All that is happening is that we get a chance to see the Aunt steal her chance to 'rape' the girls to get them pregnant? and POW! game over....... Roll back and choose other option...I really can't see the point in using NTR in this mediocre way. NTR is a powerful and emotive aspect of the cuckold/cheating genre, falling on the MC (usu. a husband or boyfriend) to protect his spouse/partner by being loving and attentive. However , many other reasons exist as to why partners would cheat or cuckold (get themselves pregnant by another man) their husbands/partners. In this case there is an Hermaphrodite to contend with, and a story could be developed to a much further degree, But, all this being said, I enjoyed the romp (Love NTR) and hope this little tale does well. {@,@}
you just have to remember one thing, the Dev is only one person, and if he tried to branch the story like that, it'd take years to finish the whole game, as he'd have to write the story for all the separate branches
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well I am not trying to make him change his ways, but there's another way the story could've been handled -- the scene where the little sister was impregnated was imagined by the MC and he goes ahead and either spills the drink or drinks it himself.
1> spills the drink - the aunt misses the chance to interact with the sister and MC gets +1 to lil sister relationship.
2> drinks it himself - MC falls asleep immediately and wakes up to find lil sister standing at the doorway: hugging the aunt. +1 lil sister relationship to aunt.
Again, I am not trying to steer the dev in any way. Just an idea I came up with on the spot.
We all keep leaving comments like "I did not like scene#42069 -- it could've been better", but we don't really talk about how it could be better.
Maybe I am misreading the posts and their intent: too much? .. idk.
1> spills the drink - the aunt misses the chance to interact with the sister and MC gets +1 to lil sister relationship.
2> drinks it himself - MC falls asleep immediately and wakes up to find lil sister standing at the doorway: hugging the aunt. +1 lil sister relationship to aunt.
Again, I am not trying to steer the dev in any way. Just an idea I came up with on the spot.
We all keep leaving comments like "I did not like scene#42069 -- it could've been better", but we don't really talk about how it could be better.
Maybe I am misreading the posts and their intent: too much? .. idk.
that would fall again on branching, and the dev doesn't have the time for that, because, in theory, it'd open 7 different paths (1 where the MC protects the family, 3 where he protects only 2, 2 where he protects only 1, and 1 where he fails) if he were to use a point system to decide how things would go
It'd be funny if one of the bad ends was where the aunt bent the MC over in front of the whole family and really let him have it.
fraisiday
Same but for different reasons. 1. The antagonist is female there are 0 or next to no games where the person stealing your girls is female as generally almost all NTR games are dudes only so I usually avoid all of them in those ones but I generally don't have a problem if a girl steals your girl as it's hot. 2. A plus is that she also has a dick.
fraisiday
Same but for different reasons. 1. The antagonist is female there are 0 or next to no games where the person stealing your girls is female as generally almost all NTR games are dudes only so I usually avoid all of them in those ones but I generally don't have a problem if a girl steals your girl as it's hot. 2. A plus is that she also has a dick.
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And you know the Dev would not have time for that, because......? Story branching is the simplest of game mechanics, rendering 'X' amount of pictures for those branches is what takes the time, but then the Patreons will subscribe and the Dev. will be bombarded with each of their fetishes or ideas, and, sadly, as in other cases, the progress slows the updates stops and the game either gets put on hold or abandoned. But , regardless, I really do wish the Dev. every success and urge him to follow the path of the story as envisioned, the changes I had suggested only aid to increase the depth of immersion and story-telling, I am not suggesting he/she writes War & Peace.......{@,@}