VN Others Completed Daughter for Dessert [Ch. 19] [Palmer/Love-Joint]

[LutherGremory]

just to throw my two cents in i hate how this story was played out amanda obvs is smarter than the average Lenny so why she would go to a woman for information on her mothers past and father mere days or weeks after that same person said she would destroy her father and then believe that shit without thinking gee maybe this is that destroy stuff she was getting at maybe she is just trying to make everyone he cares about hate him is utter bollocks and unless amanda turns around and says yeah i was playing the pliable and innocent girl so that i could fuck that bitch Cecilia up then as has been said everyone will hate her with no chance at redemption but that sort off deep cover to protect my loved ones crap has been used up to the point its a cliche the author really took the wrong path on this one the option was there to make cecilia like natsuki honda from the kings game anime where the twisted side has to be revealed openly before she allows everyone to see that shes corrupt and selfish instead palmer has chose to make this anime like a mix between a noir b movie and a final fantasy spitball session instead of a deep psychological and compelling tale its a cliche i was almost waiting for a disney intro or a boss fight after the boss divulges his entire plan through a damn power point so damn frustrating my support for this game is fading fast

 

[LutherGremory]

but ill wait and hope and pray because alot of stuff is still pretty dope

 

[Alfius]

Not only does she carry on with the kids tantrum she still wants her lolly pop at the end of the day.

LOL

 

[bllahbllub]

I agree that some people would handle it this way. And try to work it out for themselves first before confronting MC about newly discovered facts.

Some stupid people okay they just believe a random person that has ground breaking news about her father. Really, Really is it that simple and stupid to put a evil thought into someone because a person(aunt) says so???
Does Amanda has no trust and faith in her Father??
She loves the Dick and that's an excuse to forgive her shitty and disgusting behavior.... she risks her father her friends and the diner for her doubt.
She believes her aunt enough to set the doubt about her father.

Thats not real life most kids that have only one parent are stronger minded then that... they trust the person(if nothing bad really happened) that raised them to hopefully good adults.
They just don't lose trust or faith because the aunt shows up and says hey your Father is a piece of shit... you would ignore her right?

 

[Alfius]

Your missing the point... The fact that she wouldnt at least ask the MC about this new information wether its backed up by Moe or sleazy ass Saul and just go straight into MC hate mode is beyond stupid. Its just a terrible job by the writing team to add rediculous conflict plot to a damn porn game. It was handled in such a terrible way it makes one question if the whole point is to get the players to hate Amanda with no chance at redemption.

And it seems people forget the MC raised her from birth with absolutely no requirement to do so. Simply for the love he had for her mother and wanting to do right by Lanie, Amanda knows this... So why would she need to "think" over this new info for even a second is beyond reasoning. Does she think the guy spent 18 years of his life raising her just to get a crack at her families wealth... come on....

Maybe she just want some time alone to figure everything out on her own. Not every person wants to run and confront everything head on.

I mean, the MC is the king of Pussy's. He sucks at confrontations, so obviously the daughter inherited from him.

Maybe there is some damning evidence that she is busy working through, we just don't know.

 

[Alfius]

Some stupid people okay they just believe a random person that has ground breaking news about her father. Really, Really is it that simple and stupid to put a evil thought into someone because a person(aunt) says so???
Does Amanda has no trust and faith in her Father??
She loves the Dick and that's an excuse to forgive her shitty and disgusting behavior.... she risks her father her friends and the diner for her doubt.
She believes her aunt enough to set the doubt about her father.

Thats not real life most kids that have only one parent are stronger minded then that... they trust the person(if nothing bad really happened) that raised them to hopefully good adults.
They just don't lose trust or faith because the aunt shows up and says hey your Father is a piece of shit... you would ignore her right?

Maybe the evidence is very compelling? I mean a photo of your wife/GF/ Lover in bed with your best friend is pretty compelling?
You would in that instance chose to believe the PI that you have only known for 2 weeks over your woman? Maybe there is doubt and you want to try and figure it out on your own, before confronting her? Because once you start confronting, you have opened pandora's box.

 

[DrFog]

Lol this thread is so out of hand right now.

 

[bllahbllub]

Maybe the evidence is very compelling? I mean a photo of your wife/GF/ Lover in bed with your best friend is pretty compelling?
You would in that instance chose to believe the PI that you have only known for 2 weeks over your woman? Maybe there is doubt and you want to try and figure it out on your own, before confronting her? Because once you start confronting, you have opened pandora's box.

