Nottravis

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Is there a bit too much light on Becca? The rest looks good, also, just my view. :)
Might be. Tbh I just slammed the two piccies together and didn't change anything else at all.

(For One and Two almost all images were rendered as a background and the character separately and slapped on top of each other as my card couldn't handle the size)
 

somebodynobody

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Read the spoiler about adding boobs, see there is a Becca remaster, notice no boobs. I feel we were lied to by that plot spoiler, just my guess though.

As an actual critique, the lighting does look some better. The two changes I would like to see made are making the desk/objects less shiny, they feel like they were all wrapped in a latex bdsm suit, and the left side of the desk matches a bit too much with wall color so it makes the drawers kind of look like they are floating.

I think Thea means the under boob is getting whited out from the light.
 
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Nottravis

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Her face does look better though, and we would all love to see what Notty could do with a real rig instead of a hamster. Next chapter could take bit longer then cause she might be having a bit to much fun:).
The stuff I pose to try out - and then have to discard as I just don't have the ooomph to make a set of 30 plus of them in time... :(

So often I've had to go simpler. It's a killer - it really is. Still! Three didn't look too bad, and Four is shaping up. Really only the first two which are meh
 
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