Ren'Py Abandoned Heavy Five [Ch.2RS] [Nottravis]

[Nottravis]

I think I'll stop commenting for a little while, or at least read the previous few posts very very carefully first and really really think about what I'm saying this is happening a bit too frequently for my liking

I never do!

Your memory wipe engram is reaching the end of the time delay before it reverses. These side effects are, unfortunately, unavoidable. Not to worry, Thea, your followers are preparing your new identity right now, I'm sure.

*looks thoughtful!*

You aren't alone! Thea is always watching and you can never escape from ceiling Becca!

This is known *nods sagely*

 

[Nottravis]

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[Nottravis]

Morning guys, my apologies for not being to respond to everything this morning. V.Biz with the chapter.

Loving the headers btw! Totes.

Laters!

 

[I'm Not Thea Lundgren!]

Morning guys, my apologies for not being to respond to everything this morning. V.Biz with the chapter.

Loving the headers btw! Totes.

Laters!

I'm not that good at the putting together part of the artwork, but I'm really good with ideas; could I submit an idea in place of the actual artwork, or does it have to be completed?

 

[Nottravis]

Ok, didn't really like how the previous one turned out, so I tweaked it a little
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I do sorta like this one *isn't sure what the red text is tho!*

Minor adjustment to the banner:

Spoiler: still meh.

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I also sorta like this one! *loves the effect*

*is torn!*

My initial thoughts are that we shouldn't have Becca on any of the headers tho. She's not in the game and we mustn't mislead peeps in case some oddball actually fancies her.

I think *lights a silk cut and ponders*, and I apologise for not saying this before (although largely as I had no idea what it should look like) that the Vanguard should defo be in as it underlines that spacey bit, the three main gals for sure and also mebbe Amanda as a min. She's fwightfully important, plus! Milf!

But these are all far, far better than not only what I currently have but also what I could have come up with! *has no skilz*. I'm massively grateful.

 

[Nottravis]

I'm not that good at the putting together part of the artwork, but I'm really good with ideas; could I submit an idea in place of the actual artwork, or does it have to be completed?

An idea is cool!

 

[I'm Not Thea Lundgren!]

My initial thoughts are that we shouldn't have Becca on any of the headers tho. She's not in the game and we mustn't mislead peeps in case some oddball actually fancies her.

Oddball? Huh...

I think *lights a silk cut and ponders*, and I apologise for not saying this before (although largely as I had no idea what it should look like) that the Vanguard should defo be in as it underlines that spacey bit, the three main gals for sure and also mebbe Amanda as a min. She's fwightfully important, plus! Milf!

Is Amanda a milf? I thought she was childless? But I do get what you mean, total babe!

*has no skilz*

Your skilz lie in a different area
Ooh err, I didn't mean for that to sound rude!

 

[Akamari]

But these are all far, far better than not only what I currently have but also what I could have come up with! *has no skilz*.

I wonder if I should start a cult worshipping the original banner...

 

[Huitieme]

I do sorta like this one *isn't sure what the red text is tho!*

Red text is "Heavy Five" in Japanese. I've been inspired by the Akira logo

 

[Nottravis]

*dances happily!*

 

[Goblin Baily: DILF]

Banner attempt

Spoiler: for the meh.

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it lacks Kelly

Is it Chris speaking on the dom path?
If so, MC will be relieved at midnight, will he not?

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ps : er, there is an other metaphor with "the penguins", let me see ... unsee!!

actyally if you read Chris's bio when she is flustered it says "she has plans for you..."

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*dances happily!*

I don't think anyone ever danced in the stocks...

 

[Nottravis]

Red rext is "Heavy Five" in Japanese. I've inspired by the Akira logo
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Ah!!!! Of course!

Yeah, I see "Heavy" in katakana now. The "Five" looks a bit odd to me but that maybe due to the font.

Sorry. Feel so dim! Good example of not seeing something when you don't expect it to be there I suppose!

 

[Nottravis]

I don't think anyone ever danced in the stocks...

Just wait and see then... *grins*

 

[DA22]

Ok, didn't really like how the previous one turned out, so I tweaked it a little
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Very nice one, just not sure it is best pic of Ra-Rah, then again I am very partial to her looks in VR game, so might be just me. Also love the Frap one.

 

[Huitieme]

Ah!!!! Of course!

Yeah, I see "Heavy" in katakana now. The "Five" looks a bit odd to me but that maybe due to the font.

Sorry. Feel so dim! Good example of not seeing something when you don't expect it to be there I suppose!

I'm just a little sad that katakana aren't that "sexy". But 重い五 wouldn't have worked as well :/

 

[DA22]

Just wait and see then... *grins*

How come I doubt that it will be any ballroom dancing?

 

[I'm Not Thea Lundgren!]

I wonder if I should start a cult worshipping the original banner...

Don't you think we have enough cults already?

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*dances happily!*

That looks foreboding! *must start behaving better*

How come I doubt that it will be any ballroom dancing?

I don't think there'll be much room for your balls to dance in that!

 

[DA22]

Don't you think we have enough cults already?

That looks foreboding! *must start behaving better*

I don't think there'll be much room for your balls to dance in that!

Well you do not need much room for a horizontal tango and if it is for SP, I somehow doubt trhat any balls will be hurt in the making of that scene

 

[Nottravis]

Well you do not need much room for a horizontal tango and if it is for SP, I somehow doubt trhat any balls will be hurt in the making of that scene

Not with the results of the poll, no!

 

[DA22]

Not with the results of the poll, no!

No worries,you will always have chances to add that later if you wish to.