Not really no most people that i know would already see it in the behavior of the beloved one that something is fishy they don't need another person for it in case of Amanda it's irrelevant i only Fucked and played with her.....

 

[Alfius]

Lol this thread is so out of hand right now.

lol, it is, but I feel there is so much Amanda bashing going on, I have to stick up for her.

 

[bllahbllub]

lol, it is, but I feel there is so much Amanda bashing going on, I have to stick up for her.

No Amanda bashing here story bashing yes.

 

[Alfius]

Not really no most people that i know would already see it in the behavior of the beloved one that something is fishy they don't need another person for it in case of Amanda it's irrelevant i only Fucked and played with her.....

OK so here is a spanner in the works. (I know it's not the reason, but we are now talking hypothetical)

Say the reason that she's upset is that you have been sleeping around with Heidi, Kathy (Which you have).

That would be legitimate reason for her behavior?

 

[Alfius]

No Amanda bashing here story bashing yes.

I don't agree.

I have seen similar things to this happening countless times in RL. Some people have a paranoid personality and becomes suspicious over the smallest things. (Proven or unproven)

It's a character trait of Amanda that you do not like. Fair play to that. It's a character flaw of her that is definitely realistic.

Nothing wrong with the story. You liked her, and then she flipped on you that you don't like it and don't understand why. Feeling that the trust have been broken between you.This has happened to me in RL and I have seen it a number of times. It happens.

Does not mean you must like it. Avaron even said that she does not like it because her sister behaves like this.
This definitely happens in RL.

 

[Alfius]

Your missing the point... The fact that she wouldnt at least ask the MC about this new information wether its backed up by Moe or sleazy ass Saul and just go straight into MC hate mode is beyond stupid.

See this is where I differ from you. I don't think it's hate mode. I think it's back off until I figured it out mode.

It's like finding out your partner might be an axe murderer from the police. You want to give her the benifit of the doubt, but you might also want to distance yourself for a couple of days until you figured everything out in your mind.

 

[IAmTheGrim]

See this is where I differ from you. I don't think it's hate mode. I think it's back off until I figured it out mode.

It's like finding out your partner might be an axe murderer from the police. You want to give her the benifit of the doubt, but you might also want to distance yourself for a couple of days until you figured everything out in your mind.

But running and staying with the Aunt of all people...

 

[Alfius]

But running and staying with the Aunt of all people...

Does it ever say that she is staying with the Aunt? It's only been a couple of nights since it happened.
Did she not sleep in your place for one of the nights. I read it as she is in between places at the moment.

I might have missed it, but I'm not reading that she is staying with the aunt full time. She obviously lied to you few times about where she were. Since she is not ready to confront you yet.

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[bllahbllub]

Does it ever say that she is staying with the Aunt? It's only been a couple of nights since it happened.
Did she not sleep in your place for one of the nights. I read it as she is in between places at the moment.

I might have missed it, but I'm not reading that she is staying with the aunt full time. She obviously lied to you few times about where she were. Since she is not ready to confront you yet.

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Sure she has other friends to stay over night but i don't thing that she slept by friends... if i recall she was 2 nights in a row not home... she clearly lias about her studying and the job interview.
Why would she even spend time with her aunt if not to hear more shit storys about her Mother and Father... Her Mother was not a big fan of her family sure Amanda doesn't know it but that doesn't mean that Amanda never thought about the Family of her Mother and why nobody from her side was there to support her Father to raise a child/niece(Family).

 

[recatcher]

Lol this thread is so out of hand right now.

Conversations between people who've separately made up their minds tend to go that way heh.

 

[recatcher]

No Amanda bashing here story bashing yes.

She's been called childish, having a kids tantrum, just sticking around because she wants the d, and compared to stupid people who'll believe anything a stranger says.

 

[bllahbllub]

She's been called childish, having a kids tantrum, just sticking around because she wants the d, and compared to stupid people who'll believe anything a stranger says.

yeah because it didn't seemed to be her personality to be such a person... until the aunt showed up thats why i call it Story bashing.
Or did i get a wrong impression the first 10 chapters???

 

[recatcher]

Let me know when the story is dumped on for being childish or when the story just wants the D or is stupid enough to believe strangers because then it's story bashing

But yeah she's acting out of character, that's the point, that's why the MC is worried. The issue is big enough to shake her that way. And sure, not every single-parent child will do that, or whatever, but some would. And that's enough to make it possible that this one would. She's wrong to be swayed, and you know that and I know that, but she doesn't know that yet, that's the point of the story being told.