Ren'Py Completed Cure My Addiction [Ch.5 Ep.1 C] [TheGary]

[juanel0]

As i'm replaying episode 3, 4 and 5 to help me with my writing, and as i have been complaining about the endings a lot, i feel like i need to get say this.

I think this is awesome, i think the end of episode 3, episode 4 and episode 5 are really, really good. I didn't say it clearly the last time i explained myself.

Yes, i hate the fact that Rachel was cut out, and that because of what was said in the second island event, it feels like there is a lot of cut content and some other things.

But that doesn't mean that i don't like the episodes, because i do, the development of every girl and the events are awesome. The diference between each ending is also really good and i really enjoy it. The only thing that i didn't really liked was the yatch part, i feel like that doesn't belong in the ending.

 

[Eula25]

As i'm replaying episode 3, 4 and 5 to help me with my writing, and as i have been complaining about the endings a lot, i feel like i need to get say this.

I think this is awesome, i think the end of episode 3, episode 4 and episode 5 are really, really good. I didn't say it clearly the last time i explained myself.

Yes, i hate the fact that Rachel was cut out, and that because of what was said in the second island event, it feels like there is a lot of cut content and some other things.

But that doesn't mean that i don't like the episodes, because i do, the development of every girl and the events are awesome. The diference between each ending is also really good and i really enjoy it. The only thing that i didn't really liked was the yatch part, i feel like that doesn't belong in the ending.

So no more rachel after this?

 

[juanel0]

So no more rachel after this?

No, no more Rachel, there are a few scenes but she gets cut out. I want to make a mod or something and add her, change the story a bit and add her at the end of episode 4, and add her ending to episode 5, but it will take a while

 

[Eula25]

No, no more Rachel, there are a few scenes but she gets cut out. I want to make a mod or something and add her, change the story a bit and add her at the end of episode 4, and add her ending to episode 5, but it will take a while

But why ??? Why she got cut out?

 

[Eula25]

So it just Amy Emily and Chloe got the ending?

 

[Eula25]

As i'm replaying episode 3, 4 and 5 to help me with my writing, and as i have been complaining about the endings a lot, i feel like i need to get say this.

I think this is awesome, i think the end of episode 3, episode 4 and episode 5 are really, really good. I didn't say it clearly the last time i explained myself.

Yes, i hate the fact that Rachel was cut out, and that because of what was said in the second island event, it feels like there is a lot of cut content and some other things.

But that doesn't mean that i don't like the episodes, because i do, the development of every girl and the events are awesome. The diference between each ending is also really good and i really enjoy it. The only thing that i didn't really liked was the yatch part, i feel like that doesn't belong in the ending.

I think after episode 3 it just meh with some content in episode 4 seems like has been cut off then rush to ending. Emily is probably the best ending but that just it Rachel has been cut off like the whole yacht or island things didnt happen

 

[juanel0]

I think after episode 3 it just meh with some content in episode 4 seems like has been cut off then rush to ending. Emily is probably the best ending but that just it Rachel has been cut off like the whole yacht or island things didnt happen

I know, that's why i'm making my own version of the ending, but to be fair, the island is a lot of content focused on Rachel and developing the relationship with you.

Still, the main problem is my equipment, it will take me a few months to get what i need for the quality of this game. But it will happend.

 

[juanel0]

But why ??? Why she got cut out?

He said that it was imposible for him to justify a Rachel ending storywise. I dissagre, but i'm just a fan.

 

[Eula25]

He said that it was imposible for him to justify a Rachel ending storywise. I dissagre, but i'm just a fan.

Much like chloe kek... It also makes the island and yacht don't have a purpose

 

[Eula25]

But it just like what DrunkLuka said probably dev lost interest or direction. The way Rachel got cut off is just unsatisfying. Wouldn't have higher expectations for the next game. Don't want to have favourite character cause maybe got cut off from the ending

 

[ThL]

But it just like what DrunkLuka said probably dev lost interest or direction. The way Rachel got cut off is just unsatisfying. Wouldn't have higher expectations for the next game. Don't want to have favourite character cause maybe got cut off from the ending

