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I've seen the Xmas event with the "landlady" ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) in the gallery and it seems it's canon and would happen in the future. I guess I'll just wait and come back once the story reaches around that point. Cause man the dialogue in that scene is nothing short of interesting. ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
 

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I just tried the Nopy ling and got this error.
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Thanks, fixed.
No problem and I just found a wrong word use here: ComplexSociety 2020-04-11 18-39-34-65.jpg "said" needs to be "say"


ADD: Another one, it should be "locked" not "looked" ComplexSociety 2020-04-11 19-47-45-82.jpg

ADD again: ComplexSociety 2020-04-11 19-57-14-58.jpg "her" needs to be "his"

ADD: ComplexSociety 2020-04-11 20-13-34-56.jpg "mans' need to be "men"

ADD: ComplexSociety 2020-04-11 20-18-41-56.jpg Needs to read "Why can't I" not "Why I can't"
 
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Thanks! Keep going until you get tired.
There are a lot of "I" off by 1 word, not all of them but a lot of them are.
The "I" should come after the next word than in front of the next word.
I posted this one already but using it to show its more than 1 ComplexSociety 2020-04-11 20-18-41-56.jpg here is another one but I did not do it for all that I seen ComplexSociety 2020-04-12 09-50-49-88.jpg

Missing ' here ComplexSociety 2020-04-12 10-52-02-87.jpg

Missing the word "know" here ComplexSociety 2020-04-12 11-15-51-36.jpg

Now for the story with the other mom and son, I don't like it because both the mother and sister already have feeling for MC and they were starting to show and then this twist comes in when it was not needed.


ADD: I don't like playing games where you have to lie, steal and cheat your way to sex and this is starting to be that way.

Your family is being lied to and manipulated into having sex with MC and it was not needed because both the mother and sister were already showing signs of love for MC.
If things don't go back to normal and it keeps going this way I will just stop playing.


ADD: Need "to" here: ComplexSociety 2020-04-12 12-54-55-37.jpg

ADD: Need "do" here: ComplexSociety 2020-04-12 13-19-49-26.jpg
 
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Now for the story with the other mom and son, I don't like it because both the mother and sister already have feeling for MC and they were starting to show and then this twist comes in when it was not needed.

ADD: I don't like playing games where you have to lie, steal and cheat your way to sex and this is starting to be that way.

Your family is being lied to and manipulated into having sex with MC and it was not needed because both the mother and sister were already showing signs of love for MC.
If things don't go back to normal and it keeps going this way I will just stop playing.
Only Elly (and Nicole) has feelings for MC at the beginning of the game. Alice is just super affective but she is clueless and Elly is too scared to do something by herself, and it isn't like MC knows about her feelings either.
 
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"the" to "them" ComplexSociety 2020-04-12 17-21-01-19.jpg
Both "you" to "your" ComplexSociety 2020-04-12 17-36-18-10.jpg

:p:ROFLMAO:You should get your head out of the gutter and stop thinking about sex when you do the story where sex should not be. :giggle: ;) :p
These 2 need to change "came" to "come" ComplexSociety 2020-04-12 18-32-41-17.jpg ComplexSociety 2020-04-12 18-44-07-86.jpg

"village" to "villager" and remove "the" ComplexSociety 2020-04-13 07-18-35-27.jpg

Remove "she" here: ComplexSociety 2020-04-13 07-28-24-90.jpg

Also it says "That is all" but I am still getting new scenes with some of the girls and I will now try with the other girls that says "That is all" ComplexSociety 2020-04-13 07-48-39-48.jpg
Did you forget to reset that part to end in the new update?

ADD: It should read like this "How did you two become friends?" ComplexSociety 2020-04-13 08-32-09-42.jpg


"need" needs to be here: ComplexSociety 2020-04-13 08-04-24-20.jpg

"make" instead of "made" ComplexSociety 2020-04-13 08-05-15-23.jpg

Remove this "her" from here: ComplexSociety 2020-04-13 08-07-21-29.jpg

This happens every time I look at the teachers walkthrough and close it out on her. ComplexSociety 2020-04-13 09-48-26-47.jpg To get it to go away I have to open the walkthrough again and exit on a different girl.

"went" not "when" ComplexSociety 2020-04-13 09-58-05-59.jpg

Well that's it no new thing happening now so looks like I am at the end of the update.
Will try again next update.
 
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Thanks, I fixed all of them except the 8th typo because that isn't in the code.

I think all the problems with the WT are yours exclusively. I can't replicate that error with Daiana's message and nobody else reported any mistake with those false "That's all" message so far. In any case, the entire WT is already done now so it will overwrite it.
 
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