VN Ren'Py Abandoned Dr. Amana, Sexual Therapist [v2.0.0P] [Ianvs]

[dorleans]

Well, tbf, as I'm fapping while the writing is particularly good, I'll grunt "Brav--ohhh! unnnghhh! B-B-Bravv-ohhhh Auuuteur!" as my monocle gets foggy. It's hard to clap one-handed but fortunately the fap sounds like rigorous applause anyway.

Quite a lot of foggy monocles for Roman's work, I must say. He's the best.

fwiw, only partially joking. I seriously can't fap to bad writing unless the game design and art are both incredible enough to make up for it. I drag most F95 games into the trash after 5 minutes since the writing is so bad. My suspension of disbelief threshold is incredibly low and I need good enough writing to feel engaged in any AVN or it just doesn't do it for me. Roman's writing is the best I've seen in any adult game, so he really is skilled vs what's out there in AVNs & videogames in general.

I've always been willing to do a lot of the... call it imaginitive/stylistic heavy lifting for the writing in my preferred genres. I can read endless series of shitty kindle unlimited sci-fi if I find something intriguing about the premise/universe. For porn games I basically just need the English to be not broken beyond my ability to repair, and by this point I can do a pretty impressive degree of automatic mental substitution on the fly. I'll sometimes remember a different, literate version of the text, and have the actual version come as an unpleasant surprise on replay.

So the writing basically has to be borderline incomprehensible to fall below my standards of enjoyment.

That said, it's actually kind of shocking how many porn games there are with genuinely good writing. The number really has no business being anything not statistically indistinguishable from zero, but even once you get past that there's more than you'd expect. And not necessarily where you'd expect. It was one of the weirdest surprises of my life, going to jerk off only to find myself somehow weeping at something from a game called My Bully is My Lover, of all fucking things.

 

[dontcarewhateverno]

That said, it's actually kind of shocking how many porn games there are with genuinely good writing. Well, the number really has no business being anything not statistically indistinguishable from zero, but even once you get past that there's more than you'd expect. And not necessarily where you'd expect. It was one of the weirdest surprises of my life, going to jerk off only to find myself somehow weeping at something in game called My Bully is My Lover of all fucking things.

I'm just imagining in the days of adult movie theaters, before the advent of VCRs, if there were such a well-made porn that all the skeezy loners fapping covertly in the dark start blowing their nose with a hanky in their free hand, just absolutely sobbing by the end of the film. "It was - it was so beautiful" *Honk* fapfapfapfap *honk*

What other games are well-written? I can honestly say that I think the vast majority of AVNs are awful to mediocre in the writing department. Even most of the ones considered top-of-the-top by others. But my standards are apparently high.

Best of the best to me writing-wise are this game from Roman, Tabletop Born-Star and the abandoned HTML game Casting Director. Basilicata's (Tabletop pornstar dev) first game starts off uneven but gets better in writing too. TBH, unless you're talking comedy, where the standards of what makes writing "good" are different, that's it.

I think EvaKiss games are fantastic vs what's out there, but that's due to her talent for erotic build-up and her plethora of choice-after-choice-after-choice. Her writing is good enough for my porn-game standards (admittedly high for drama-based AVNs), but by no means good tv or novel quality, and not touching Telltale Games' best work on the video-game end where good writing is few and far between. (TWD Season 1, A Wolf Among Us, Tales From The Borderlands were all cream of the crop there, vs some other games I'd ignore). I say in my review of DAST on F95 that I could see Roman getting to that good quality Telltale level as the game develops - which is basically good tv/film quality - and I think Basilicata and the dude who abandoned Casting Director can potentially get to that Telltale level too.

I'll check MBIML and some others out you think are best-of-the-best though if you have any other suggestions.

 

[kaczy091]

For me, the maid was the hottest and sexy of all, it was better to add, for example, a wife, a daughter and one friend to a maximum of 3/4 characters, and create relationships like . with master/slave maid. You can make your wife a jealous wife, your daughter a typical romantic character. It would be cool . And you don't give 10 characters and then wait forever for your character in the next update, and at the end everything was interrupted. The more girls doesn't mean it's better. I prefer to focus on 3/4 and have frequent updates with them.

 

[rakeshraj116]

For me, the maid was the hottest and sexy of all, it was better to add, for example, a wife, a daughter and one friend to a maximum of 3/4 characters, and create relationships like . with master/slave maid. You can make your wife a jealous wife, your daughter a typical romantic character. It would be cool . And you don't give 10 characters and then wait forever for your character in the next update, and at the end everything was interrupted. The more girls doesn't mean it's better. I prefer to focus on 3/4 and have frequent updates with them.

Lupita is the hottest maid

 

[kaczy091]

Lupita is the hottest maid

Yes, but due to the appearance of the game, it had too many characters, so we got 2 scenes with a maid, someone, for example, thinks that another character is sexy, will also get 2 scenes, too many characters for so few updates

 

[Firaxius]

Very nice VN, love how you could choose who you want and who not, how you like to play and all, the story wasn't bad either, infact it was very decent. It sad to see this abandoned, I really wanted to see more and least hope to get a real ending. The renders were also amazing and the characters were very beautiful.

Anyone have an idea if there more of these kinda games out there or any continuation of this one?

