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max_z_smith

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Good start. A few bugs (\tl\English\day1_2_3.rpy, line 247 has a slash that shouldn't be there at the start of the line {/i} -> {i}.
Also a few places where we get spanish options even when I'm on english. But otherwise it's an interesting story, eager to see what comes from it.
 
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lemirent

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Overall, the visuals are okay. There is something strange going on with the characters’ teeth, so I was kind of distracted by that in some scenes, but okay. I think that some characters could be more sexy, but this is just a thing of tastes. There is definitely room for improvement, and sometimes it seems like the proportions are a bit off too. However, the game is animated, and I liked that, so you can also enjoy that while playing.

 

Adramme

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The mother should make out with her daughter in the last scene. but no nothing...
I wanted something. Now i'm angry
 
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Hunscs7

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Two untranslated lines and one incorrect syntax around [/i] aside, this is some really good stuff
 
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There have been a couple of lines that have not been translated from Spanish to English, including one that breaks the script because of a closing "{i}" tag that doesn't have an opening (the start of the line is another {\i} tag).

In
Code:
# game/day1_2_3.rpy:72
translate English day1_2_3_7b64abe9:

    # mc "{i}(Fui un idiota en sentirme \"especial\" porque me mostraste eso a mí, pero seguro lo debes hacer con todos.){/i}"
    mc "{i}(I was an idiot to feel \"special\" because you showed that to me, but surely you must do it to everyone.){/i}"
I had to change the line myself.
 

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Diary of My Perversion [v0.2] [Neytan]

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Vualen

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Looks really nice, but there is need more work on animations as they aren't smooth. Also I would like to hear some sounds and moans during scenes ;)(y)
 

bamachine

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Like the different possible LIs. I like variety and also not the same cookie cutter models. That said, needs some serious proofreading. Several syntax errors and many lines still in Spanish, on the English script.
 
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3.70 star(s) 9 Votes