Hmm compared to the previous 2 the 3rd chapt is meh.. Except the begin is feel rushed, compress too much stuff in little time, skipping some scenes where there's no mean to skip and in overall a lot less erotic, yes there is porn but is not the same thing, photoshots were all pretty soft and/or without any eros in it (simple jobs and move away) and the F is starting me to feel really unpleasant, much much more over protective then before, not pushing anymore the D (on the contrary seem quite the opposite) and unwilling to to try new stuff. Other than this there's various plot contraddictions from the previous chapt and not little misspelling.
I'm bit disappointed to see this since the 2 first chapt were amazing and i'm getting hard to continue the story..