Hello.
Arufuredo, you've surpassed yourself this time.
It's difficult to really assess this update. Too many important informations to digest (like Ethan has to), some references I didn't get, some pranks I couldn't appreciate (well, things done behind the back are sure to have the opposite effect, like the pranks on Uncle Ray and Sam in the kitchen or the egg in the ass, in which I'm more sad or angry than amused, sorry). Also, why many devs like to end their updates on cliffhangers?
All in all, it was good but different.
Some remarks :
When Ethan and his father were having this serious discusion on the bed about their original world, the smiling face of Ethan made him look like an idiot.
The eyes of the father when they were lying on the bed to fall asleep felt weird, like he was staring into space.
Also, you made him look very young. I don't know the specifics of the other world but it feels like they are less than 10 years apart.
And you forgot a sentence in italian in the english version :
Good continuation.
Arufuredo, you've surpassed yourself this time.
It's difficult to really assess this update. Too many important informations to digest (like Ethan has to), some references I didn't get, some pranks I couldn't appreciate (well, things done behind the back are sure to have the opposite effect, like the pranks on Uncle Ray and Sam in the kitchen or the egg in the ass, in which I'm more sad or angry than amused, sorry). Also, why many devs like to end their updates on cliffhangers?
All in all, it was good but different.
Some remarks :
When Ethan and his father were having this serious discusion on the bed about their original world, the smiling face of Ethan made him look like an idiot.
The eyes of the father when they were lying on the bed to fall asleep felt weird, like he was staring into space.
Also, you made him look very young. I don't know the specifics of the other world but it feels like they are less than 10 years apart.
And you forgot a sentence in italian in the english version :

Good continuation.