VN Others Completed Daughter for Dessert [Ch. 19] [Palmer/Love-Joint]

[neveruplife]

I feel like if the drama went with mc being caught having an affair with one of the love interest would be a great drama story line it would've been better addition instead of evil aunt who've manipulated Moe and Amanda making a scene, it'll make more sense if it took off with mc being able to keep his insatiable lust over harem or be a loyal partner to her, or convince Amanda with open relationship where we can have a harem ending

Also maybe if we turn the aunt into someone else who had previous relationship with mc but then they break up because she wasn't into her and then try to ruin the relationship between the two whether the mc was a loyal partner or a cheater would impact the rest of the story would be better in my opinion, also an option of harem with all the love interest whether Amanda would also be willing to share mc if she could trust him or not as long as she loves him would also be good addition also if mc was really a sweetheart to Amanda she would be willing to go for the open relationship if he failed gaining her trust then harem route wouldn't be good, then put the mc's ex into the part where she can take control of her and make Amanda leave for leisure life instead for the bad ending route.

 

[unevenrm]

ch 6 in all in one archive (official) is bugged.
ch 13 thinks i've had threesome though i haven't (not me literally, MC )

 

[mordred93]

There are multiple angles here to view. Celia has an axe to grind. MC just wants to be left alone from Lenie's family, and focus on his work and daughter. Amanda is trying to find her place in the world (as a young adult) and has always identified herself as a semi-orphan (mom died) and down on her luck due to MC (dad) never having cash. Now Celia comes in and says that she could have had money and her mom could have been saved if MC (dad) would have swallowed his pride and done something (don't know - haven't got there). Amanda is frustrated, a teenager, and now her entire identity is thrown for a loop. Yes she looses her shit and needs space to think. Again - She is a freaking teenager.

The payoff will come eventually. I don't know how as I have no insider information. While I agree with many, that I am really not all that enamored with Amanda at the moment, I do find the model attractive (I find all them attractive, sue me, I a guy), but her change has really put me off. We shall see.

 

[wildt]

Yep, that was an perfect WTF Moment

Yes she is crazier than Ashley on HH. lol

 

[Avaron1974]

Is there not enough drama in real life that we have to have it in a game to enjoy it?

That is generally how story writing goes.

 

[Palmer]

I think what some us of have the problem with is that she wouldn't come to her Dad right away to get his side of the story. Instead of buying in seemingly to continue to get brainwashed. That to me seems the more plausible response in almost anyone IRL.

Well, there are more chapters than the free ones This is a series and we develop one chapter per month. Unfortunately we cannot squeeze in everything we want in a single chapter because we simply don't have the time. I hope you will like the upcoming free versions of DFD.

Have a good one bud!

Palmer Thank's for replying! I became one of your biggest fans with E.S.A. before you even had a patron page. It was and still is the best game I ever played. To me the best game you ever created. I'm not on this site because the games are free.I'm here because its simply the best site to find quality games and actually get to hear other peoples thoughts on them.

Thank you so much. I am very happy you liked Emily: Sister Attraction, especially since it's so different from regular AIF games And I definitely want to keep writing those games, if possible. I wrote the latest $20 scene and was hoping people noticed the difference between me and AW, but I don't think most people did, although people liked it at least

It makes no sense to some of us why Amanda would instantly believe something from someone she knows is out to cause an issue over the person she claims to be in love with without so much as getting his side of the story.

It just makes Amanda look immature, emotionally unstable and incapable of the kind of relationship she was trying to start. She has years of growing up to do before she's ready for that kind of commitment going by her character now.

But you have no idea what Amanda found out about her mother, right? And what Amanda's mother's sister told her about the player? The only thing she did was distance herself from the player. But look what happened in Ch14, there's still love and passion there. I simply don't get this argument.

Just have patience and play the upcoming free chapters, or if you like the game; we'd obviously greatly appreciate your support and you'd get two more chapters right away.

Also, thanks for all your feedback in this thread bud. Greatly appreciated!

 

[Dimitri57]

I respect Palmer's talents but he/she doesn't seem to understand why Amanda's sudden change of attitude and shitty treatment of everyone is off putting to so many. Yeah I know she is still young but she was developing into a mature adult then Auntie comes through the door and she reverts back to a petulant, selfish little bitch. Passive/Aggressive behavior is not sexy or will win you many fans of Amanda if that matters. In reading the thread, many have chosen others in the story that they prefer over Amanda. I'm changing the story for me to "Lily for Lunch"!

 

[Avaron1974]

Then i'll be having er........... kebabs with Kathy?

Yeah, no meal times go there.

Dammit.

 

[DrFog]

Kathy and Lily are great and all, but I'll be having High Tea with Heidi, thank you very much.

 

[goobdoob]

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Dude, 2 things:

1. First, SPOILERS. Put that shit in a spoiler, like I did in this reply. Please edit your post and do this so someone else who doesn't want to know that doesn't see it.
2. Second, to get her attention, you need to use @. Like this: @Avaron1974 .

