Ren'Py Abandoned Fall Fable [v0.4] [ProMorning]

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PrimeX

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What I think of the girls:

Maria: great body but let's be honest, she's fugly
Kait-Lynn: face like a tomato riddled with pimples, got preggy by someone else :(
Prisha: she's hot though a bitch, always pissed
Beverly: first half of a milf, cause she's a mother alright but I don't know about the rest
Kim: the best so far though I don't like that shaved head. What's up with that btw? Porn games and girls with shaved head?

Really looking forward to those two smoking milfs: the English teacher and Kevin's mom
 
Tataro

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PrimeX said:
What I think of the girls:

Maria: great body but let's be honest, she's fugly
Kait-Lynn: face like a tomato riddled with pimples, got preggy by someone else :(
Prisha: she's hot though a bitch, always pissed
Beverly: first half of a milf, cause she's a mother alright but I don't know about the rest
Kim: the best so far though I don't like that shaved head. What's up with that btw? Porn games and girls with shaved head?

Really looking forward to those two smoking milfs: the English teacher and Kevin's mom
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I actually like that about Kait-Lynn. She’s messy and faulty like a proper redneck. Think that makes her the hottest around. Dislike her being already pregnant tho
 
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Personally it's the other way around, I really like the idea of seducing a pregnant girl (unless you commit to a serious relationship and have to take care of the baby, though). It's very unique.
But I agree about the other points. In particular, not a fan of the neighbour's face and of the fat mother.
But in general, I think those faults make the characters maybe more realistic. So maybe it's not actually that bad of a thing.
 
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Just finished. For the most part I enjoyed the update, but I wasn't that thrilled to see incest added to the game. I liked the idea that the MC had a family he wasn't trying to fuck as it made the game unique. I also just don't find the mother attractive, sorry.
 
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Curious if we’ll be able to knock up any of the girls, or if our freckled redhead is the extent of the planned Preg content
 
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Not bad, but for my taste it needs a few more updates before it's fun. And yeah your "landlady" hope she looks better after gym workout ^^
 
Tataro

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Redhead won. Hurray. Could we possibly get a dev diary on what her story plans are for the next update and which girl you picked to go alongside her.
 
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Wow!
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"Oh my" indeed.

I haven't posted in a while due to being a bit... fed up.
But you actually made an actual mother.
I'm baffled.
It's like finding a unicorn.

The talent here is incredible.
And the absolute balls of this dev for making a woman that's some semblance of average (or even with human physique)...
She isn't a plastic 90s pornstar, or another sister, she has a midriff, her tits are believable for her body type, she looks like she gave birth, is 40ish...
And it looks like you're not shitting all over her character by making her the world's cum-dumpster.
If I stood and clapped for you, you wouldn't notice because your balls would be in the way.
That's right.
They're huge.
All for daring to make a realistic, believable mother.

I don't have a fat chick fetish, by the way.
I have a mother fetish somehow.
This is a mother: one of the VERY few.
She's isn't "perfect".
She isn't a plastic/10 "Milf."
It's immersive; and that's what makes it way hotter than the clown car.
Her character is also very believable: she's very real.
In terms of an average physique, she's a bit on the heftier side, but she's close to average.
So MC may need to hit the gym a bit more to be able to handle here in a way that makes her really feel young again.
But I'm looking forward to see him pin her and melt her into a puddle with his hammer of justice.

Impressive.
Your sack is enormous for outputting such quality with such a character.
Very well done.

It's also very good to see MC is ~10% taller than his mother.
So he's at least older than 14.

Some potential cons to keep in mind:
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This is mostly a personal or informative shitpost that may or may not be useful.
I trust the direction of this game.
 
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ProMorning

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Oh my said:
Wow!
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"Oh my" indeed.

I haven't posted in a while due to being a bit... fed up.
But you actually made an actual mother.
I'm baffled.
It's like finding a unicorn.

