DickoNicko
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- May 7, 2019
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Interesting how everybody has different "clicks". In my case, I don't have a problem with the sharing route because it's optional and even sharing she seems to respect MC. The thing that rubbed me the wrong way was this line: "She's trying to play tough, but it may have been the workout of her lifetime..." With a character that's as alpha as MC according to the story, that came out kinda weird, plus she pointing out how this time was different (she not being in control but just used) didn't help much and gave me the "he may be slowly losing her" vibe. Maybe I'm overthinking it. Anyway, I like the story so far.