VN Ren'Py Abandoned Family Again [v0.4.0] [F_Dot]

[H_NGM_N666]

A new update... a new battle begins Hahaha

Although the mc is like a kid and some mysterious clues are getting solved soon, this game is an absolute 5 Star game!

I liked mostly where the story drifted this update (he had to say from the beginning that he is Darth Vader ehm i mean the father of Mia - and we know now for sure that Ellie is also - just like i said from the start ;-) )

Ok the english is not the best and the chinese letter seem not meant to be but i saw more games a LOT worse then this and the reviews were better! Everybody should now from start that the mc is not the typical alpha mc with their speech. He is goofy and funny AND he talks his ass very often in shitty situation.

But it is well written, i UND3RSTAND all what the dev wants to tell us, even with his mistakes.

I LOVE this game!

Haters OUT

 

[H_NGM_N666]

Ah if people would only be able to read what is written in the game instead of skipping and then scream "NTR REEEEEE!!"

Didn´t remember any NTR stuff. OK, Lucas has his hots for Olivia but bro before hoe - so he fucks Apple which looks similar. And i don´t believe that we must lay any finger on Apple when we get the original So NO NTR

BUT we showed Mr. Kim his place hahaha

 

[zoislk]

Didn´t remember any NTR stuff. OK, Lucas has his hots for Olivia but bro before hoe - so he fucks Apple which looks similar. And i don´t believe that we must lay any finger on Apple when we get the original So NO NTR

BUT we showed Mr. Kim his place hahaha

That's because there is no NTR stuff. People on this forum are just a little irrational sometimes in their hate or love for it and end up trying to turn any conversation into it.

 

[Carpe Stultus]

Didn´t remember any NTR stuff. OK, Lucas has his hots for Olivia but bro before hoe - so he fucks Apple which looks similar. And i don´t believe that we must lay any finger on Apple when we get the original So NO NTR

BUT we showed Mr. Kim his place hahaha

Did you even read my post or did you just see the "NTR REEEEEE!!"????

 

[H_NGM_N666]

Did you even read my post or did you just see the "NTR REEEEEE!!"????

Just saying you are right, nothing else But its sad that here are often posts from people who think that NTR is inside, and that from people who obviously don´t understand what the NTR Tag means

 

[Carpe Stultus]

Just saying you are right, nothing else But its sad that here are often posts from people who think that NTR is inside, and that from people who obviously don´t understand what the NTR Tag means

Its nothing new really. A certain crowd always sees NTR around every corner no matter what the game itself shows.

 

[Comaco]

Here's the patch that Comaco uploaded. Not sure why his post was deleted in the first place.

Someone told the mods what that patch actually does, and they decided to delete it...

 

[NyVar]

F95 and many of its members push NTR on an extremely thin line.. So what im wondering is: why the fuck doesnt this game have fem-dom tagged in capital letters? xD lmfao..
MC gets abused and pushed around in every single scene xD Im just waiting for him to explode and turn the whole population to their knees And truth be told thats my only motivation to keep going with this one, hehe

 

[Matoyoshi]

Maybe it's just me, but when he mentions Visual Novels while they are watching Titanic in the theater(way back in 1997) it kind of threw me and made me actually do a bit of research. Visual Novels were only a thing in Japan up until the mid 2000's so he wouldn't have know anything about them in 1997.

 

[Ass Fan]

Wow, I'm sad about this because many see NTR in practically everything there are games that have absolutely nothing of this type of content but even so, someone always appears saying about it I have nothing against it but it's pretty boring sigh... anyway.

Oh Lucas had a great desire for Olivia when he was younger but from what we've seen he's already over her and sees Apple as a replacement well saying to forget his friend Adam's crazy girl once and for all

 

[magicscientist]

What a fuck are you talking about, trashy hypocrite with a fishy prejudice?




Don't tell me what to do and I don't tell you where to go, lousy tyrant ! )


It's not, in the detailed description of the death of Lil and her funeral cause first of all it's porn game. But who cares ! )

Lol. True enough True enough. Okay okay, this is definitely not the hill I'm gonna fall on my sword on boys. Just disappointed because i thought i knew what was going on, and now i dont know wtf is going on, but dont really care so much anymore.

