First-time game-developer mistakes, quite common. Drive, technical proficiency enough to develop a game, but little experience. Give'em time.
Crumbbum, I'd recommend the following books (
strictly for game design) if you're curious:
- The Art of Game Design: A Book of Lenses < Awesome, all around awesomeness. I found this one most helpful.
- Level Up! The Guide to Great Video Game Design < “Industry Great” and I agree.
- Video Game Storytelling: What Every Developer Needs to Know about Narrative Techniques < So-so.
- Fundamentals of Game Design <Useful bits but I don't like the approach in many areas.
I've heard this is okay, but I cannot vouch for it myself:
None of those include anything relating to game
story development, really, they are strictly for development.