VN Ren'Py Abandoned Family Again [v0.4.0] [F_Dot]

[AngelsAfterDark]

17-18 year old MC towards the end of the prologue.
32-33 year old MC in CH 1.

Man what happened? A new dev/writer took over the game or something? Or was all of that(the events of Chapter 0)done just to set up another brain dead porno game with a 30 something year old MC who acts like a retarded kid?
I mean The prologue felt like the game was actually going somewhere with an interesting story and a more serious tone. MC got beaten almost to death by his dad when he was a kid. at 17 his girlfriend, Lilly dies for him and their child. At 18 the MC goes on a killing rampage to get revenge for Lilly's death, kills like 8+ dudes including a crime boss then he got engaged to Olivia and left town to protect her and his daughter. Ch 1-15 years later, dude comes back and the game just feels like a really bad comedy porn novel with a goofy retard for an MC. Seriously what happened? What went wrong? It feels like 2 different games.

 

[H_NGM_N666]

I've been thinking about this. I don't believe it for second. It has to be some sort of plot device. Both of them act apprehensive when talking about it and never actually say the words. MC always finishes the sentence for them. idk dude. it's weird. Even in that scene she says "what happened with Ellie" Neither Lucas nor Oliver ever specifically she is not his child

It could just be copium, but there's also that locked drawer in Olivia's room. I swear it's birth records lol

Birth records, pictures and maybe some toys...?

 

[AliceRabbit94]

So I don't post a lot on here but felt the need after playing this release. So when the prologue released I played it and besides some points (The few times the MC forced himself on Olivia)it had a interesting story and the development of the MC.

So one of my biggest issues with the current story is the MC. I think there is a problem with his motivations and the likeability. His motivation for coming back was for the family he left behind, his daughter and wife and to fix their relationship. But you don't really notice this in the way he acts. He keeps perving on the other daughter of his wife and sister of his daughter, he keeps groping everyone, even the way about his daughter just keeps insulting her never defending her or anything while praising Ellie. Like you don't get the impression this man abandoned everything that was important to him years ago, he literally feels like that weird uncle who is visiting. A lot of this is coupled with unavoidable things like the groping of Judy or the HJ in the shower or interview and the way he acts with the niece of his friend. This doesn't feel like someone who regretted leaving his family behind. Also the emotions of Olivia seeing him after all those years looks more like a friend who she hasn't seen for a month and not the man she loved and hasn't seen for years. She seems like she also has 0 interest in him and same for him seeing how little time he wants to spend with her. Also the weird interaction where she lets the MC spank her adult daughter as a punishment and its unavoidable is super weird. She doesn't feel like that girl in the prologue anymore, but she also doesn't show like something happend that makes her act different. Also about Ellie also being his daughter Ive seen people say Olivia got pregnant after a year he left others that she was born a year later, but I cant remember it and couldn't find something skimming. While it sucked when the game said Lucas was her dad. I don't think Lucas is on the fact he hasn't really talked with Olivia about it yet and the fact Ellie was surprised by the name Adam like she heard it before and the few instances she almost calls him daddy. Might have gone on a small ramble but that is what I felt playing it. Also there is a bug I noticed where the game always things you slapped the bargirl.

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[H_NGM_N666]

17-18 year old MC towards the end of the prologue. View attachment 1930745
32-33 year old MC in CH 1.
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Man what happened? A new dev/writer took over the game or something? Or was all of that(the events of Chapter 0)done just to set up another brain dead porno game with a 30 something year old MC who acts like a retarded kid?
I mean The prologue felt like the game was actually going somewhere with an interesting story and a more serious tone. MC got beaten almost to death by his dad when he was a kid. at 17 his girlfriend, Lilly dies for him and their child. At 18 the MC goes on a killing rampage to get revenge for Lilly's death, kills like 8+ dudes including a crime boss then he got engaged to Olivia and left town to protect her and his daughter. Ch 1-15 years later, dude comes back and the game just feels like a really bad comedy porn novel with a goofy retard for an MC. Seriously what happened? What went wrong? It feels like 2 different games.

good captured pics

There you can see the difference when we are on a rampage and what retard things man can do when they want to get laid. hahaha

 

[AJBit]

I really liked it, also I think Ellie is MC's daughter too. Olivia seemed like she wanted to tell MC something before being interrupted and Lucas looked kinda sad when MC mentioned Ellie.

