I know a few people that were like that were friends for a long time then bam they were dating longest GF i had was that we were at a party and just kissed and went pretty fast after that. The cops I agree with you on totally.
well, its just that the guy grow with her sinze super young, and he never get really attracted to her. she is like a sister to him and he is like a brother to her.
and then suddently, 1 kiss and "it's lambada time !" they fall in love litteraly.
its a bit too fast.
i guess nobody gonna like the cops part, because its honestly too "hard" suddently too, i mean, i was ok about grabing her boobs and feel them.. but undress her to show her boobs and nipples and even the ass... with all the peoples around looking without any reaction.. it's honestly impossible to happen. Even as a cop, i can garantee that 90% of peoples around watching this kind of thing will react and defy the cops, without fear to be arrested, the cops is done, he cant win with such many witnesses peoples...
i understand the "fear" to fight a cop, but that's honestly too much.
(lol , my mother will beat the shit out of this cop, and my GF will litteraly kill them. And i will probably do same to act to make the cop stopping that. its too far. )
but yeah.. its a fiction... soo i guess it gonna have some hard NTR and stuff in it already.
my favorite part is really the beginning of the story between the both guys, i predict a great friendly relation betwen them.. if not, then its a pity.
And the redhead.... hmmm... probably one of the most realist and good girl i have seen for months