 

[Palmer]

I respect Palmer's talents but he/she doesn't seem to understand why Amanda's sudden change of attitude and shitty treatment of everyone is off putting to so many. Yeah I know she is still young but she was developing into a mature adult then Auntie comes through the door and she reverts back to a petulant, selfish little bitch. Passive/Aggressive behavior is not sexy or will win you many fans of Amanda if that matters. In reading the thread, many have chosen others in the story that they prefer over Amanda. I'm changing the story for me to "Lily for Lunch"!

Thanks for your comment. I definitely understand it. This is a series though, and you sort of have to follow it for all of it to make sense. But I totally understand it; that's why I'm trying so hard to explain Amanda's behavior

Have a great Sunday bud!

 

[recatcher]

There are multiple angles here to view. Celia has an axe to grind. MC just wants to be left alone from Lenie's family, and focus on his work and daughter. Amanda is trying to find her place in the world (as a young adult) and has always identified herself as a semi-orphan (mom died) and down on her luck due to MC (dad) never having cash. Now Celia comes in and says that she could have had money and her mom could have been saved if MC (dad) would have swallowed his pride and done something (don't know - haven't got there). Amanda is frustrated, a teenager, and now her entire identity is thrown for a loop. Yes she looses her shit and needs space to think. Again - She is a freaking teenager.
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Yup. It's easy for us to know better, of course, but flawed characters gonna flaw. So many villainous characters have done exactly that -- start shit, get beat, try and wave the white flag and be civil, then use that opening to undermine the heroes through doubt and such. Involving Moe was a smart touch from the aunt -- bringing in a supposedly legitimate law figure, not to mention a friend of the target/MC, just makes the findings (in support of the slanted case) seem all the more convincing.

I do agree that having Amanda stay with her was a step too far. Dunno if that'll be important later.

I'm actually GLAD it isn't the millionth "oh no my lover is cheating" conflict storyline, which seems to be a crutch these games find all too convenient to lean on. As messy as the execution has been, at least it isn't a retread of that.

 

[TheKryptonian]

Yup. It's easy for us to know better, of course, but flawed characters gonna flaw. So many villainous characters have done exactly that -- start shit, get beat, try and wave the white flag and be civil, then use that opening to undermine the heroes through doubt and such. Involving Moe was a smart touch from the aunt -- bringing in a supposedly legitimate law figure, not to mention a friend of the target/MC, just makes the findings (in support of the slanted case) seem all the more convincing.

I do agree that having Amanda stay with her was a step too far. Dunno if that'll be important later.

I'm actually GLAD it isn't the millionth "oh no my lover is cheating" conflict storyline, which seems to be a crutch these games find all too convenient to lean on. As messy as the execution has been, at least it isn't a retread of that.

I agree it is refreshing to have a different set of obstacles to overcome and its all about the execution of it. Just the sudden 180 attitude we as the player are met with. Its funny because Amanda even admits she doesn't trust or really like the aunt in the beginning and then BAM... MC garbage, Aunt Super AWESOME.... gtfo...

 

[LoveWhores]

Last time,when i play this game,i was available to every chapter from the saves before the one i played - this was until chapter 12! Now,when i start chapter 13 or 14, i need to start new game and can't press unload and continue from my saves before! I thing,i just will refuse to play this game again and delete her,don't want to start new game (even if its only for some chapter) when i don't know what decisions are made it then and they are probably not mine (probably are automatically from the game)!

 

[goobdoob]

I agree it is refreshing to have a different set of obstacles to overcome and its all about the execution of it. Just the sudden 180 attitude we as the player are met with. Its funny because Amanda even admits she doesn't trust or really like the aunt in the beginning and then BAM... MC garbage, Aunt Super AWESOME.... gtfo...

Maybe we should call the aunt Eric...

 

[Wraith2100]

For those of you who are talking about events that happen after chapter 14 please put it into spoilers. It is unfair of you to talk about "future" events!!!!

Thank you.

 

[Zed | Love-Joint]

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Well, the title is pretty self-explanatory. Heidi is in the player's bedroom. I wonder what will happen...
Let us know what you think about this image (it's obviously still work in progress).

 

[IAmTheGrim]

I bet they play checkers...

 

[Avaron1974]

Well, the title is pretty self-explanatory. Heidi is in the player's bedroom. I wonder what will happen...

She came round to tell us Kathy will be there in 10 minutes?

 

[Palmer]

I think that this whole Aunt shenanigan could have been an excellent twist to the story, but there are two major flaws. First, Palmer has just been dragging it out way too hard. There's too much filler and not enough problem solving, and the whole situation is way too irritating to leave it be for so long. Second, the way Amanda reacts to it is absurd. Sure, she might want to distance herself, but to outright leave and go live with her Aunt is just ridiculous. If I had an "Aunt" that just showed up in my life one day and told me that my father/mother was a criminal, I would tell them to fuck off and go get the answers from my parents, not from some random-ass lady that just inserted herself into my life. Not to mention that

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Then you obviously don't understand what Amanda has learned what the sister of her mother has told her about the MC. I'm guessing? Anyway, thanks for your feedback man!