 

[CamaroFan432]

1. Olivia had no reason to fuck with Lucas. She despised him from Day 1
2. She is really in love with the mc
3. She accepted him to get married in the night before he gone
4. I don´t believe that when Olivia fucks behind his back with his best friend and get a baby, that she would stay single or not fuck any other guy in the meantime the mc get back to her.
5. Olivia was ready to lie about that the mc is not Mia´s father, then she be scared too to tell mc that Ellie is also his daughter. So he let him believe that she is from Lucas till the time comes to tell him that he is the father.
6. When he spoke to Lucas, Lucas did not 100% confirmed that he is the father of Ellie. He just said that Olivia told him that and that Lucas was not allowed to tell the mc that Ellie exist. If he had known that, the mc would get back faster and bring himself in an dangerous situation. But another story would it be, that Lucas was not allowed because Olivia was scared that the mc would hate her for that and would never coming back (but he would then also despise Mia, that would be illogic)
7. Would it not be NTR when Lucas and Olivia??? The NTR Tag is missed. So if it would be true that Lucas and Olivia... then there must be an NTR Tag and Warning. Because i hate NTR games and cheating deserves a NTR Tag right?

Soooo. Why would she sleep with Lucas and get a baby with him? I think that the chance is much bigger that the mc is the father.

I didn´t find the right place where they are talking about that but i think to remember that she was born 1 year after he left. Maybe some guy know where they talked about that?

I agree on all the points. That's why I think it would be best if the truth gets told in the next chapter. The longer they wait with it, the more complicate it gets. And also the hate about the lies towards Olivia and the MC would grow. I mean the relationships need to be cleared, the drama with Lucas and the gang and so, I don't care at the moment, let it get worse if it fits the story. But the MC and the girls should now the truth about Ellies origin and who the MC really is. It did never made sense to keep the truth hidden and it would never make sense to keep it longer hidden. And what I didn't understand either was the fact, that the MC tried to protect Olivia and Mia and gets punished by losing everything. It just created unnecessary drama.

 

[H_NGM_N666]

So I don't post a lot on here but felt the need after playing this release. So when the prologue released I played it and besides some points (The few times the MC forced himself on Olivia)it had a interesting story and the development of the MC.

So one of my biggest issues with the current story is the MC. I think there is a problem with his motivations and the likeability. His motivation for coming back was for the family he left behind, his daughter and wife and to fix their relationship. But you don't really notice this in the way he acts. He keeps perving on the other daughter of his wife and sister of his daughter, he keeps groping everyone, even the way about his daughter just keeps insulting her never defending her or anything while praising Ellie. Like you don't get the impression this man abandoned everything that was important to him years ago, he literally feels like that weird uncle who is visiting. A lot of this is coupled with unavoidable things like the groping of Judy or the HJ in the shower or interview and the way he acts with the niece of his friend. This doesn't feel like someone who regretted leaving his family behind. Also the emotions of Olivia seeing him after all those years looks more like a friend who she hasn't seen for a month and not the man she loved and hasn't seen for years. She seems like she also has 0 interest in him and same for him seeing how little time he wants to spend with her. Also the weird interaction where she lets the MC spank her adult daughter as a punishment and its unavoidable is super weird. She doesn't feel like that girl in the prologue anymore, but she also doesn't show like something happend that makes her act different. Also about Ellie also being his daughter Ive seen people say Olivia got pregnant after a year he left others that she was born a year later, but I cant remember it and couldn't find something skimming. While it sucked when the game said Lucas was her dad. I don't think Lucas is on the fact he hasn't really talked with Olivia about it yet and the fact Ellie was surprised by the name Adam like she heard it before and the few instances she almost calls him daddy. Might have gone on a small ramble but that is what I felt playing it. Also there is a bug I noticed where the game always things you slapped the bargirl.

Spoiler: Also something I haven't seen anyone else mention.

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A lot of true words in there for your first post!

You are right, the first encounter with Olivia begins great, she jumps on him and smiled lucky but then...? Nothing, just an old friend from Mias dad, thats the point i was disappointed too.
And a job after the first day he gets back? Doesn´t he want to spend some time with his family? When the kids come home from school, he must go to work till night because he must to go to a massage? Ok, the massage thing is ok but not in the evening and make a dinner with that girl. The massage can he get when the kids are at school. To implement Judy, there are other ways too.

 

[Sol_Invictus2009]

17-18 year old MC towards the end of the prologue. View attachment 1930745
32-33 year old MC in CH 1.
View attachment 1930749
Man what happened? A new dev/writer took over the game or something? Or was all of that(the events of Chapter 0)done just to set up another brain dead porno game with a 30 something year old MC who acts like a retarded kid?
I mean The prologue felt like the game was actually going somewhere with an interesting story and a more serious tone. MC got beaten almost to death by his dad when he was a kid. at 17 his girlfriend, Lilly dies for him and their child. At 18 the MC goes on a killing rampage to get revenge for Lilly's death, kills like 8+ dudes including a crime boss then he got engaged to Olivia and left town to protect her and his daughter. Ch 1-15 years later, dude comes back and the game just feels like a really bad comedy porn novel with a goofy retard for an MC. Seriously what happened? What went wrong? It feels like 2 different games.

