Laehtsia

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Salut !

Oui je suis Français.

Oké oké, bah écoute je voulais simplement te féliciter pour cette perle.

Déjà trouver un bon jeu 3D sous Ren'py avec du futanari c'est extrêmement rare, mais alors en français... la perle dans l'océan j'ai envie de dire.
Ca se voit que tu as joué à pas mal de jeux et que tu as les réflexes d'un gars qui a de la bouteille de la domaine. Tu t'y connais en VN du genre.

Les personnages sont attachants, Hyde et Rachel sont vraiment mimi. D'ailleurs un gros gg pour le traitement de ces deux-là. Pour Rachel par exemple je suis un grand amateur de futa x male, j'ai consommé pas mal de contenu du genre et la relation MC - Rachel est littéralement la meilleure du genre que j'ai pu voir pour l'instant. Les moments sexy sont très bien gérés et son côté " domination " est parfaitement bien amené. Les scènes de la douche, ou quand elle t'étreint, quand tu vois sur le plan qu'elle est plus grande etc... incroyable. ni trop, ni pas assez.

Côté qualité graphique j'arrive après la tempête étant donné que je ne découvre le jeu que maintenant mais j'ai pu deviner les moments de transition d'une mise à jour à l'autre grâce aux graphismes. On peut vraiment constater que tu t'améliores en même temps qu'on joue, plus j'avançais et plus les effets de lumière, les jeux d'ombre et les modèles étaient convaincants. (y)

J'espère vraiment que tu vas continuer, c'est mon jeu préféré avec Summer's Gone de tout F95 et des VN en général. Il y a un potentiel énorme.

Les seuls défauts que je relèverais sont les fautes d'orthographe qui, même si elles ne sont pas intempestives, gâchent quand même un peu le plaisir ( j'ai joué en français ).
Dans le même registre il faudrait aussi penser à adapter les dialogues d'une langue à l'autre. J'ai l'exemple de la blague du MC qui se fait inscrire comme " Doe " ; c'est une blague très anglophone et en France personne ne comprendrait pourquoi tous les personnages rient à l'écran.

En bref c'est du tout bon, ah et aussi j'espère qu'il y aura plus de mises à jour par an. On peut viser la 0.4 avant Juillet / Août ? :devilish:

Je vais C/C ce com pour le mettre dans les avis. Bien sûr, 5 étoiles.
 

Leonave

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Oké oké, bah écoute je voulais simplement te féliciter pour cette perle.

Déjà trouver un bon jeu 3D sous Ren'py avec du futanari c'est extrêmement rare, mais alors en français... la perle dans l'océan j'ai envie de dire.
Ca se voit que tu as joué à pas mal de jeux et que tu as les réflexes d'un gars qui a de la bouteille de la domaine. Tu t'y connais en VN du genre.

Les personnages sont attachants, Hyde et Rachel sont vraiment mimi. D'ailleurs un gros gg pour le traitement de ces deux-là. Pour Rachel par exemple je suis un grand amateur de futa x male, j'ai consommé pas mal de contenu du genre et la relation MC - Rachel est littéralement la meilleure du genre que j'ai pu voir pour l'instant. Les moments sexy sont très bien gérés et son côté " domination " est parfaitement bien amené. Les scènes de la douche, ou quand elle t'étreint, quand tu vois sur le plan qu'elle est plus grande etc... incroyable. ni trop, ni pas assez.

Côté qualité graphique j'arrive après la tempête étant donné que je ne découvre le jeu que maintenant mais j'ai pu deviner les moments de transition d'une mise à jour à l'autre grâce aux graphismes. On peut vraiment constater que tu t'améliores en même temps qu'on joue, plus j'avançais et plus les effets de lumière, les jeux d'ombre et les modèles étaient convaincants. (y)

J'espère vraiment que tu vas continuer, c'est mon jeu préféré avec Summer's Gone de tout F95 et des VN en général. Il y a un potentiel énorme.

Les seuls défauts que je relèverais sont les fautes d'orthographe qui, même si elles ne sont pas intempestives, gâchent quand même un peu le plaisir ( j'ai joué en français ).
Dans le même registre il faudrait aussi penser à adapter les dialogues d'une langue à l'autre. J'ai l'exemple de la blague du MC qui se fait inscrire comme " Doe " ; c'est une blague très anglophone et en France personne ne comprendrait pourquoi tous les personnages rient à l'écran.

