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Ren'Py Abandoned Heavy Five [Ch.2RS] [Nottravis]

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Akamari

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Nottravis said:
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I don't love it to be honest. (WTF you mean you don't love it? I thought you love Annie!) (Shut up, Annie romance MC! Not your turn to play now!)

Err...where was I? Right. I mean it's not bad (which still means it's good), but it evokes in me why I don't like animations in general. The mechanical stiffness.

It's strange because you know I love your winks, but add the "kiss" to it and suddenly it looks odd. I think it may be that with just a wink I focus on the eye, so it works. But add more movement, my focus is on the whole face and it feels like there isn't enough movement.

I may just really be a bitch to please in this area, but it's why I prefer still renders.
 
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Akamari said:
That too! Original Chapter One wink was better speedwise.(y)
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I think a poster earlier also mentioned the missing cheek scrunch that should happen with a wink, it being behind the hair probably makes it also harder to see. I mostly agree on the speed, unless it is supposed to be that slow, like a joke wink/kiss that is being over emphasized.
 
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somebodynobody said:
I think a poster earlier also mentioned the missing cheek scrunch that should happen with a wink, it being behind the hair probably makes it also harder to see. I mostly agree on the speed, unless it is supposed to be that slow, like a joke wink/kiss that is being over emphasized.
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Yep, a slight cheek scrunch would be a +:
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And i agree also about a faster wink (both eyes movements), to be desynchronized with the kiss, would be more natural.
The animation length would be the same as before.:)
 
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Botox2000 said:
Yep, a slight cheek scrunch would be a +:
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And i agree also about a faster wink (both eyes movements), to be desynchronized with the kiss, would be more natural.
The animation length would be the same as before.:)
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That is a good point...
 
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Botox2000 said:
Well thanks TheDevian if i may understand it right.:unsure:;)

As i couldn't myself mimic this face expression, i had to find a good example first before any thoughts.:rolleyes:
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Don't get me wrong, I don't think that girl was the best example to copy, she looked pretty uncomfortable, but the point stands. ;)
 
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Nottravis said:
Got bored....
Thought I'd mess with rays and puddles for a bit :)

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I love the setting! The reflections of the sky and plants in the water look perfect.
The "halo" above Gloria looks a bit strange, imo. Is it a way to show the favor of the Gods? Shouldn't it give her zenithal illumination? (top of head, shoulders, arms, shield and sword, at least)
 
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Sulring Durgul said:
I love the setting! The reflections of the sky and plants in the water look perfect.
The "halo" above Gloria looks a bit strange, imo. Is it a way to show the favor of the Gods? Shouldn't it give her zenithal illumination? (top of head, shoulders, arms, shield and sword, at least)
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Nah it just shows the gods have good taste and what it is they are focusing on. ;)
 
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Sulring Durgul said:
I love the setting! The reflections of the sky and plants in the water look perfect.
The "halo" above Gloria looks a bit strange, imo. Is it a way to show the favor of the Gods? Shouldn't it give her zenithal illumination? (top of head, shoulders, arms, shield and sword, at least)
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Thank you.:)

You're right of course in that having rays on the beloved Gloria would be so much a better composition.

Sadly the hamster isn't having it :( If I try to ray bounce off her it just has a fit and crashes. I suspect too much work in trying to zip the light off the sword, the puddles and the shield as it tries to work out the path of all the rays?

*asks a lot of her hamster some times*

One day tho....one day....
 
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