Exactly this. I really want to like this game as there are some really good ideas in it, but the MC in modern times is just obnoxious. Not only is he so weak that he's the constant butt of jokes, but he's also got the emotional and actual intelligence of a 10 year old.

 

[ImperialD]

1. Olivia had no reason to fuck with Lucas. She despised him from Day 1
2. She is really in love with the mc
3. She accepted him to get married in the night before he gone
4. I don´t believe that when Olivia fucks behind his back with his best friend and get a baby, that she would stay single or not fuck any other guy in the meantime the mc get back to her.
5. Olivia was ready to lie about that the mc is not Mia´s father, then she be scared too to tell mc that Ellie is also his daughter. So he let him believe that she is from Lucas till the time comes to tell him that he is the father.
6. When he spoke to Lucas, Lucas did not 100% confirmed that he is the father of Ellie. He just said that Olivia told him that and that Lucas was not allowed to tell the mc that Ellie exist. If he had known that, the mc would get back faster and bring himself in an dangerous situation. But another story would it be, that Lucas was not allowed because Olivia was scared that the mc would hate her for that and would never coming back (but he would then also despise Mia, that would be illogic)
7. Would it not be NTR when Lucas and Olivia??? The NTR Tag is missed. So if it would be true that Lucas and Olivia... then there must be an NTR Tag and Warning. Because i hate NTR games and cheating deserves a NTR Tag right?

Soooo. Why would she sleep with Lucas and get a baby with him? I think that the chance is much bigger that the mc is the father.

I didn´t find the right place where they are talking about that but i think to remember that she was born 1 year after he left. Maybe some guy know where they talked about that?

its takes place after you goto see Judy the 3rd time i think

 

[H_NGM_N666]

Exactly this. I really want to like this game as there are some really good ideas in it, but the MC in modern times is just obnoxious. Not only is he so weak that he's the constant butt of jokes, but he's also got the emotional and actual intelligence of a 10 year old.

I believe that the mc is intelligent. He where gone and helped Olivia with a lot of money since he was abroad. A dumb person would not get that. But you are right that his behavior is too childish! Especially when he is together with Lucas, thats a situation like 2 kids rampage a candystore.

 

[King Jr]

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[H_NGM_N666]

This game has romance and incest tag, right?

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[ImperialD]

This game has romance and incest tag, right?

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i think its more for Mia

 

[H_NGM_N666]

i think its more for Mia

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Or is it possible that the dev can now give future tags? I thought that future tags are separated?

 

[Fazed]

I think the MC is definitely too much of a creepy goofball. He has moments of clarity but then it's right back to the immature antics. His dialogue is way too creepy/forward at times as well.

i think its more for Mia

But they haven't done anything as of this update so...

its takes place after you goto see Judy the 3rd time i think

Nope, no details were given. She is just carrying the story along and the MC has already accepted that "it happened" and promises to take care of her. They chose to keep it a secret that he is Mia's father as well so to me this looks like a plot device. But I guess we will see how it plays out.

 

[ImperialD]

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Or is it possible that the dev can now give future tags? I thought that future tags are separated?

idk about any future tags or not ... just going by what i've read in game .. and using my imagination on whats coming next update
seems there's only 1 girl your related to Mia

 

[ImperialD]

I think the MC is definitely too much of a creepy goofball. He has moments of clarity but then it's right back to the immature antics. His dialogue is way too creepy/forward at times as well.

But they haven't done anything as of this update so...


Nope, no details were given. She is just carrying the story along and the MC has already accepted that "it happened" and promises to take care of her. They chose to keep it a secret that he is Mia's father as well so to me this looks like a plot device. But I guess we will see how it plays out.

well i could be back to the save point i took that screen from ... and back up some to tell you exactly where it was ... but not gonna waste my time anymore ... you guys believe what you want

 

[intrigan]

I swear it's birth records lol

I don't give a shit, if she's a blood daughter or not. The essence is in the relations of a young awakening girl, deprived of male care, with an experienced man, while craving male attention in order to feel desired, to feel that the world revolves even around her, a shy, naive girl, while in the depths of her heart is raging a volcano of emotions, threatening to sweep away everything that prevents her awakening as a woman.

 

[Fazed]

well i could be back to the save point i took that screen from ... and back up some to tell you exactly where it was ... but not gonna waste my time anymore ... you guys believe what you want

I don't want to believe what I want...I've been trying to find where that timeline was given. So if you have screen shot I would like to see it.

 

[intrigan]

In any case, there is a CHEATING tag that some part of the constantly complaining and lamenting gamers absolutely does not want to notice.
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