En bref c'est du tout bon, ah et aussi j'espère qu'il y aura plus de mises à jour par an. On peut viser la 0.4 avant Juillet / Août ? :devilish:

Je vais C/C ce com pour le mettre dans les avis. Bien sûr, 5 étoiles.

Merci pour ce message !
C'est le genre de message de soutien qui rebooste, si je puis me permettre un anglicisme.

Je ne compte pas arrêter en tout cas tant que mes finances me le permettent...
La pérennité de Frozen Past ne sera hélas assurée que lorsque j'aurais un nombre de contributeurs suffisants pour en vivre.

J'ai pris note de tes remarques concernant les fautes d'orthographe que j'ai pourtant déjà passées au peigne fin et que j'ai re-corrigées encore dans la v0.31 qui sera rendue publique le 26.

Merci également pour ta note qui fait du bien, car mon jeu est assez mal noté je dois bien l'admettre...
 
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Leo Humilis

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J'ai l'exemple de la blague du MC qui se fait inscrire comme " Doe " ; c'est une blague très anglophone et en France personne ne comprendrait pourquoi tous les personnages rient à l'écran.
Remplacer "Doe" par "Dupont" dans la version française ?
 

Greily

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Merci également pour ta note qui fait du bien, car mon jeu est assez mal noté je dois bien l'admettre...
I'd say it has a pretty solid rating despite how much we gripe about it. I gave it 4 stars AUG/22 after following it since the initial release. It's good to hear that you still wanna stick with it at least. I for one don't get paid enough to support projects too casually. One I do support for example that is pretty new is Crimson High (sorry it's a koiktasu game) has pretty solid fucking writing. Fairly regular updates too.

I for one don't mind what style a game is in (except stuff with the real porn tag, go surf normal porn...) as long as it's consistant good quality for the medium.

You do that for the most part kinda slowly, I bet writing it in two languages takes it's toll. I disagree with some of the writing but it's your story to tell.
 
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Man i hate the mc sister and mother so much , i dont blame him if he betrayed his sister somehow in the past she is a bitch and deserves more + would have given here another chance but she already got a dick (main girls have them and thats sad lol)
and fucking people around so idk how is this not NTR or something like

Its says the game will have incest and most likely harem vibe to it , and i think it more like the mc dont give a f about what is right and wrong , i mean i dont get it , if it will be a harem game (or just a normal game) then why the potential LI have relationship with others

BTW
Im not here to attack anyone im actually so confused i know he had Memory loss and stuff but as we can see he still have his intelligence so that make me question him more since he actually does have morals or whatever they are called


And Rape content is not avoidable its skipable
it will still happen and it is do fucked up it made me hate most of the characters in-game
(Could make it avoidable by actually reporting the professor in the first scene , and in the second one by making the inmates beat tara not rape her ) and it choice based

Thanks for reading and developing the game I really wish a lot of things in it gets fixed before the final realise or so
 
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ImariKurumi

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Man i hate the mc sister and mother so much , i dont blame him if he betrayed his sister somehow in the past she is a bitch and deserves more + would have given here another chance but she already got a dick (main girls have them and thats sad lol)
and fucking people around so idk how is this not NTR or something like

Its says the game will have incest and most likely harem vibe to it , and i think it more like the mc dont give a f about what is right and wrong , i mean i dont get it , if it will be a harem game (or just a normal game) then why the potential LI have relationship with others

BTW
Im not here to attack anyone im actually so confused i know he had Memory loss and stuff but as we can see he still have his intelligence so that make me question him more since he actually does have morals or whatever they are called


And Rape content is not avoidable its skipable
it will still happen and it is do fucked up it made me hate most of the characters in-game
(Could make it avoidable by actually reporting the professor in the first scene , and in the second one by making the inmates beat tara not rape her ) and it choice based

Thanks for reading and developing the game I really wish a lot of things in it gets fixed before the final realise or so
Its all about the drama and the build up. I dislike the mom and sis too but the dev did a good job with their characters in my opinion if they are able to invoke such feelings from the player. It'll have a bigger impact on the the reconciliation story later on especially if they are both Love Interests, it makes players more emotional invested in the plot. Im really looking forward to it.

As for the NTR part, well i guess the sis is the one doing the fucking and putting it in so... and its with another female... moreover its pretty much a clear hate relationship between sis and mc for now, its not one sided, not neutral, not mutually romantic. Don't get me wrong, I'm not a fan of NTR but this setup doesn't bother me, in fact it anchors some realism to the plot.