Once again : Uncle, Rachel and Susan are in a 3 way relationship. Uncle understanding that Rachel has urges that he cannot satisfy, pushes Rachel in MC's arms. And also it's a way to test him further. So when Uncle dies, Rachel is still in relationship with Susan, she is not 'free'. And selfily Uncle might think than no man can replace him in Rachel's heart.
The most important thing for Uncle is that there is an heir to whom pass along the achievements he made so far. The odds to produce an heir are much higher with a 20 years old girl than with a 40 years old. And in the long run, the odds that MC stays in a united family with a girl his age are higher than with a spouse 20 years older. When time takes its toll MC might seek for a life that his ageing wife can no longer live. So once again, better for the Uncle to push MC in the arms of a younger one.
Last, Uncle cares for his daughters and he knows that MC will do his utmost to care for his wife. With Emily and Chloe in the race, there is a good chance that at least one of the girls will be well taken care of.
That's for the rational about Rachel not being one of the choices.
Then you can write a totally different story where MC fucks what people think and fly away with Rachel, you can't fight Love

 

[Eula25]

Once again : Uncle, Rachel and Susan are in a 3 way relationship. Uncle understanding that Rachel has urges that he cannot satisfy, pushes Rachel in MC's arms. And also it's a way to test him further. So when Uncle dies, Rachel is still in relationship with Susan, she is not 'free'. And selfily Uncle might think than no man can replace him in Rachel's heart.
The most important thing for Uncle is that there is an heir to whom pass along the achievements he made so far. The odds to produce an heir are much higher with a 20 years old girl than with a 40 years old. And in the long run, the odds that MC stays in a united family with a girl his age are higher than with a spouse 20 years older. When time takes its toll MC might seek for a life that his ageing wife can no longer live. So once again, better for the Uncle to push MC in the arms of a younger one.
Last, Uncle cares for his daughters and he knows that MC will do his utmost to care for his wife. With Emily and Chloe in the race, there is a good chance that at least one of the girls will be well taken care of.
That's for the rational about Rachel not being one of the choices.
Then you can write a totally different story where MC fucks what people think and fly away with Rachel, you can't fight Love

Welp probably one of the choices that couldn't satisfy player. By rational chloe is just weird to get the ending she's just girl who love bdsm lol amy is like from gf to being a maid and got ending too the only rational and good one is Emily since she love MC. But again this is all couldn't happen if the story isn't just such a random suddenly uncle die Rachel just step back and MC didn't get choice just follow the story. Then in chapter 4 it just decent and seems rush then we got ending could have done more ending but nope just move to new game. Shouldn't have make so much content and a bit story since she's gonna get cut off anyway. The game should just have finish in chapter 3 not many story progress it just MC fuck everyone else. Even if the story is irrational Dev don't want to give a proper ending instead of just shove it off at least it can give some satisfaction for the fan. Imagine playing since start just to see the character got cut off.

 

[Eula25]

I really don't understand why Gary decide to make players peek 1 of 3 ending instead of doing one big "harem" ending ( or at least make such option). In my opinion it's contradicted the tone of all previous chapters ( or i just don't understand the whole plot

The dev probably just lost interest or dont have any idea about how to continue thats all i think

 

[ThL]

The dev probably just lost interest or dont have any idea about how to continue thats all i think

Nothing was ever hinted in the game that there would be a harem ending.
Almost no development at all of something between the sisters and certainly nothing between Rachel and her daughters.
Following Patreon rules it was not possible and the Dev would probably not cross that line to avoid problems with his next game
That being said, the game lasted for more than 2 years. MC had all the girls, done everything with them. It was time to move on.

 

[Eula25]

Nothing was ever hinted in the game that there would be a harem ending.
Almost no development at all of something between the sisters and certainly nothing between Rachel and her daughters.
Following Patreon rules it was not possible and the Dev would probably not cross that line to avoid problems with his next game
That being said, the game lasted for more than 2 years. MC had all the girls, done everything with them. It was time to move on.

Heh don't mind no harem ending but still not even an ending with only her. Playing since chapter 1 then suddenly she's just end with Susan step back to give daughter chance and hell only Emily still make sense for ending chloe just bdsm slut. Amy? Just someone who's done something terrible and now being punished for it got ending too. Rachel doesn't even get alone ending to at least satisfy some fans who have invested in her since release. Her ending alone should at least be considered. Still better than none. Harem ending will mess up the dynamic. Still salty how amy got an ending despite what she has done before

 

[juanel0]

Once again : Uncle, Rachel and Susan are in a 3 way relationship. Uncle understanding that Rachel has urges that he cannot satisfy, pushes Rachel in MC's arms. And also it's a way to test him further. So when Uncle dies, Rachel is still in relationship with Susan, she is not 'free'. And selfily Uncle might think than no man can replace him in Rachel's heart.
The most important thing for Uncle is that there is an heir to whom pass along the achievements he made so far. The odds to produce an heir are much higher with a 20 years old girl than with a 40 years old. And in the long run, the odds that MC stays in a united family with a girl his age are higher than with a spouse 20 years older. When time takes its toll MC might seek for a life that his ageing wife can no longer live. So once again, better for the Uncle to push MC in the arms of a younger one.
Last, Uncle cares for his daughters and he knows that MC will do his utmost to care for his wife. With Emily and Chloe in the race, there is a good chance that at least one of the girls will be well taken care of.
That's for the rational about Rachel not being one of the choices.
Then you can write a totally different story where MC fucks what people think and fly away with Rachel, you can't fight Love

Again, let me explain my problem with this, and the reason i'm making that thing i tould you about.