The talent here is incredible.
And the absolute balls of this dev for making a woman that's some semblance of average (or even with human physique)...
She isn't a plastic 90s pornstar, or another sister, she has a midriff, her tits are believable for her body type, she looks like she gave birth, is 40ish...
And it looks like you're not shitting all over her character by making her the world's cum-dumpster.
If I stood and clapped for you, you wouldn't notice because your balls would be in the way.
That's right.
They're huge.
All for daring to make a realistic, believable mother.

I don't have a fat chick fetish, by the way.
I have a mother fetish somehow.
This is a mother: one of the VERY few.
She's isn't "perfect".
She isn't a plastic/10 "Milf."
It's immersive; and that's what makes it way hotter than the clown car.
Her character is also very believable: she's very real.
In terms of an average physique, she's a bit on the heftier side, but she's close to average.
So MC may need to hit the gym a bit more to be able to handle here in a way that makes her really feel young again.
But I'm looking forward to see him pin her and melt her into a puddle with his hammer of justice.

Impressive.
Your sack is enormous for outputting such quality with such a character.
Very well done.

It's also very good to see MC is ~10% taller than his mother.
So he's at least older than 14.

Some potential cons to keep in mind:
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This is mostly a personal or informative shitpost that may or may not be useful.
I trust the direction of this game.
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Make no mistake, this is extremely useful. Any comments or criticism you guys make help me make the game the best I can make it, it shows me what can be worked on, what needs attention, and the areas I'm on the right track in. I often find myself re-reading many of the comments here that have given me very thoughtful criticism and suggestions, and I only hope that I can incorporate enough of them so that the game becomes the best it can be.
 
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MrFriendly

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ProMorning said:
Make no mistake, this is extremely useful. Any comments or criticism you guys make help me make the game the best I can make it, it shows me what can be worked on, what needs attention, and the areas I'm on the right track in. I often find myself re-reading many of the comments here that have given me very thoughtful criticism and suggestions, and I only hope that I can incorporate enough of them so that the game becomes the best it can be.
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Well, I love what you've done so far. Has it been said how far along Kait Lyn is into her pregnancy? She looks to be at the end of her second/beginning of her third (maybe?).

Also, the only thing I would wish for is a bit more detail on how to get what Kait Lyn wants to eat and maybe delivering it to her sooner than the next afternoon.

Oh and more fun with all the ladies... A lot more fun with ALL the ladies. I miss Maria... And I feel like we need more milfy time with all the milfs.

Keep up the great work!
 
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Gibberish666

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The hot freckled redhead is pregnant, and the MC ISN'T the father? What is this madness! :ROFLMAO:
The dev is very brave to follow through with this plot point.
It is not my cup of tea, but I will applaud the dev for their boldness.
 
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This game is awesome...its characters "feel natural" and IMHO they all have interesting features both in their look and in their attitude. Irony is good...the dev tried something new here and there...and it was quite fun. I love the mo...ehm...landlady, she seems "believable" (for a porn game, I mean) and I really appreciate that. There are a lot of other little things I like in this one...but, I am going to play it again in a couple of days just to focus more in the cons rather than in the pros. Good luck dev...
 
Mrs Delington

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Ok, I am back as a patron.

ProMorning , you have understood very well what I told you few months ago, about developing a story with this beautiful mother, letting us see this mommy more. In fact, you have done a lot more of what I thought you could do. I am just happy, and surprised. Her clothes are awesome, her wrinkles and strech marks are just perfect ! Now, I just wish that this sexy mommy will have a beautiful hairy big bush, as she deserves, and big nipples with large areolas ! Some teasing could be fun too, like her in lingerie in the morning in the middle of the kitchen, etc. I hope too that she will stay in the story, meaning that I want her to evolve with the MC, in each episode, until the end.

Your story is fun, with plenty of nice references. I like that.
MC dick is well done.
I like too the possibility to have many views from a scene, and without a pre-selected time for a scene. Its perfect to being able to watch a scene until we want to change. Don't change that please.

It's sure that many things could be improved, as in each VN, but I just want to be positive and let you know that I am back with my pledge.

Thanks a lot, and please, don't let us wait too long before the next release....that will include our prefered mom again !

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