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Use your brain for a second for once then you will realize am doing the exact same thing you are, giving my opinion. Why are you so butt hurt about my comment are you the dev or are you...
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the plot is very good my respect. and one song, the words of which I think very well describe him.
I don't wanna let you down, i don't wanna leave this town, cause after all this city never sleep at night
It's time to begin isn't it? I get a little bit bigger , but then
I'll admit i'm just the same as i was
Now don't you understand
That i'm never changing who i am?
It's time Imagine Dragons
I don't wanna let you down, i don't wanna leave this town, cause after all this city never sleep at night
It's time to begin isn't it? I get a little bit bigger , but then
I'll admit i'm just the same as i was
Now don't you understand
That i'm never changing who i am?
It's time Imagine Dragons
- Jun 2, 2020
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Сause I'm sick of people who just curse the DEV for his vision of human relations, which does not correspond to their ideas, and there are a lot of them. I am literally suffocating from their prudery and hypocrisy.
You are one of them. Drag queens have been corrupting our children since kindergarten in real life, and you are looking for pedophiles in a porn game. Aren't you hypocrite ?
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Didnt the dragon leader dudemc killed in the prologue mentioned it himself that he stole the car and just used MC as a scapegoat? unless its Lucas fault that the dead dragon dude knows the mc personally.
Plus im curious what Lucas plan is that involves the 2 gang members that mc spared , hopefully nothing bad since those 2 dudes has huge respect for mc.
Only 15 years with patch, but regardless of whether you are using the patch or not Mia and Ellie are close in age since they both go to the same school. If Mia was about a year old when the MC left, and Olivia got pregnant just before the MC left, Ellie and Mia would be not quite 2 years apart which makes sense (16 and 14 with the patch, or 21 and 19 without).Ellie can not be MC's daughter ..... she is not old enough ...... Mia can be .... remember people the MC left and came back after 20 years ....
Can't at the moment, but I'll try to remember to do so later today.
But it doesn't explain how they came across the MC, how they knew where the MC with his family lived and why Lucas is now in charge of the dragon gang. There has to be a connection between all these points: and up to now it's Lucas. Maybe there is someone (the woman mentioned by Lucas maybe?) else behind the scenes pulling additional strings. But Lucas is still involved. And he still kept infos from the MC. He isn't definitly no good guy, and definitly not a good friend. He presents some good sides, like giving up Olivia, but the death of Lily weighs way heavier.
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It's a wonderfully convoluted story in just two chapters, and it looks like the girls have a lot going for them. The foreshadowing at the end of the second chapter also gives a lot of creative space. The level of character modeling is also very high. I recommend that the author reveal the plot on the introduction page. Some plot synopsis is more attractive. To be honest, I decided I had to get a five-star rating when Lily died.
To be fair, the conversation with Nova was strictly about the identity of the mysterious "Mr. Kim" the dildo, there is no reason she has omnipotent knowledge of Olivia's love life. She was only saying that Mr. Kim isn't some other dude that's been fucking Olivia, it's just a dildo. Agree about the rest, though.
It may have begun about Mr. Kim, but she explicitly says, that Olivia never was touched by anyone else. She may know more about Olivia than she lets out. Why else would she phrase it this way? And if she would have no knowledge about Olivia's love life, how does she know about Mr. Kim? She saying that no one touched Olivia, could also be an indication that she may be involved in the lies about Ellie. There is still way to much in the dark about the lies. But for me it's obvious why she phrased it this way: to let the MC know, that even Lucas never touched her, even if he doesn't put 1 and 1 together (again).
Why would she phrase it that way? Because the MC was angry that Olivia was seeing someone, so she was reassuring him that Mr. Kim wasn't a person to be worried about.
Imagine you going up to someone, angry about something you don't have a full understanding of, and they reassure you by saying that you don't need to worry because what you're so angry about isn't the case at all. That's literally what she's saying. You are reading more into what she's saying because that's what you want to believe, and that's fine ... but that's not precisely what she's saying. You are just inferring that on your own.
