Ren'Py Abandoned Heavy Five [Ch.2RS] [Nottravis]

[I'm Not Thea Lundgren!]

Weeeeellll......

Feedback would suggest a bit too far....

Apparently VR is a bit much too. Oh as is one of Sarah's scenes....

Even C7 got a "You can't put that in!"

*is thinking*

But, surely as ACIO, it's up to the player to decide how far to go?

*preens!*

I do honestly try my best with what I have to build as real a world as possible. Obviously there will always be some limitations to what I can do either due to skills or asset availability (even though I change as much of them as possible). But no one can say I don't give it a bash

I'm always really pleased when someone notices something like this. I mean, I know it doesn't really matter. Who really cares if I get the blanket right in a porn game? But I do - and it's lovely when someone else does to

I love your attention to detail, I'm always looking out for that extra little bit that you put in, it isn't needed, but it's really nice when I see it.

She's worried I'll get the internet equivalent of firebombed for one part *sneaks into his PM*

Now -I'm- intrigued!

 

[PJWhoopie]

Apparently VR is a bit much too. Oh as is one of Sarah's scenes....

Even C7 got a "You can't put that in!"

*is thinking*

nooooooooo!!!!!!!

This would be a greatest fear of mine (concerning H5). That I have been going along on the journey, being teased about what is to come, only to have it dumbed down or made more "palatable to a larger audience".

Hogwash!

We want to see the bed room of your mind with unfiltered access! Don't keep us waiting at the front door while you frantically clean up all the dirty laundry and move the fun bits from the night stand into a locked drawer...

not fair... not fair...

 

[I'm Not Thea Lundgren!]

Isn't this precisely the right feedback?
I mean, how would you react if it was: "yeah, the game was nice, keep going"?

I can't believe it's come to this...
I agree with my fellow pervert in this instance, and as I previously said, you do give plenty of warnings about what's coming, so people can very easily skip it.

 

[Nottravis]

But, surely as ACIO, it's up to the player to decide how far to go?

Yep. Totally.

Her concerns on the scenes are even with ACIO is it might take people out of the left field tho. She's right to raise them as concerns, ultimately up to me as to whether they need tweaking. I think it might be a case of I need to make what's coming in two scenes a lot clearer as, perhaps, they might be a surprise even with the gate.

On the SP she's probs on firmer ground. There isn't really a gate on the SP other than "Look, you saw the first one so you -know- this is all going to be a bit rough and non-consent - and besides you're playing the bastard path so what do you expect?" type of expectation. So the stocks are fine, the chair is fine (ish) the lesbian scenes are fine - but....maybe the brazier scene does need to come out *is thinking*

 

[Nottravis]

nooooooooo!!!!!!!

This would be a greatest fear of mine (concerning H5). That I have been going along on the journey, being teased about what is to come, only to have it dumbed down or made more "palatable to a larger audience".

Hogwash!

We want to see the bed room of your mind with unfiltered access! Don't keep us waiting at the front door while you frantically clean up all the dirty laundry and move the fun bits from the night stand into a locked drawer...

not fair... not fair...

Oh that? Oh no, that wasn't a sex scene. Her biggest concern/objection was to a joke believe it or not....

 

[Huitieme]

I can't believe it's come to this...
I agree with my fellow pervert in this instance, and as I previously said, you do give plenty of warnings about what's coming, so people can very easily skip it.

Why are y'all so surprised to agree with me when it's ever so obvious that I be totes right all the time!?

 

[I'm Not Thea Lundgren!]

Why are y'all so surprised to agree with me when it's ever so obvious that I be totes right all the time!?

Oh totes!

 

[TomberryDude]

Oh that? Oh no, that wasn't a sex scene. Her biggest concern/objection was to a joke believe it or not....

All I hope is that the game doesn't take a super depressing turn. I mean I expect things to go south, especially with a lot of routes some of them are probably gonna be harsh. But I'm not gaming to feel bad about things. Especially games I might masturbte to.

 

[I'm Not Thea Lundgren!]

All I hope is that the game doesn't take a super depressing turn. I mean I expect things to go south, especially with a lot of routes some of them are probably gonna be harsh. But I'm not gaming to feel bad about things. Especially games I might masturbte to.

You'll only ever see the darker stuff if you choose to go down that route, and you don't strike me as the arsehole route kind of player!

