VN Ren'Py Abandoned Hex Nymphs: The Luna Moonslay Chronicles [v0.4] [Amborella]

[Demoness_Kiss]

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feedback: you should address when the guard or the woman(trying to enter in the city) are speaking and when it's the narrator/you describe what's happening

and maybe add a few backgrounds during the dialogue between the MC and the succubus ^^

 

[Deleted member 5189987]

Are the tentacles avoidable?

Yes, most scenes will be optional. If you don't like tentacle content, you need to stay out of the water.

 

[Deleted member 5189987]

feedback: you should address when the guard or the woman(trying to enter in the city) are speaking and when it's the narrator/you describe what's happening

and maybe add a few backgrounds during the dialogue between the MC and the succubus ^^

Thank you for your feedback. I will look into it.

 

[bbbbb12345]

The MC's Hot

 

[Gudil]

Yes, most scenez will be optional. If you don't like tentacle content, you need to stay out of the water.

Thanks for answering, I will give it a try

 

[DickBobyson]

Why is it always the hottest models are always female protag, ntr, bestaility, tentacles etc. It sucks

 

[Deleted member 5189987]

Why is it always the hottest models are always female protag, ntr, bestaility, tentacles etc. It sucks

Most scenes will be avoidable if they are not to your liking.

 

[DickBobyson]

Most scenes will be avoidable if they are not to your liking.

Tentacles are the only scenes I see in your screenshots.. so I would be avoiding every scene.

 

[Deleted member 5189987]

Tentacles are the only scenes I see in your screenshots.. so I would be avoiding every scene.

The screenshots do not display all content.

 

[Nymphonomicon]

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THX for the share...

I see no contradiction with that statement. She is clearly proud of her weapons, all three of 'em.

 

[Deleted member 5189987]

I see no contradiction with that statement. She is clearly proud of her weapons, all three of 'em.

What is her third weapon?

 

[Ghost'']

Amborella: Tales of the Huntress [v0.2.5] Android Port

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[FightmeLaiLai]

The writing is pretty good. Way better than most female protag games I have come across so i don't think you need a second supplement writer to be honest. I would however suggest increasing more dialogues from Luna's perspective and lesser 3rd person point of view to allow the reader to immerse more with Luna. You probably also need to step up a notch with the sex scenes script. Make it more erotic and interesting to compensate for the ' lack of ' visuals.

As above, I think the biggest drawback you may likely encounter is the game feels more of a novel than a visual novel due to artist commission. Granted of coz this seems like a demo version but i feel that will be the problem unless you are willing to dish out the dough to get more art commissions. Its somewhat the same reason why i dislike Jap porn games due to constant clicking (several times) of every visual through the next visual.

 

[Deleted member 5189987]

The writing is pretty good. Way better than most female protag games I have come across so i don't think you need a second supplement writer to be honest. I would however suggest increasing more dialogues from Luna's perspective and lesser 3rd person point of view to allow the reader to immerse more with Luna. You probably also need to step up a notch with the sex scenes script. Make it more erotic and interesting to compensate for the ' lack of ' visuals.

As above, I think the biggest drawback you may likely encounter is the game feels more of a novel than a visual novel due to artist commission. Granted of coz this seems like a demo version but i feel that will be the problem unless you are willing to dish out the dough to get more art commissions. Its somewhat the same reason why i dislike Jap porn games due to constant clicking (several times) of every visual through the next visual.

Thank you very much for your compliments and feedback. I think adding more dialogue is a great tip, since it adds more of Luna's personality to the game. And describing sexual scenes is something I am working on, it's something I have never done before. But I am sure that I will become a better writer as I gain experience and get feedback from people.

 

[Ubtsha]

Why is it always the hottest models are always female protag, ntr, bestaility, tentacles etc. It's GREAT!

 

[Ares02]

gotta say, consentacles are always top-notch content

 

[SinisterFrog]

Art looks amazing. Definetly will play.

 

[Deleted member 5189987]

gotta say, consentacles are always top-notch content

Art looks amazing. Definetly will play.

Thank you both for your kind words.

 

[Slavoj]

The art is really something else, so good. But, and i know it's too early in development to say something like this for sure, so feel free to not pay attention to my comment, wouldn't something like comics be more in your ballpark? So far the game elements fell lacking (sorry if i seem mean, don't wanna be )

 

[The Rogue Trader]

The art is really something else, so good. But, and i know it's too early in development to say something like this for sure, so feel free to not pay attention to my comment, wouldn't something like comics be more in your ballpark? So far the game elements fell lacking (sorry if i seem mean, don't wanna be )

Well, this is interactive fiction with a fairly linear story and some options about how to walk through it.
The debate on whether or not Visual Novels qualify as games is old and we wouldn't solve it even if we spent a week sitting at a table discussing while sharing beer and pretzels.
I don't think "The Maiden Hunter" will ever have a gameplay. Nor do many of the most classic Visual Novels, especially lewd ones, so while your point is perfectly true, personally I don't see it as a problem, as long as fun sexual adventures of Luna and friends keep flowing.