So I played the game (yet another game I have ignored because of the pitch in the OP, adult games need to up their summary writing). Didn't manage to have sex (don't even know if it's possible). Acted as I felt I should and avoided the hints.
As the game is huge on "missing stuff" I'm going to wait and play again to see how exactly does it feel on different paths. As for a single playtrough my thoughts are as follows:
Nottravis - you did a great job writing the game. I liked the characters, I liked the choices, I like where the story seems to be going. I never understood how the swordfight is supposed to work, but than again - I won by dropping two special attacks and just spamming the normal one after that. So it's ok.
I like the characters, tho Rah-Rah turning in to something more than a well-meaning dumb blonde didn't sit well with me. I get it, there is a mystery to uncover now, but I would have liked her as she is. I'm curious to see how she will turn out.
The other characters are mainly cool and funny, tho the civilians are kind of "meh". I also didn't like the doctor, she rubs me the wrong way... but I guess that was on purpose. Actually I guess the civis being meh is also as intended. Having family in the military I actually liked how the officers both shit on it and shit on the civis.
All in all it's a really cool game and I do intend to replay it in few days. Congrats on creating it.