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@Vrelnir what happens when the parasite stucks on my shota penis character in my game, does the penis will grow longer or it is just keep on more stimulating???
 
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@Vrelnir

For the bully, will they become more possessive/less inclined to sell you or tie you to the pole if you have high love?
Will sex toys be added for masturbation and rare occasions during molestations? Maybe public uses of vibes under clothes?

Also,
What is the benefit of the different transformations?
 

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If you have disabled "transformations" and "wolf transformations", is there a point in living with the pack of wolves? The subplot goes somewhere, or it's just being fucked by them?
 
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One critique that I feel probably isn't completely warranted is that the sex scenes get a bit repetetive. Some of it's just that once you pick an option there isn't much to do but select your options and click away. (of course if there's a bunch more scenes that just aren't in cause it's in alpha this is a complete non issue. The system is robust enouhg with enough written description to make it interesting)
 
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Amedore

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This game causes me contradictory feelings :p:cautious:. In one side, I find really interesting and good things in it. In the other side, it pisses me off a little that the game could be way better, as I have said in my review. I have been playing it for several hours, and, even if I'm still curious about what happen with the MC :unsure:, the fun and interest of the first hour have disappeared since the game has become mechanic and repetitive :sleep:.

I would like to ask the dev, since he's kind enough to participate in this forum :), about his future projects. If I´m not in a wrong, this is his first game, and I think that, with more experience, this dev could make something really good. For example, this very sandbox game with some decent images, some modifications for being less "flamboyant" and a bit more realistic, and the MC and main NPCs being more elaborated and less generic or even randomly generated, would be something really great :giggle:.
 
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I used to trigger this event several time, don't know how. I think you need to wear collar and walk around home location and mansions but thast not clear. Besides I very liked this event, hope there will be more =)

By the way, doesnt anyone meet pig in game? Just seen anim for it in files )
I've been walking around collared for ages in these zones while getting my Skullduggery up, no dice so far. Maybe I'm just unlucky, or it only happens at night between certain hours where my toon is hiding in her bed.

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Vrelnir

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Yeah, I opened the game in Twine to have a looksee some time ago, and I believe you. Quite the complicated project. But for what I've seen while playing, most options need either high Promiscuity or Deviancy, so players only have to make a slut run to see most of the options. I can't recall any other hidden option needing another stat off the top of my head.

BTW, how does one trigger the Street Collar Dog event, or something like that? I think it's the only one I haven't seen. I've been walking around collared, but to no avail so far.
Street Collar Dog is one of two collared events that can trigger only at night.
Hi!
i like very much the game!
I don't know if anyone think about that or only me. (he he). You can call it a fetish ;)
In the combat scene i like to read details like " he pulls down the panties..." and see it in the image the mc with panties down! Crazy me but i really enjoy that kind of thing in the games, but i don't know many games with that detail (text/img)
so can you advise more titles with it? Thank you!
I'm glad you like the game. I can't think of any others that work quite like that off the top of my head. I'd be interested in knowing too.
@Vrelnir what happens when the parasite stucks on my shota penis character in my game, does the penis will grow longer or it is just keep on more stimulating???
They just stimulate you for now. Different penis sizes is something I'm thinking about though, and that'll be a natural place to put a growth effect.
@Vrelnir

For the bully, will they become more possessive/less inclined to sell you or tie you to the pole if you have high love?
Will sex toys be added for masturbation and rare occasions during molestations? Maybe public uses of vibes under clothes?

Also,
What is the benefit of the different transformations?
Whitney becomes more possessive for sure. They still sell you though, if their dominance is high. Sex toys are planned.

