- May 11, 2018
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I've been working on the translation. The chapter 1 stuff were the first translations I had ever done. As you get deeper into the game, you can see how much the text improves, mostly because I understand the characters and story now (I am reading the story, line by line, as I translate it), and also because I feel more confident re-writing a section if the machine translation doesn't read well.the writing really needs some work : strong engrish and inconsistencies.
For exemple in the hospital the nurse told him that he received shrapnels in his head due to an explosion, but after that MC said that "it" didn't tell her how he was wounded because everything was classified. Then, when he get the discharge from the hospital the same nurse tell him to drive more carefully !?!
Please bear with us. I intend to go back and improve the early game.
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