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Did I miss something At the end of my update he was still conscious
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Did I miss something or do something wrong At the end of my update he was still conscious
... meet
(either that or he's just talking about him sacrificing himself for that bitch ...)
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Yeah I know he he sacrificed him self for the bitch the reason I asked was because near the was short scene will him all beat and legion guy saying he's still conscious so It seemed he isn't lost yet, but it's been said few times above he was lost just wondering I hate cliffhangers
Lost can mean more than killed, people are speaking in a hyperbolic manner. As of the last we saw him he's still alive.
I think he's probably gonna survive given what his death caused a whole one update ago. Nael hasn't grown enough yet to give up on him and it's a little premature to unavoidably destroy the entire universe at this point in the story.
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Trust me .. you don't want to see me in a thong. My nice boxer briefs are about as "brief" as you want to get.
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Yeah I agree with that 100% because Nael would lose her shit and that's what would happen, I just wanted to make sure I seen it right
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Do all Japanese schools look like that? I thought it looked like that school building they had in Gaki no Tsukai.
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I found this post on Discord with all the cameos that appear in the game:
In this cameo:
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the code says they are from Stray Succubus, Fate Crossed, and Reconstruction.
In which part of the game (Reconstruction) does the character with pink hair appear?
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In this cameo:
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the code says they are from Stray Succubus, Fate Crossed, and Reconstruction.
In which part of the game (Reconstruction) does the character with pink hair appear?
Actually you don't even need to do anything, just hold the image there will be an option for search on google and then you'll get your answer!
Simple.
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The English flat-out dies at chapter 5. For the most part, I though a dyslexic wrote this and was fine. But any semblance of that is gone. This is so ALMOST well done, the terrible English is so distracting, I'm frustrated. And to make the setting America on top of it? You know, when people read stories, it's because they want to experience something else right? Set it somewhere else, teach us about your area. Hell, it's about timeless evil wizards, MAKE UP a place. I always get so sad when the part that I, a player, have to interact with, the WRITING, is so poorly translated I have to fight to keep reading. This is one of the first games in a long time that I'm not mad at the story, the characters aren't frustratingly stupid, and the plot isn't cookie cutter bullshit. The two big points of contention are the translation and ham-fisted references. But the references PALE in comparison to how upsetting it is to be reading a line and then next one to look and sound like someone sneezed out the letters and just left it in.
If someone could come in to proofread and edit this, this would be one of my favorite stories. Have I seen worse translations? Yeah, my god yes. But it's so distracting in this because it's so much better than most other games on this site.
If someone could come in to proofread and edit this, this would be one of my favorite stories. Have I seen worse translations? Yeah, my god yes. But it's so distracting in this because it's so much better than most other games on this site.
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First off, love your game. Great story. I look forward to the updates. Second, you really need a playtester for spelling and grammar checks. I see a lot of the same mistakes popping up over and over again. Certian instead of certain, happend instead of happened, etc.
Could be as simple as giving an advanced copy to a Patreon supporter to proofread. People might even pay for the privilege
Could be as simple as giving an advanced copy to a Patreon supporter to proofread. People might even pay for the privilege