 

[a1fox3]

Very nice VN, love how you could choose who you want and who not, how you like to play and all, the story wasn't bad either, infact it was very decent. It sad to see this abandoned, I really wanted to see more and least hope to get a real ending. The renders were also amazing and the characters were very beautiful.

Anyone have an idea if there more of these kinda games out there or any continuation of this one?

I have not tried it yet but this looks like it maybe being redone with a new name.

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i also forgot, expect everything to change.
the name of the game, the story, the backstories.
just look at this as a brand new game with familiar characters.
the spiritual successor of Dr. Amana if you will.

The new game: https://f95zone.to/threads/love-lust-lunacy-v1-0-1-meep.175521/

 

[Maviarab]

I have not tried it yet but this looks like it maybe being redone with a new name.

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i also forgot, expect everything to change.
the name of the game, the story, the backstories.
just look at this as a brand new game with familiar characters.
the spiritual successor of Dr. Amana if you will.

The new game: https://f95zone.to/threads/love-lust-lunacy-v1-0-1-meep.175521/

It's probably also already abandoned at this point too.

 

[Firaxius]

I have not tried it yet but this looks like it maybe being redone with a new name.

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i also forgot, expect everything to change.
the name of the game, the story, the backstories.
just look at this as a brand new game with familiar characters.
the spiritual successor of Dr. Amana if you will.

The new game: https://f95zone.to/threads/love-lust-lunacy-v1-0-1-meep.175521/

I seen the new game but not sure yet where that one is going, part I liked in this game is when you go for other girls and neglect your wife she also went seeking fun in other waters. I like in some good games somewhat Netorare, Netorase and Netori, but aslong it not forced and can be avoided if want avoid it.

 

[fhenrir]

So version 2.0.0 is literally only you choosing the settings and then nothing happens??

 

[Samuel Hidayat]

So version 2.0.0 is literally only you choosing the settings and then nothing happens??

No, there's a full episode with the "neighbor's daughter".

 

[-CookieMonster666-]

Very nice VN, love how you could choose who you want and who not, how you like to play and all, the story wasn't bad either, infact it was very decent. It sad to see this abandoned, I really wanted to see more and least hope to get a real ending. The renders were also amazing and the characters were very beautiful.

Anyone have an idea if there more of these kinda games out there or any continuation of this one?

FFR, if you're going to ask for similar games it should be over on the Recommendations and Identification forum, specifically set up for that purpose (see Site Rule #2.4). Asking about a continuation (or the new game, Lust, Love and Lunacy) is fine, since it's a project supporting the same dev — RomanHume is writer for the updated game — and redoing this game (a lot, like a1fox3 mentioned), especially since what you've played from this thread will not be finished.

 

[Maviarab]

FFR, if you're going to ask for similar games it should be over on the Recommendations and Identification forum, specifically set up for that purpose (see Site Rule #2.4). Asking about a continuation (or the new game, Lust, Love and Lunacy) is fine, since it's a project supporting the same dev — RomanHume is writer for the updated game — and redoing this game (a lot, like a1fox3 mentioned), especially since what you've played from this thread will not be finished.

Roman is not involved in the new (probably already abandoned) game at all..nor is he the writer for it.

How many times must this be said. Meep has said herself, on that thread and on Patreon she is just reusing the assets Roman gave her....it's a new story (hers).

 

[-CookieMonster666-]

Roman is not involved in the new (probably already abandoned) game at all..nor is he the writer for it.

How many times must this be said. Meep has said herself, on that thread and on Patreon she is just reusing the assets Roman gave her....it's a new story (hers).

That changed, then? https://f95zone.to/threads/love-lust-lunacy-v1-0-1-meep.175521/post-11780576 — she literally says he's doing dialogue.

To be fair, I did ask him in the beginning of Meep taking over if he was going to be involved. He replied writing would still be his.

But it does seem old version, new version and new game are all abandoned.

That's the last that I remember as well. I haven't been following the thread for the new game very closely, though, honestly.

 

[Ayhsel]

Roman is not involved in the new (probably already abandoned) game at all..nor is he the writer for it.

How many times must this be said. Meep has said herself, on that thread and on Patreon she is just reusing the assets Roman gave her....it's a new story (hers).

To be fair, I did ask him in the beginning of Meep taking over if he was going to be involved. He replied writing would still be his.

But it does seem old version, new version and new game are all abandoned.

 

[dontcarewhateverno]

Can also confirm that the actual scene descriptions and dialogue are still his. From what was posted previously, Meep decides the plot and what each character does. But Roman writes the actual text. Noted from playing the small teaser that the dialogue/scene descriptions are still Roman quality and the graphics, poses and facial expressions were actually quite good (the part Meep does). Though I'll miss the old plotline and the character's looks, what little I saw looked well done.

 

[SerHawkes]

Ah shame this died. Had so much potential to be really good. RIP.

 

[dontcarewhateverno]

Ah shame this died. Had so much potential to be really good. RIP.

Would've been the best AVN on the site IMO.

 

[SerHawkes]

Would've been the best AVN on the site IMO.

It certainly would have been up there. Specially with best girl Jane involved.

 

[-CookieMonster666-]

It certainly would have been up there. Specially with best girl Jane involved.

She wasn't my favorite, but I only distinguish by like 0.05 percentage points between most of the girls. I absolutely loved her.