Ren'Py Everything Changes! [v2.5] [Arufuredo]

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Arufuredo

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Hello. The discord link on the itch.io page does not seem to be working.
Will there be an update soon?

occasionally the link expires. I’m sorry :D
in any case... I started to review some parts of what I did to align them, and then I will start writing and rendering soon, let’s say that the next update will not be very early but I think in 20 days or a month, should come out if everything goes well!. :D
sorry I had to do a remodel in the house and I still haven’t finished, but hopefully within 5 days I should be done.. I did wrong calculations on housework :)
 
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Ciao!
Volevo solo dirti che stai facendo un fantastico lavoro con questa visual novel e che è una tra le poche che riesce ad eccitarmi e a farmi ridere contemporaneamente!
Sicuramente può essere perfezionata sotto alcuni aspetti, ma preferisco solo farti complimenti dato che di critiche ne hai avute anche fin troppe ahahahah
Spero che continuerai con questo lavoro perché, sul serio, è davvero stupendo! ❤
 
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Ciao!
Volevo solo dirti che stai facendo un fantastico lavoro con questa visual novel e che è una tra le poche che riesce ad eccitarmi e a farmi ridere contemporaneamente!
Sicuramente può essere perfezionata sotto alcuni aspetti, ma preferisco solo farti complimenti dato che di critiche ne hai avute anche fin troppe ahahahah
Spero che continuerai con questo lavoro perché, sul serio, è davvero stupendo! ❤
Ciao e grazie per i complimenti... il mio intento è quello di eccitarvi e farvi divertire... quindi sono contento che ci sono riuscito, per quanto riguarda il perfezionamento hai perfettamente ragione, ma devo dire che alcuni perfezionamenti sono costosissimi in ambito di tempo... ma sarei contentissimo di sentire le critiche, purchè siano costruttive e mi aiutano a migliorarmi o a migliorare la vn, ma spesso le critiche mi vengono fatti per gusti personali... il che vuol dire che purtroppo non posso incontrare i gusti di tutti. Ma mi piacerebbe davvero sentire anche la parte critica :D grazie mille ancora per i complimenti
 
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Ciao e grazie per i complimenti... il mio intento è quello di eccitarvi e farvi divertire... quindi sono contento che ci sono riuscito, per quanto riguarda il perfezionamento hai perfettamente ragione, ma devo dire che alcuni perfezionamenti sono costosissimi in ambito di tempo... ma sarei contentissimo di sentire le critiche, purchè siano costruttive e mi aiutano a migliorarmi o a migliorare la vn, ma spesso le critiche mi vengono fatti per gusti personali... il che vuol dire che purtroppo non posso incontrare i gusti di tutti. Ma mi piacerebbe davvero sentire anche la parte critica :D grazie mille ancora per i complimenti
L'unica cosa su cui ho da ridire riguarda la forma della scrittura in generale: ci sono alcuni errori grammaticali; qualche tempo verbale non coerente con l'azione, ma, tutto sommato, nulla di grave.
Quanto alla trama, a me piace, ho capito l'idea di fondo e non ho critiche al riguardo.
Per quanto riguarda la scelta del font e del colore dei sottotitoli, alcune volte, in alcune scene, sono poco leggibili perché spesso escono fuori dallo schermo (non so se è solo un problema mio o di tutti), quindi magari potresti provare ad usare una dimensione più piccola o a scrivere frasi più brevi.
Per il resto, davvero, è un ottimo lavoro e mi piace tantissimo!
Continua così! ❤
 
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L'unica cosa su cui ho da ridire riguarda la forma della scrittura in generale: ci sono alcuni errori grammaticali; qualche tempo verbale non coerente con l'azione, ma, tutto sommato, nulla di grave.
Quanto alla trama, a me piace, ho capito l'idea di fondo e non ho critiche al riguardo.
Per quanto riguarda la scelta del font e del colore dei sottotitoli, alcune volte, in alcune scene, sono poco leggibili perché spesso escono fuori dallo schermo (non so se è solo un problema mio o di tutti), quindi magari potresti provare ad usare una dimensione più piccola o a scrivere frasi più brevi.
Per il resto, davvero, è un ottimo lavoro e mi piace tantissimo!
Continua così! ❤
per quanto riguarda gli errori grammaticali... ti prego segnalameli! anche i verbi sbagliati! a volte subentrano le dialettiche o leggi frasi molte volte senza vedere un errore madornale... quindi ti prego segnalameli ne sarei felicissimo. per i sottotitoli ok! provero a ridurlo ancora un pò... anche se l'ho già fatto nella versione che a breve pubblicherò... quindi magari dammi un secondo parere quando giocherai alla prossima versione così mi dici per la grandezza... per quanto riguarda il font dici che è poco leggibile? nel senso pensi ci siano problemi di lettura sbagliata dei caratteri?
Grazie ancora molte :D
 
