- Aug 22, 2018
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Wrong tackle.....sir.
Anywhooooo.......
Therein lies the problem.But you don't know what the aunt has told Amanda, and why she is acting the way she is, do you? It's obviously something extremely important to Amanda, and is explained in later chapters. Would be interesting to hear your thoughts then
This one time loving "daughter" has suddenly turned into a complete thundercunt to the man that raised her on the word of a woman that just turned up without so much as an attempt to talk it through.
I know we can be vague when we're angry but if I acted like that towards someone, especially someone i'd known my whole life, i'd let them know why or they would think i'm a complete and utter bitch and not want anything to do with me.
The issue isn't so much as what has been said but more how she's acted now. She's like a child throwing the mother of all tantrums without being clear about what she's angry about which is about as attractive as the thought of piercing my clit with a nail gun.
It's a "me" thing. People that can't say what they mean piss me off. It winds me up in games as much as it does in real life, I just find it frustrating. Here you had a character people liked and regardless of what the aunt said she's shown a side of her that isn't attractive or appealing at all. Had she said her piece, left and then it been up to the guy to figure things out, fine, but now we have a character that has managed to turn off more than me due to what looks like a complete personality change.
Don't get me wrong in this, i'm by no means slamming your game or your writing. I know full well why it's happening, most stories need a bit of drama to get make a happy resolution seem worth it, it's just the kind of drama that happens to wind me up.
That said there are characters I adore like Kathy and Heidi which irks me all the more thinking that my hopes of a happy ending with one of those is going to fall to the wayside due to Amanda who, as it stands, is showing a severe lack of emotional maturity which does not bode well for future relationships either romantic or family wise.
As the man that raised her, seeing how quick she can turn without bothering to talk to him, is not going to end with sunshine and rainbows regardless. I may not know how men think but being who I am I would be advising Amanda to stay with her aunt as I couldn't be coping with her juvenile bullshit. If she's got a problem, say so and we can deal with it, if she can't then there is the door, don't bother coming back until you can handle a conversation.
Sorry, bit of a long winded ramble there.