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*laughs!*
Well done
I do like writing Chris as a character but y'know, looking Georgia over, it's easy to understand Chris's husband cheating!
Well done
I do like writing Chris as a character but y'know, looking Georgia over, it's easy to understand Chris's husband cheating!
Just out of curiosity, I was reading the bio for Dr. Amanda Walker, and it says she has a Bachelors of Science in biology, geology, and astrophysics ...so what is her doctorate in? Is it honorary? It doesn't say in there anywhere, you would think her primary area of study would be mentioned in her biography...
Sorry if this was mentioned, but I did not see it in a search.
Is it honorary? It doesn't say in there anywhere, you would think her primary area of study would be mentioned in her biography... Sorry if this was mentioned, but I did not see it in a search.
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Aces spot. I think you're the only person who has noticed.Just out of curiosity, I was reading the bio for Dr. Amanda Walker, and it says she has a Bachelors of Science in biology, geology, and astrophysics ...so what is her doctorate in?
Sorry if this was mentioned, but I did not see it in a search.
The omission however is quite deliberate...*wiggles eyebrows*. After all, as Annie said, it was a PR piece, no? But -very- well done indeed!
Obviously this game has a fair bit of lewd content coming up - but I also wanted to give some greater depth to the storyline too. So....Well let's just say there's a few other things in Chapter One that no one has picked up on yet it seems. Not that it matters in some ways. The game will continue to progress and hopefully be enjoyable regardless. But for those that dig...they'll get an insight into the characters and how to bed them a lot more easily. After all, I wrote all that stuff for a reason..
Well, makes a change from just repetitative clicking, no?
Laters!
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I'm almost pondering prizes for when people work things out....*thinks on this*
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Ooh, now I'm going to question everything.
Clearly, Sarah having a locker right between Chris and Annie is most suspicious. It doesn't make sense with her being the junior officer and accident prone as her file suggests. What if something accidentally detonated in her locker? It would take out the lockers of both her superior officers! Maybe there is something more to her than is apparent... Or Chris just wanted her locker next to hers for some "other" purpose...hmmm....
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That's the spirit!Ooh, now I'm going to question everything.
Clearly, Sarah having a locker right between Chris and Annie is most suspicious. It doesn't make sense with her being the junior officer and accident prone as her file suggests. What if something accidentally detonated in her locker? It would take out the lockers of both her superior officers! Maybe there is something more to her than is apparent... Or Chris just wanted her locker next to hers for some "other" purpose...hmmm....
I mean, in all seriousness, the game is utterly playable without all of this stuff but there is a lot of hidden meaning knocking around which can make it a much richer experience for the player. My ultimate goal is when the game is completed for someone to comment "Well, I never thought X was the one that did Y. Nor that I'd end up getting wed to Z!" and a thousand voices to cry out "You got wed to Z?!! And Y happened?!".
An oversimplification perhaps, but given each character has their own motivations and their stories are continuing in the background even if the player isn't aware of it (and some of the characters will not want the player aware of what they are up to) it could well be an interesting ride.
In my minds eye it's not just the MC that is playing this game. The characters are too.....
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Well if given the option my MC will be a nice, obedient, easily manipulated guy. The ladies seem so nice, I am sure he doesn't have to worry about their plans for him.That's the spirit!
I mean, in all seriousness, the game is utterly playable without all of this stuff but there is a lot of hidden meaning knocking around which can make it a much richer experience for the player. My ultimate goal is when the game is completed for someone to comment "Well, I never thought X was the one that did Y. Nor that I'd end up getting wed to Z!" and a thousand voices to cry out "You got wed to Z?!! And Y happened?!".
An oversimplification perhaps, but given each character has their own motivations and their stories are continuing in the background even if the player isn't aware of it (and some of the characters will not want the player aware of what they are up to) it could well be an interesting ride.
In my minds eye it's not just the MC that is playing this game. The characters are too.....
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Yep, thoses are some of the main things that separate good stories from bad for me. Players are kept on their toes guessing and not everything revolves around the MC.That's the spirit!