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per quanto riguarda gli errori grammaticali... ti prego segnalameli! anche i verbi sbagliati! a volte subentrano le dialettiche o leggi frasi molte volte senza vedere un errore madornale... quindi ti prego segnalameli ne sarei felicissimo. per i sottotitoli ok! provero a ridurlo ancora un pò... anche se l'ho già fatto nella versione che a breve pubblicherò... quindi magari dammi un secondo parere quando giocherai alla prossima versione così mi dici per la grandezza... per quanto riguarda il font dici che è poco leggibile? nel senso pensi ci siano problemi di lettura sbagliata dei caratteri?
Grazie ancora molte :D
Giocherò alla prossima versione non appena la pubblichi, così provo a segnalarti qualche errore!
Quanto all'incomprensione del font, intendo dire che, a volte, la frase esce fuori dallo schermo.
Dovresti provare a mandare a capo la seconda parte della frase, penso.
 

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Giocherò alla prossima versione non appena la pubblichi, così provo a segnalarti qualche errore!
Quanto all'incomprensione del font, intendo dire che, a volte, la frase esce fuori dallo schermo.
Dovresti provare a mandare a capo la seconda parte della frase, penso.
si devo dire che a volte sono un casino in questo... ma come ti ho detto ho rimpicciolito il carattere quindi dovrebbe entrare tutto nella casella di testo nella prossima update a cui giocherai.
Fammi sapere poi quando ci giocherai :D
 
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Oh bene, sei riuscito a sistemare il font... ottimo.

Oh, you fixed the font size... great.
 

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Will there ever be a character that doesn't look like he works out 22 hours a day that is datable?
Hi :D
one of the professors would say that he does not train 22 hours at all! :D
and for him there will be an affective interest etc.
while there will be random some sexual encounter with those who are not bodybuilded but a thin tonic physique
 
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Hello.

Arufuredo, marry me.

More importantly, you've done another great update. There's more serious conversations than usual, though it's necessary to advance the story. The sex scenes were really well done : a good balance between preliminaries and fucking. The new power, more psychological than usual, is also a great new asset to develop the plot further. Still doing a good job with the humor (the vegetables particularly and the delivery man, though it could be awful, was a good diversion from what was happening).

There was not a single choice this time, not like it's a bad thing but there's usuallly something to keep us invested in how the flow is delivered (there was something on Sam's route last time too).
I'm not sure about the colors and places where you made the zoom appear when you want to enlarge a specific body part (I felt it was more like an horror movie where the body parts are separated, sorry).
Be careful when you do transitions : in the rimming scene, when you go from Ethan's face to his ass and vice versa, sometimes we can still see his hole around the neck, which is off putting.
I'm not a fan of the internal view but you made it correctly.

On another note, after witnessing the barn scene between Ray and Sam, I hope you can make Sam change his mind in case a player wants to pursue an exclusive path with Ray.

Good continuation.
 
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Hello.

Arufuredo, marry me.

More importantly, you've done another great update. There's more serious conversations than usual, though it's necessary to advance the story. The sex scenes were really well done : a good balance between preliminaries and fucking. The new power, more psychological than usual, is also a great new asset to develop the plot further. Still doing a good job with the humor (the vegetables particularly and the delivery man, though it could be awful, was a good diversion from what was happening).

There was not a single choice this time, not like it's a bad thing but there's usuallly something to keep us invested in how the flow is delivered (there was something on Sam's route last time too).
I'm not sure about the colors and places where you made the zoom appear when you want to enlarge a specific body part (I felt it was more like an horror movie where the body parts are separated, sorry).
Be careful when you do transitions : in the rimming scene, when you go from Ethan's face to his ass and vice versa, sometimes we can still see his hole around the neck, which is off putting.
I'm not a fan of the internal view but you made it correctly.

