Here are a few more typos
0.1.1.1: Yvette removing sexy top at reception:
The removing stiffness part isn’t really working for you…
…the amazing sight of her stretched out bare chest has quit the opposite effect on you.
Replace quit with quite. Replace stretched with thrust (stretched might be appropriate if her nipples were being pulled, but the pressure is from the other side in this case)
Player: “OMG Yvette! What a cleavage!
Remove the a “What cleavage!”
0.1.1.1: Ivy breast bump and sex:
Ivy: You dick is exactly like it want it to be right now.
Try: Your dick is exactly like I want it right now, or else, Your dick is exactly where it wants to be right now.
You worry for a moment what would happen if she puts all her weight on you…
Either “what will happen if she puts” or “what would happen if she put”
Seeing you worried face…
Replace you with your
Ivy: “Don’t worry [PlayerName]. I won’t crush you between my thighs or under by pussy. *smiles*
Replace by with my, but do you mean “under my crotch” or “with my pussy” (urk)?