Hello.
As always, you did great Arufuredo. It was very nice with lots of similarities with Hermano's side. I wasn't that much interested in Bernard "Bearnie" (what a cute nickname) with what we saw at university but you made him very sweet there (plus the wild part was well integrated and not overboard). We can guess the sunset this time (so the luminosity of the swimming pool scene is done better). The scene with Ray was lovely and amusing. Pippo's scene was very funny (though it leads to a very serious discussion). The revelation was more smooth this time. The references when he wakes up made me come back in time (the shirt with Les Bisounours/The Care Bears/Gli Orsetti del Cuore and Charmed). Everything resonated with me since I'm shy and nostalgic (yeah, it was better when I wasn't aware of how useless I am...).
I was expecting Ethan would lick his ear or kiss his neck when he was behind him (they were saying they couldn't kiss like that so he could have done that instead).
I had to skip the spanking scene since it's not my thing, though it was rather soft (but don't mind me if you want to include more, I'll just have to skip it).
My only problem was when Ray was cooking the salmon steaks. Not seeing his head was strange (like it could be somebody else, a robot, a puppet or a killer who took his place like in Terminator 2).
You forgot a sentence in italian in the english version :
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Good continuation.