That's how most young people have been talking/texting for a good decade, now, so complaining about that makes you sound (even to this old guy) like you are well past retirement age. I get irritated when (supposedly) professional journalists are sloppy, but I'm not expecting The Queen's English in sex games."though" written as "tho" or having "omg" instead of the full "oh my God"
She used to have a face like a model, but now she has a flushed and shy face, some may like the new style, but I prefer the old oneI've seen this opinion before and I don't know what it's based on. Amelie's face looks exactly the same in chapter 8 as it did in chapter 1 to me.
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The only difference is that the dev uses colder/blue colors now whereas in the earlier chapters he used yellow/warmer colors and made things a lot brighter.
This game has serious issues, like the dev refusing to fix all the clipping in his scenes, the story going nowhere, it becoming a kinetic novel, slower development times etc. You guys should focus on those more.
for the thousand time, early junewhen its the next release???
Every time this question is asked, the update is delayed another 3 weeks. Cumulative.when its the next release???
Tomorrowwhen its the next release???
I can understand Kylee saying "omg" as "oh em gee" but "tho" is lazy. It's a nitpick, sure, but when your game relies on text it might be a good idea to type the whole thing out just for the sake of enjoyment. If it fits the character then 100% use it (as said, like Kylee) or when appropriate (such as the texting scenes) but in dialogue? Come on.That's how most young people have been talking/texting for a good decade, now, so complaining about that makes you sound (even to this old guy) like you are well past retirement age. I get irritated when (supposedly) professional journalists are sloppy, but I'm not expecting The Queen's English in sex games.
7-9 months. VERY fastmannn, this game is something else - models are fucking amazing - one of the very very few games where I like every female character I have seen (played till Ch5)
my highlight of this is the kissing - so few games have animated kissing scenes and they are so well done
how often is this updated with a new chapter?
anyone know any other games with some hot kissing stuff?
But that's the thing - I don't think it is lazy. It's just the way dialogue is written in 2023. Since texting became the predominant communication method, writing has become abbreviated anywhere it can be. I still automatically put 2 spaces after a period before starting the next sentence because that's how writing was taught back in the day, but I also understand that hardly anyone does this anymore and I don't consider it lazy to use just a single space. Times change, language changes with it. C'est la vie.I can understand Kylee saying "omg" as "oh em gee" but "tho" is lazy. It's a nitpick, sure, but when your game relies on text it might be a good idea to type the whole thing out just for the sake of enjoyment. If it fits the character then 100% use it (as said, like Kylee) or when appropriate (such as the texting scenes) but in dialogue? Come on.
Not saying the game is ruined and I'm too posh for bad grammar - just pointing out that it's lazy and if the dev is putting time into beautiful renders they could at least tidy up their writing... especially when they have 4,820 Patrons supporting them. The excuse that it's a porn game is really keeping it down. Porn games can have stellar writing. Shit, I love how Amelie is written here. We all do, clearly. I'm just hoping later chapters have less typos and shortcut words.
A visual novel with subpar grammar because texting became popular..? I'll stop here because it's clear we won't agree with one another. The good thing is that I'm on chapter 6 and I've spotted less grammatical errors (or "choices") than before. I think chapter 4 was rushed because the writing mistakes were very noticeable there.
I'm also enjoying the progress of Amelie and MC to the point that I'm ruining my sleep schedule. This damn game... I want to experience more of Amelie's story. I'm really not looking forward to reaching the end and waiting for the next update like I said before. That chapter 8 is approaching quickly at my pace.