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Looking for pedos in porn games??? drag queens corrupting kids???(WTF drugs are you on) And you have the ignorance and arrogance to even mention "prudery and hypocrisy". I gave an opinion on a vn, never once cursed the dev...If you are looking for a hypocrite just read what this is in reply to
Your comments are full of contradictions and hypocracies. If you are such a snowflake that cant handle other people having their own opinion differ from yours, you should not be on the internetFor me I honestly don't give 2 shits what other people do or who they fuck if they are not directly bothering or fucking me or my family, not in real life and certainly not in some fictional world with fictional characters, especially when I don't even know them from Adam. Freud was a fraud, otherwise robbery and murder rates would have tripled by now among every GTA 5 player. If shit like AVN and video game content upsets them they should probably find another hobby. And they should quit worring about what other people they don't even know like to jack off to or fuck instead of acting like a Muslim looking at a render of Muhammad sucking off a 7yo, their life will be alot less stressful when they don't get all pissed off over things they either can't control or have nothing to do with them.
- Jun 15, 2021
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I dunno, I guess I'm confused as hell now by the ending. Why does he have a picture of Lily on his desk? What is the twist at the end supposed to be?
I think it's strange why everyone doesn't have any issue with the way that Lily died. I mean, she seriously had a conversation with everyone and then said "okay, i guess ill go ahead and die now" essentially. Closed her eyes, and that was it. There was no EKG meters hooked up to her, so those who are saying "her heart stopped" have no grounds for saying that happened. You guys are insulting me saying "im not using facts" - yet i feel like everytime ive posted ive explained support for my thoughts. The way Lily died is so suspect. she wasn't bleeding, she wasn't exhibiting pain, in fact she looked quite stable and relaxed. what did she die from? i mean dont just have a knee jerk reaction guys, seriously consider what im postulating. i really dont understand how she could of died, unless the developer is just completely incompetent and lazy to give lily a logical death scene.
where the fuck were the doctors, or nurses??? have you ever been in a ER room when someone is dying? I have, my father died of a heart attack, and I was actually in the room- he didnt just give me the peace sign and say "yo im gonna ded nowl, pz out dude enjoy the car" in fact it was quite a violent death as he kind of shook like he was having seizures and there was "all hands on deck" with nurses and a surgeon/doctor trying to resussitate him.
if i'm wrong about this, personally, i feel like its the developers fault because if she really did die in that scene then its going to be impossible to do any kind of prediction or forshadowing because there are no real visual clues or proper logic to the images to make proper conclusions
with all due respect... please explain to me with your "facts"
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What a fuck are you talking about, trashy hypocrite with a fishy prejudice?)
Don't tell me what to do and I won't tell you where to go, lousy tyrant ! )
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I mean... again, this is a really shallow basis to use as a fact to support death. anyway. the only conclusion i can come to is that this VN is not sophisticated enough or written by someone who understands the way writing a narrative works.
I reality is, if I'm wrong and you guys are right, then my opinion about this VN basically takes a 180 and the game should probably be called "Amateur Hour"
I think the dev just didn't know how to properly write her hospital scene. They had some things that they wanted to get across and wanted to give her the ability to say what she said. After all, this is their first attempt at a VN and that scene was from the first release of the game.I mean... again, this is a really shallow basis to use as a fact to support death. anyway. the only conclusion i can come to is that this VN is not sophisticated enough or written by someone who understands the way writing a narrative works.
I reality is, if I'm wrong and you guys are right, then my opinion about this VN basically takes a 180 and the game should probably be called "Amateur Hour"
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What a fuck are you talking about, trashy hypocrite with a fishy prejudice?
Don't tell me what to do and I don't tell you where to go, lousy tyrant ! )
It's not, in the detailed description of the death of Lil and her funeral cause first of all it's porn game. But who cares ! )
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