Gentlemen.

 

[magicscientist]

Rest in peace, dear VN amateur critic of porn game ! Amen !

I'm writing someone a strongly worded letter for sure!!

 

[magicscientist]

I think the dev just didn't know how to properly write her hospital scene. They had some things that they wanted to get across and wanted to give her the ability to say what she said. After all, this is their first attempt at a VN and that scene was from the first release of the game.

Okay, hey, fair enough then. I can totally accept that - I feel like my idea would of made for a cool / interesting story, but looking at the story again... You guys are all probably right and I'm reading into this thing like it's the Bourne Ultimatum or something, when it's really more "Student Film School Project"

Sorry boys, didn't mean to shit in anybodies cream sodas, just use to more experienced writers. Perv's outs

 

[magicscientist]

Are you trying to find a reason to believe that Lucas is Ellie's father and not the MC? And remember the backlash after Ch1 was released, everyone thought exactly that, "Lucas and Olivia had Ellie", "Olivia and Lucas betrayed the MC" and "This needs the NTR tag". So why can't this not also be a hint from the dev to the player, where the dev says "hey guys, Olivia had nothing with Lucas and also nothing with anyone other"? And seriously ASKED yourself from where Nova knows who Mr. Kim is! Nova has more knowledge about Olivia and everything else, than she lets us know. It's obvious. She could have phrased in a other way, something like that "nobody is touching Olivia". With present tense it would have made sense to believe, Olivia wasn't seeing anyone at the moment but the MC. But she says it in past tense. It's a BIG difference. But if you want to believe something else and want a discussion about it, maybe even how this game contains NTR, fine. But search for someone else and turn it into a private discussion.

He has no picture of Lily, look precisly, then you would see that he has a picture of Olivia and one of the MC together with Lucas. I mean take a look for yourself, and tell me where you see Lily:

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I think you confused yourself.

Yeah... I'm so confused. I thought the Love Interest in the first half of the game, that died- her name was Lily... and that Lily is the red headed girl in the white frame. Isn't Olivia the punk rock girl roommate? who has like the trendy purple shaved up hairstyle?

So humour me so we can all get on the same page. I pulled this from the front banner. What are those characters names? Olivia and Lily? or did I confuse the names

 

[Comaco]

Yeah... I'm so confused. I thought the Love Interest in the first half of the game, that died- her name was Lily... and that Lily is the red headed girl in the white frame. Isn't Olivia the punk rock girl roommate? who has like the trendy purple shaved up hairstyle?

So humour me so we can all get on the same page. I pulled this from the front banner. What are those characters names? Olivia and Lily? or did I confuse the names

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You are right about the names of the characters in chapter 0 in your last question. It is Olivia on the left and Lily on the right of the picture. I think what confuses you is that Olivia stopped coloring her hair when she grew up and got a job. She is now a redhead.

 

[Havik79]

F95 and many of its members push NTR on an extremely thin line.. So what im wondering is: why the fuck doesnt this game have fem-dom tagged in capital letters? xD lmfao..
MC gets abused and pushed around in every single scene xD Im just waiting for him to explode and turn the whole population to their knees And truth be told thats my only motivation to keep going with this one, hehe

Hopefully, after the beating scene in this update, things will change, at least I hope so given how scared she was.

 

[intrigan]

Sorry boys, didn't mean to shit in anybodies cream sodas, just use to more experienced writers. Perv's outs

Writer... like a Google translator? Most of all, people in this thread condemn the shortcomings of poor translation, but not original text. From my point of view, it looks sooo stupid.)

 

[H_NGM_N666]

Oh Lucas had a great desire for Olivia when he was younger but from what we've seen he's already over her and sees Apple as a replacement well saying to forget his friend Adam's crazy girl once and for all

So you didn´t saw the last scene where Lucas watched at Olivias photo when Apple got his cock in her mouth?

 

[H_NGM_N666]

Hey? Can anybody make some cool Sigs for this game please?

 

[Ass Fan]

So you didn´t saw the last scene where Lucas watched at Olivias photo when Apple got his cock in her mouth?

Yes I heard very well but Lucas putting the frame with the photo down already shows that he gave up on it