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botc76

The Crawling Chaos, Bringer of Strange Joy
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If there's one weakness in Mr. Dots games, it's the writing. The dialogue is often completely stilted and incredibly artificial and the story often takes quite illogical and unbelievable turns.
This here ending to chapter 3 is another primo example for this.
Others have already pointed out that a lot of it makes no sense.

TBH, I really don't quite understand why this game even needs a chapter 4.
What is there left to tell that couldn't have been handled in another one or two episodes? I mean, sure Mr.Dots could surprise us and come up with the most awesome storyline, making the fourth chapter the best of the entire game, but somehow I doubt it.
I don't mean to shit on the game or the dev, I've played it since the first chapter dropped here, but from where we are at now, I would have preferred if the game had been wrapped up in 2-3 chapters after the F took the D back home with him again.
Everything since then has mostly felt like filler.

And is it just a bug in my game or does the game still automatically locks you in on F kissing D and that being the evidence of their relationship, even if you DON'T kiss her on the beach? That would sure be a massive oversight.
 
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SomeOldFart

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Now that I'm looking forward for the D/Martin route the only thing I didn't like was that they only fucked in one position after all those desired that they had,only 1 position?
Yes. This. Or even if they kept the same position, at least change the camera angle to a top down shot showing martin plowing and kissing D with her legs wrapped around him when he cums or something. :love:
 
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Journey95

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Yeah this game definitely feels really dragged out, feels like it could have been finished a while ago.

Anyone know of any similiar type of games with the father/daughter relationship?
 
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botc76

The Crawling Chaos, Bringer of Strange Joy
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Yeah this game definitely feels really dragged out, feels like it could have been finished a while ago.

Anyone know of any similiar type of games with the father/daughter relationship?
Of the top of my head, I can't actually think of any finished ones.
Maybe Parental love, but there are two daughters in it and a possible harem.
 

Cernunnos.

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Was...was that a Ruby Riott reference when Chip announced Ruby during the eveningwear? Amusing if so :D

Well that was a depressing update, particularly because the 'evidence' used exists regardless of whether you kiss the daughter that day or not. Could have done without the orgy scene too.
 
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Lazy_Idol_Guy99

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Was...was that a Ruby Riott reference when Chip announced Ruby during the eveningwear? Amusing if so :D

Well that was a depressing update, particularly because the 'evidence' used exists regardless of whether you kiss the daughter that day or not. Could have done without the orgy scene too.
I believe it's a reference to the song Ruby by Kaiser Chiefs, but I could be mistaken.
 

Trikus

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There is talk of a D DP on the Martin route.
What got me was how D went down on Jennifer without any thought on D's part.
Again a D+Ruby event would have made D going down so quickly on Jennifer more plausible. Plus D would have a better reason to not be mad at F for fooling around with Jennifer since D had sex with Ruby.
Surely she had enough experience with Elena and Georgina by that point though.
 

kylearn

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It's not your download, but it's your setup. More specifically your AUDIO setup. While DMD doesn't make use of audio in these animations, renpy still tries to load the audio and fails. . Pay attention to the bottom part of that post. Try switching audio-outputs on your system, and please post feedback.
New to the game, just playing through ch1. So, I've made sure my speakers are on, and plugged in. I've tried switching the audio outputs on my PC. What else could be causing this issue? Thanks in advance for any suggestions. Edit: Also, my speakers are not muted. Thanks a gain in advance.
 
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armion82

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HI is there going to be more dating my daugther or this is the END ?
There will be ch.4.
First we will get one more small update for ch.3 this month.
Probably in march next part of Sunshine Love and after that will come DMD chapter 4
 

pana

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When i load saved scenes, animations dont work. Black screen and images.
Any solution? Same with Gallery mod
 

RustyV

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Surely she had enough experience with Elena and Georgina by that point though.
Yes but D never reciprocated, she just let the girls go down on her.
Her having full on lesbian sex would then make her going down on Jennifer more likely.
The same experience could have been achieved if D and Casandra had full on sex in the update before the Jennifer threeway.
 

rob7278

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The competition: If you play Sunshine Love, you know that D does become a famous model, just not yet. If she doesn't the character Kristina makes absolutely no sense. As for Cassandra, there was dialogue early in Chapter 3 that she put all her eggs in one basket with D winning the contest. She put her job on the line and she lost it. The modelling industry is barbaric and Georgina is getting older so they dropped her. D is just disenfranchised for now, but what will happen in Chapter 4? We have a famous out of work model that is drop dead gorgeous (and in Sunshine Love is also an active model), a woman who knows how to run a modelling agency that is no longer attached to an agency that would kick her out over a loss at a competition, and a fresh model that pretty much everyone thinks should have won. Where does that leave F? Well, Georgina mentions her manager in Sunshine Love too and it is heavily implied that F is her manager. Oh, and they have two photographers that are fairly loyal, one extremely loyal. Sounds like the making of their own modeling agency to me. Oh, and you could bring in Martin as well as he also has experience running a business. If Tyra is ever exposed for helping to rig the contest with the sleazy judge, that will do a lot for D's confidence and career as well.

The ending: D says she THINKS she is pregnant, not that she is pregnant. It was obviously put in as a cliffhanger. As with Chapter 3, I'm sure there will be a few questions at the start of Chapter 4 and one of them will be "Did D take her pregnancy pill?". Also, models can and have been pregnant and still manage to work during and after the pregnancy. If F, Georgina and Cassandra make their own agency, it will be fairly easy to keep her on retainer.

Rachel: I completely agree with Rachel, but remember this was her first encounter with D after they had an explosive falling out. D is still angry, but that doesn't last forever. Time heals all wounds and all that. Hopefully Chapter 4 will keep Rachel in the story and she becomes more involved. The reason Rachel didn't stick around though is she renounced her citizenship when she married Brad so was only on a temporary tourist visa, much like D and Elena in Chapter 1. She wouldn't be able to stay no matter what happened. She would have to get her citizenship back before she moved to Seaside. There is also the relationship of Rachel and Maria which I hope gets more development. There was good chemistry there and I think they could become more than a drunken one night stand.
Thanks - you provided some awesome insight and filled in some gaps for me.
I forgot about the visa aspect for Rachel, so it does make sense that she had to leave.
What's funny is - as evil as Rachel was/is I found myself kind of rooting for her.

I will have to play Sunshine Love. I thought I had already, but a lot of what you were mentioning wasn't sounding familiar. So I may be getting mixed up with a different VN.
 
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