The wolf transformation makes defiance increase over time and your bites stronger.
Angel gives you the "forgive" action, which is one of the strongest ways to keep trauma from building up.
Fallen angel gives little, but unlocks a scene at the temple.
Succubus/incubus makes internal cumshots soothe you, lowering trauma. Stress and pain instead if the encounter is with tentacles.
They all increase attractiveness and allure.
If you have disabled "transformations" and "wolf transformations", is there a point in living with the pack of wolves? The subplot goes somewhere, or it's just being fucked by them?
Progress there isn't gated by the wolf transformation. Once you take over the pack you can start leading them against hunters for money.
One critique that I feel probably isn't completely warranted is that the sex scenes get a bit repetetive. Some of it's just that once you pick an option there isn't much to do but select your options and click away. (of course if there's a bunch more scenes that just aren't in cause it's in alpha this is a complete non issue. The system is robust enouhg with enough written description to make it interesting)
The sex scenes could be made more dynamic. There's 30+ unique lines the PC can say while pleading, but it's nowhere near enough. Particularly as they're contextual. It's good that there are unique lines for riding someone with your butt, but if you're doing that a lot you're gonna see the same few lines over and over. More text will improve variety and could take into account more factors, but the way lines are chosen could be improved too.

Beyond the early game you can kinda predict how each encounter will play out from the start. I think that's the main contributor to the feeling of repetitiveness. Improvements to the combat/sex system are planned. I do sprinkle in lewd scenes that don't involve the sex system here and there, though I keep them simple and non-penetrative.
This game causes me contradictory feelings :p:cautious:. In one side, I find really interesting and good things in it. In the other side, it pisses me off a little that the game could be way better, as I have said in my review. I have been playing it for several hours, and, even if I'm still curious about what happen with the MC :unsure:, the fun and interest of the first hour have disappeared since the game has become mechanic and repetitive :sleep:.

I would like to ask the dev, since he's kind enough to participate in this forum :), about his future projects. If I´m not in a wrong, this is his first game, and I think that, with more experience, this dev could make something really good. For example, this very sandbox game with some decent images, some modifications for being less "flamboyant" and a bit more realistic, and the MC and main NPCs being more elaborated and less generic or even randomly generated, would be something really great :giggle:.
I should hope the game can be better, else all the time I intend to spend developing it will be wasted! :p

I have no hard plans for anything after DoL, though I'm considering starting something small to work on for a few hours a week. I've heard that helps avoid burnout. Anything I make is unlikely to be fully realistic though, or I wouldn't be able to get tentacles in. That said, I try to keep things somewhat grounded.

NPCs are too similar at the moment. They don't differ mechanically outside their genitals and starting trust/anger. I'd like them to have different physical characteristics at some point, along with personality traits that'll effect how combat plays out. Randomly chosen traits and such will probably suffice for the generic NPCs you meet.
 

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Would be great to get pregnant the MC if she is female or any og the NPC who have vagina
The former basically amounts to Nonstandard Game Over unless you're assuming magically hyper-accelerated, easy and convenient pregnancy times and childbirths you know... or grisly back-alley abortions and I'm pretty sure none of us wants to go there. :sick:
Also given the nature of the setting GLHF looking after the offspring...

Impregnation/pregnancy fetish is fine and all but really shouldn't be shoehorned into contexts where it requires gross handwaving to not produce distinctly unsexy results. :/
 
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The former basically amounts to Nonstandard Game Over unless you're assuming magically hyper-accelerated, easy and convenient pregnancy times and childbirths you know... or grisly back-alley abortions and I'm pretty sure none of us wants to go there. :sick:
Also given the nature of the setting GLHF looking after the offspring...

Impregnation/pregnancy fetish is fine and all but really shouldn't be shoehorned into contexts where it requires gross handwaving to not produce distinctly unsexy results. :/
You are correct in everything. But if you can became an angel, a werewolf or an incubbus, to reduce the time for childbirth sounds reasonable. And about the offspring... you are living in an orphanage. If the MC thinks is a good place for themselves, It should be a good place for their kids.
 

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"A good place for their kids." Er. Are we playing the same game? The very orphanage you reside in is run by a slaving, vile, p.o.s. that will not hesitate in the slightest to sell children off for sex trafficking or worse. The school is in little better shape.