On another note, after witnessing the barn scene between Ray and Sam, I hope you can make Sam change his mind in case a player wants to pursue an exclusive path with Ray.

Good continuation.
hi Oliz,
- you can explain to me better this part that I didn’t quite understand what you mean... ---> There was not a single choice this time, not like it's a bad thing but there's usuallly something to keep us invested in how the flow is delivered (there was something on Sam's route last time too).
- for the transitions... I did not realize that the ass went on the neck... you made me laugh! D you think they must be faster?

for now I will continue the path of Ray and Sam together...
because the story has to go on and other characters will come and the fantasy part will come out even more,
but I had to unite them to write just a path for a while... then maybe for the sex scenes I’ll make choices, many things I had decided from the beginning of the game but I didn’t realize the complexity of having too many paths, especially because compared to other games there are many images and changes of facial expressions, while many games for a picture write a whole book, but what I just said was not to make comparisons was more than anything else to make you understand the complexity of carrying on too many routes, I would have slowed the story by a lot and this is also the reason why there were no choices in the latest updates! I’m taking Ethan to have a relationship with everyone... where he can if he wants to go with whoever he wants... then it’s up to you to send him with one character or another, whether it’s sexually or spending time together, Then I’ll move on with the story and then the endings will be based on your choices that you made.

About your marriage proposal... wow! what made you think that? humor? my mind to see things? or what?
Thanks for the compliments :D :*
 
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Oliz82

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Hello.

hi Oliz,
- you can explain to me better this part that I didn’t quite understand what you mean... ---> There was not a single choice this time, not like it's a bad thing but there's usuallly something to keep us invested in how the flow is delivered (there was something on Sam's route last time too).
When I talk about choice, I'm talking about this :
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This one is from last update.
So this time, there was not a single one. I was watching everything happening like in a film. Since it was unusual for you, I just wanted to make you realize it.
And as for the "it's not a bad thing", sometimes it's better not to have a choice than having a meaningless one. I don't even have any idea of what choice you could have included this time.
For "there's usuallly something to keep us invested in how the flow is delivered", that's what makes a game. If there's no choice, it's a pure VN. And I can lose interest if I have no influence over a game, even if it's minimal.
I know I'm bad at making myself understood so I hope I'm more clear.

- for the transitions... I did not realize that the ass went on the neck... you made me laugh! D you think they must be faster?
I don't know about the process, so I can't say that much but the image that is disappearing shouldn't be that much visible when the new one is appearing (it's like leaving a finger when we take a photo). I didn't observe it before so it was strange and I wanted to let you know.

for now I will continue the path of Ray and Sam together...
because the story has to go on and other characters will come and the fantasy part will come out even more,
but I had to unite them to write just a path for a while... then maybe for the sex scenes I’ll make choices, many things I had decided from the beginning of the game but I didn’t realize the complexity of having too many paths, especially because compared to other games there are many images and changes of facial expressions, while many games for a picture write a whole book, but what I just said was not to make comparisons was more than anything else to make you understand the complexity of carrying on too many routes, I would have slowed the story by a lot and this is also the reason why there were no choices in the latest updates! I’m taking Ethan to have a relationship with everyone... where he can if he wants to go with whoever he wants... then it’s up to you to send him with one character or another, whether it’s sexually or spending time together, Then I’ll move on with the story and then the endings will be based on your choices that you made.
It wasn't a reproach. I was just hoping his decision could be changed.
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And evidently, I don't want it to happen either.

Also, I'm happy you want Ethan to have a relationship with everyone. You wanted him to be more exclusive before, that's why the relationship of three (Ethan/Ray/Sam) wasn't that much obvious. Though I don't know how you'll be able to include others (the same goes for the other way around if he starts exploring at school) because when you love someone, you want to spend most of your time with him(/her), leaving little room to others.
Though in the end, he has to chose with whom he wants to stay. Or is there a possibility of a harem in the long term?

About your marriage proposal... wow! what made you think that? humor? my mind to see things? or what?
Thanks for the compliments :D :*
Yeah, it was a joke but you've shown enough of your qualities through your game and your answers that I know you'll definitely make a good husband ;).

Good continuation.
 
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