 

[Nottravis]

All I hope is that the game doesn't take a super depressing turn. I mean I expect things to go south, especially with a lot of routes some of them are probably gonna be harsh. But I'm not gaming to feel bad about things. Especially games I might masturbte to.

Well I can't guarantee that - largely as what can impact on an individual is of course a very personal matter and can never be fully accounted for.

All I can really say is that the tone of the game doesn't change at all. You know that elements of it are very silly and that my tongue is usually very firmly in my cheek for it. You also know that some paths can be rough or harsh - but you also know that I do my best to gate everything.

So in theory, if you're after a very silly funny romp then I still have you covered. So, for example, the SP stuff is quite rough. Very. But, it's also easily avoidable.

 

[Huitieme]

All I hope is that the game doesn't take a super depressing turn. I mean I expect things to go south, especially with a lot of routes some of them are probably gonna be harsh. But I'm not gaming to feel bad about things. Especially games I might masturbte to.

You intend to masturbate to it!? Isn't it kinda like raping the Joconde!?

 

[PJWhoopie]

ok... will wait with abated breath... but still. I like jokes, so bring em' on.

and I'll agree with Tobmerrydude above -at least "part" of what he says - about the depressing turn stuff.... but still, I'll play the hand I am dealt and dance with who "brung me"... At the same time, I am sliiiigggghtly suspicious.... Brit (ok, UK) authors are notorious for "drama for drama's sake"...

**P.S**
I really like Huitieme's H5 Banner... is it the "unofficial" one or...?

 

[Nottravis]

ok... will wait with abated breath... but still. I like jokes, so bring em' on.

and I'll agree with Tobmerrydude above -at least "part" of what he says - about the depressing turn stuff.... but still, I'll play the hand I am dealt and dance with who "brung me"... At the same time, I am sliiiigggghtly suspecious.... Brit (ok, UK) authors are notorious for "drama for drama's sake"...

Nah not me.

I mean you know that something is up. Nothing is going to come out of left field in that respect. No sudden "Oh no! The station is on fire...." from me

 

[TomberryDude]

You intend to masturbate to it!? Isn't it kinda like raping the Joconde!?

Not if my route leads to consensual sex with her, interesting you'd use the french name of the Mona Lisa. At least I think we only use that name in France.

Well I can't guarantee that - largely as what can impact on an individual is of course a very personal matter and can never be fully accounted for.

All I can really say is that the tone of the game doesn't change at all. You know that elements of it are very silly and that my tongue is usually very firmly in my cheek for it. You also know that some paths can be rough or harsh - but you also know that I do my best to gate everything.

So in theory, if you're after a very silly funny romp then I still have you covered. So, for example, the SP stuff is quite rough. Very. But, it's also easily avoidable.

Fair point, there's harsh stuff that gets to me and that don't get to me. Hell sometimes not harsh stuff gets to me. It also depends how it's done.

I'm not gonna lie, that sentence about your tongue I wasn't sure how it was gonna end.

 

[I'm Not Thea Lundgren!]

Nah not me.

I mean you know that something is up. Nothing is going to come out of left field in that respect. No sudden "Oh no! The station is on fire...." from me

So what you're saying is... We won't have to climb in through a window and choose between two potential lovers?

 

[Nottravis]

So what you're saying is... We won't have to climb in through a window and choose between two potential lovers?

Damn.

*goes to change her plot for Chapter Six*

 

[TomberryDude]

Damn.

*goes to change her plot for Chapter Six*

Great, now we're gonna have to chose between 2 windows and 4 love interests. Travis is a cruel mistress.

 

[I'm Not Thea Lundgren!]

Great, now we're gonna have to chose between 2 windows and 4 love interests. Travis is a cruel mistress.

Yeah, sorry about that!

 

[Akamari]

An earlier version practically had Kirk beaming into the shower (that old perv!) *had made the shower light too bright!*

Never thought of it that way! Now, I'll never think of it any other...

but....maybe the brazier scene does need to come out *is thinking*

You'd took out the dessert?! Now, the brazier is "a bit" , but it is a smutty fan fiction, so more shocking stuff is rather to be expected. I can't feel bad for anything happening to Scarlet because this is not a story we're experiencing. And t's non-canon.

 

[I'm Not Thea Lundgren!]

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**P.S**
I really like Huitieme's H5 Banner... is it the "unofficial" one or...?

It's one he created himself I believe