The police are backlogged on cases and have run out of fucks to give, and the hospital just runs increasingly invasive experiments.

The desire for pregnancy content is all fine and well, but given that two pre-adults can barely take care of themselves (protag and Robin), the odds of being able to attend to the needs of a defenseless being alongside their own survival is.. slim. As dark as the scenario can get, being saddled with child atm is probably one of the bleakest yet.

Personally, I'd prefer to see the world, characters, and lore develop a bit more first. Perhaps then at some point taking care of a kid, or even handing it off- could then be a viable prospect. But hey, everybody plays/sees games differently.
 

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This is a game in which you can get eaten by a whale and wake up later none the worse for wear. The concerns about "how does babby survive" ring hollow.
The local whales being magic or something does little to make the environment the protagonist actually lives in any more conductive to even keeping their hypothetical infant offspring alive and unkidnapped/uneaten/unsold/un-something-else-awful. Shit, good luck just making ends meet once you hit the stage of pregnancy where your physical activities start getting seriously impaired.
 
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The local whales being magic or something does little to make the environment the protagonist actually lives in any more conductive to even keeping their hypothetical infant offspring alive and unkidnapped/uneaten/unsold/un-something-else-awful. Shit, good luck just making ends meet once you hit the stage of pregnancy where your physical activities start getting seriously impaired.
It's not just the "magic whales." This is a game where your health is measured in stress, trauma, and pain. You don't need to eat, you don't need to drink, you don't even really need to sleep. Why would you make an issue of it any more than you make an issue of not needing to poop. Your only argument is that it creates unsexy results because you want it to create unsexy results.
 
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It's not just the "magic whales." This is a game where your health is measured in stress, trauma, and pain. You don't need to eat, you don't need to drink, you don't even really need to sleep. Why would you make an issue of it any more than you make an issue of not needing to poop. Your only argument is that it creates unsexy results because you want it to create unsexy results.
Most games handle basic "life support" - eating etc. - as implied background noise for the rather obvious reason that those'd be a really fucking tedious chore if you had to take care of them manually, so that's not much of an argument.

And the place certainly is crawling with amoral sexual predators, slavers and other such nice people regardless. Last I checked one of those fucks was your de facto landlord too; what could possibly go wrong when you need to leave babby at home when you go out to Do Stuff...? :rolleyes:
 
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And the place certainly is crawling with amoral sexual predators, slavers and other such nice people regardless. Last I checked one of those fucks was your de facto landlord too; what could possibly go wrong when you need to leave babby at home when you go out to Do Stuff...? :rolleyes:
Right, because blackmail exists in porn games so that unsexy things can happen.:rolleyes:
 

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I should hope the game can be better, else all the time I intend to spend developing it will be wasted! :p
You are not wasting your time. Even if I think this is a 3 stars game (well... 3 and a half) and not a 5 one, this is not a bad game at all and I´m sure it will be better. And you seem to be pretty good at accepting criticism, so, congratulations for that.

Have you played "Celeste Blake, The Envindium Affair"? A text based and sandbox game with multiple choices, well designed characters, events that are not too repetitive and well developed, and decent quality images. Obviously I'm not comparing your game with that one. That would be rude :). Just saying that, if you don't already know that game, I think you could enjoy it and find some ideas :).
 
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Great game so far! Somewhere between Lust Doll, Trap Quest and Flexible Survival with everyone after that sweet ass. Very unique use of animations and there is a lot of content for being this far along.

The only criticism I'd give is the "combat" system is a little clunky with all the options displayed. Maybe a menu tree that expands based on which characteristic you employ? Will there be a pregnancy system added in eventually? I feel like this is begging for it with the animations, something akin to Violated Heroine.

Very underrated game, keep piling on the content and I'm sure you'll see five stars in no time! Great job dev!
 
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