The school rape i find it pointless but i guess dev has a plan for it. The prison rape feels integral to the story and theme. Either indirectly backs up the sis's fucked up character, or a possible setup for that victim's storyline later on, or simply invoke the realism of prison life with hermas. Its not rape for the sake of rape(try some of the rape games, you'll understand) so i see nothing wrong with dev dipping toes into the controversial to the enhance the narrative. Personally i hope dev doesn't shy away from his vision of the game just because of some controversial topics.
 
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Its all about the drama and the build up. I dislike the mom and sis too but the dev did a good job with their characters in my opinion if they are able to invoke such feelings from the player. It'll have a bigger impact on the the reconciliation story later on especially if they are both Love Interests, it makes players more emotional invested in the plot. Im really looking forward to it.

As for the NTR part, well i guess the sis is the one doing the fucking and putting it in so... and its with another female... moreover its pretty much a clear hate relationship between sis and mc for now, its not one sided, not neutral, not mutually romantic. Don't get me wrong, I'm not a fan of NTR but this setup doesn't bother me, in fact it anchors some realism to the plot.

The school rape i find it pointless but i guess dev has a plan for it. The prison rape feels integral to the story and theme. Either indirectly backs up the sis's fucked up character, or a possible setup for that victim's storyline later on, or simply invoke the realism of prison life with hermas. Its not rape for the sake of rape(try some of the rape games, you'll understand) so i see nothing wrong with dev dipping toes into the controversial to the enhance the narrative. Personally i hope dev doesn't shy away from his vision of the game just because of some controversial topics.
Okay thanks i got the points you talked about and i understand them truthfully , cant wait to see what will happen in the future i might be scared that the dev will f up the game and dont give it its true potential because it has a lot , its hard to come by good games these days (lol been on this site since 2017) , for the school rape scene i still wish its either not gonna happen or it happens and you can either report it or be a psycho who enjoys it , for the prison rape scene i mean the call between sevtlana and the sis kinda calmed me down a little , but still hate them both , i agree with you the way the dev made us have such hate for in-game character is the same level of good writing as GoT Hating Geoffrey LoL , idk if he plans to have the sis as LI or just have her killed , gotta wait and see , and i just wish that not every main/important character is a herma idk if i am blind but didn't see Rachel pussy in the scenes so thats made me weird out a little bit about hermas i guess , thanks for reading and answering appreciate it
 
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Canto Forte

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MC is made not to care about anything. The rape scenes are rape for the sake of rape,
because MC has no opinion, the story has no plot or reason for rape to be there.
The security brass have no sway in prison and the end of someone in there is
the end of their plot. There is nothing building, just disgust we keep feeling for naught.
How are we supposed to enjoy the sweet romance with the hot dog lady in between
rape scenes with nothing to do with either MC or the story of MC.
Those points of view are a total disconnect.
The school rape
rape for the sake of rape
just have her killed
She kills MC in numerous dreams he has ... that look like memories.
Kind a like the sixth day with all the clones that wake up remembering their deaths.
 

Leonave

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Its all about the drama and the build up. I dislike the mom and sis too but the dev did a good job with their characters in my opinion if they are able to invoke such feelings from the player. It'll have a bigger impact on the the reconciliation story later on especially if they are both Love Interests, it makes players more emotional invested in the plot. Im really looking forward to it.

As for the NTR part, well i guess the sis is the one doing the fucking and putting it in so... and its with another female... moreover its pretty much a clear hate relationship between sis and mc for now, its not one sided, not neutral, not mutually romantic. Don't get me wrong, I'm not a fan of NTR but this setup doesn't bother me, in fact it anchors some realism to the plot.

The school rape i find it pointless but i guess dev has a plan for it. The prison rape feels integral to the story and theme. Either indirectly backs up the sis's fucked up character, or a possible setup for that victim's storyline later on, or simply invoke the realism of prison life with hermas. Its not rape for the sake of rape(try some of the rape games, you'll understand) so i see nothing wrong with dev dipping toes into the controversial to the enhance the narrative. Personally i hope dev doesn't shy away from his vision of the game just because of some controversial topics.

The comments on the scenario or their development as well as those of the characters and their intrinsic relationship are read by me but will NEVER influence the development of this one which is I remind it: already written and finished.



On the other hand, this being my first game, I take into account all the comments concerning, the code, the graphics and ESPECIALLY the gameplay.

Some recurrences in the comments can influence the reflection on the game mechanics but in no case the scenario.
 
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