This is one of those games which takes way too long to get to the point. The dialogue is pretty awkward too, and poorly paced.
Good art though. I really like the models. They're really cute.
My constructive criticism is to talk to people who also make VNS, and really know how to write great dialogue, as this certainly has promise, it just needs a good re-write, and it'd be a shame for these models to go to waste. That or collab with someone that can write dialogue really well.
Regardless of the future of this project, you're not hurting anyone with it existing, so please, keep working on it.
I wish the creator and the fanbase well, and I hope that you all get to continue to enjoy this project, as a lot of you seem to be into it.
Edit: I'm told that this project is actually complete, and from what I hear it doesn't have a decent ending, it just sorta stops. Well that sucks. Hope the writing is better for the next project.