I mean, in all seriousness, the game is utterly playable without all of this stuff but there is a lot of hidden meaning knocking around which can make it a much richer experience for the player. My ultimate goal is when the game is completed for someone to comment "Well, I never thought X was the one that did Y. Nor that I'd end up getting wed to Z!" and a thousand voices to cry out "You got wed to Z?!! And Y happened?!".
An oversimplification perhaps, but given each character has their own motivations and their stories are continuing in the background even if the player isn't aware of it (and some of the characters will not want the player aware of what they are up to) it could well be an interesting ride.
In my minds eye it's not just the MC that is playing this game. The characters are too.....
This is why I always criticize when a VN shows the thoughts of other characters. I don't want to know if a girl fancies my character or not, I want to keep guessing if I've made the right choices from her expressions and reactions. Same goes for the scenes in which MC is not present. I don't want to see anything the MC cannot see. It breaks immersion. I want to be surprised, shocked even.
I'm really glad the seat belt sign is on with this game.
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Wait, wasn't Iowa the one which was missing? Ah damn, I really suck at remembering stuff.
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C'mon chaps it's me....if I'm going to have any "I" class vanish it was bound to be the one called Invincible wasn't it?
The Iowa is currently around Phoebe, and where Kelly is on detachment from. Easy mistake to make with me throwing lots of ships names out there.
But.....yeppers, the missing ship is indeed another interesting hidden for later
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Crowdsource time!
So ....just rendered my first naughty stuff ( which is an aces scene if I say so myself) but how big a dick is too big?
I must have given the chap a decent eight inches. Too much?
So ....just rendered my first naughty stuff ( which is an aces scene if I say so myself) but how big a dick is too big?
I must have given the chap a decent eight inches. Too much?
Naw, that is big, without going overboard. Famously, there were a few guys in the 70's that had 16-18 inch range and many games go that route. But 8 (20.3cm) is enough above average without being ridiculous.
On a related note, the world average is just over 5 inches (13cm), so that should make some people feel better.
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I suppose the question is: do you wish to cater more for male fantasy or general believability? A lot of males think that their (in)adequacy problems would be largely solved by just one more inch -- or three.
I suspect that a lot of females may be titillated by the thought of a 10-inch blutwurst, but would be somewhat apprehensive at the prospect of actually being forcefully drilled by one.
On the other hand, your characters are rendered as realistically (and quite decently) human, but a hero should have reasonably heroic proportions. So, a rough (ribbed?) eight inches seems to be a fair compromise.
Keep up the good work!
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8 inches (over 20cm) is quite extreme imho. As a football player and military guy, who had to use common shower areas, I know that even most black guys didn't reach that.^^ So personally I would prefer a more realistic approach. Especially since you seem to have several paths the story can lead to. It's the future, so maybe have a penis enhancement down the line for the big penis lovers, but keep the size more normal for everyone else.
P.S.: Only a minority of women would be able to take a penis above 8 inches and way less would actually enjoy that. Asian women would be a no go almost completely... Just telling to the people, who wish they had such a monster.
Edit: 8 inches puts you in the top 0,5%
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IMO too much yes. There are already too many games with pike-wielding guys that make me feel uncomfortable when they're about to impale skinny lasses. I would prefer the MC to stand out for his actions, wit and charm rather than an oversized spanner. I say finesse over brawn.
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I mean at this point its just a number, give us something to look at, on general note bigger sausages just look better in scenes and are easier to pose
6-8" seems an acceptable range for realism; factoring in that you are the (anti?)hero. The real question is: do any of the girls have an even bigger plaything tucked away somewhere? Rah-Rah loves her <cough> "weapons"; Annie's probably over-engineered something; Chris.. well! Chris is Chris...
Yeah, he is the hero(or anti), he should not be below average, even if it is not massive, it should be 'healthy' to large. I mean, if you are going the fem-dom route, you might be into the micro thing, but I assume most of us want to play a guy who is at least as big as we are... So I would say 7-8 would be minimal for what is effectively a porn star.6-8" seems an acceptable range for realism; factoring in that you are the (anti?)hero. The real question is: do any of the girls have an even bigger plaything tucked away somewhere? Rah-Rah loves her <cough> "weapons"; Annie's probably over-engineered something; Chris.. well! Chris is Chris...