Your relationship with Rachel, up to the island event is one of "an ending for this will happend". You were on the path to take your uncle's place in the "Uncle, Rachel, Susan relationship", but after espisode 3, all of that was abandoned. And besides, if Rachel wasn't going to be an option, Why kill your uncle?, that doesn't make sense.

Killing your uncle only made sense as a way to let you have Rachel, but once Rachel is off the table, she should just stayed with your uncle and retire.

The fact that you are your uncle's heir it's fine, makes sense, but you could be his heir and keep him alive, and it was your uncle's plan to produce a heir with Rachel so you could too, but i get your point. Making plans for the future, makes more sense to have your marry someone your age.

And about the ending... i'm trying to make it as close to the game as i can.

Spoiler: "Posible story of my "future" ending"

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[juanel0]

I can't decide, so i'm going to ask all of you. The people who still visit this Treath and are still interested on this game and it's ending.

I want to make a "mod version/fan version" of the ending, from the ending of Uncle' Treatment", Where instead of dying, your Uncle survives and a new plan from your uncle for you, Amy, Chloe, Emily and Rachel, starts, maybe including Charlotte as well, but more like a "side girl" like Linda or Susan, Susan will always be part of Rachel's relationship, you just take your uncle's place in that.

But i can't decide if i should just add Rachel to endings, or try to add more... just have another trip to the yacht because the company will close a few months because of a "misterius virus", and in the yatch develop everything.

Including Chloe and Amy, to make choosing them a more "natural" option.

Right now, the only girls that is woth choosing is Emily, and don't get me wrong, i love Emily. But i think Chloe and Amy needed a little more, and i think there is a little of "Rachel/Susan" in "Emily/Linda" and try to explore that. Because Emily loves Linda, is not just sex, the spend way to much time together to never really adreess that.

And then get the ending, which will be kind of the same, with some minor dialog adjusments and maybe one or two more scenes.

Or i could just, add Rachel in episode 4, and then add Rachel as an option in episode 5, and just change the dialog a little in the rest of events.

NOTE: You uncle still dies at the end, you can't marry Rachel if your uncle lives, and you won't be forced to choose if he doesn't die. So it has to happend.

Right now, i can't really work on anything, because the equipment necesary for that, i'll be able to get in a few months, but i can write, and rewrite, and rewrite the story, until it's good enoght to be considered an "Alternative ending" and not just a "Mod/fan ending".

But that, will be decide by TheGary.

 

[gfot]

During the 2nd island trip, Rachel began referring to the MC as her Master. In BDSM that term is usually (but not always) reserved for dominants who have a relationship with the sub/slave, so there was a hint there that the MC was getting into a relationship with her. Especially since he can also dominate Susan. So a relationship between MC and Rachel was definitely possible, the Dev chose not to go for that option, and that's OK, it is still a great game and the ending is fine.

 

[Victarion000]

Here I have some full saves (nearly) of chapter 3 and 4 for anyone who needs, remember that you can (re)play the content of chapter 2 in chapter 3:

Note: even with everything done, you still need to read the walkthrough to revisit all the events. It's a sandbox game after all.

- Chapter 3 (on the yatch, 24-1-LT1.save )

- Chapter 3 (on the island, 24-2-LT1.save ): it's nearly full, you only need to complete a few more stars to wrap up the island

- Chapter 3 (in the office, 24-3-LT1.save )

- Chapter 4 ( ver 4-3-D, there're some one-time events so even with a full save you can still miss them, if you need a save for a specific event you only need to ask, I'll provide. This save is nearly full but I've done most of the events. 15-2-LT1.save )

 

[ThL]

Public release on Patreon of 0.5.b with typo corrections, thanks to splamo
No Rachel ending, quoting the dev :
For me, Rachel had 3 endings. Rachel will always be there for the MC as you can see in the very last part of the game. I don't think a Rachel ending excluding Chloe, Emily, and Amy was needed.
But I understand people like you, who wanted to "end with Rachel"