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VN Ren'Py Abandoned Home Trainer - Domestic Corruption [v0.2.1] [Deviant_smite]

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Hordragg

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I REALLY didn't want to write this, since this could be considered off-topic (i personally don't think it is, since i'm talking about the game theme, but who knows), but since we have to explain everything theses days so be it, BTW i will try to link the "fonts" so you guys don't think that i took this all of the voices in my head...

Here we go, firstly " " is could sound too "heavy" and people often think that is only applied to heavy situations like schizophrenia, so lets replace by " ".
Secondly, what you may consider "just a kink" is indeed a , and some of them are considered "mental disorders" (pedophilia for exemple) and could lead to incapacitating the individual who has them.

So, Assuming that her mother story is true, she probably has DPD ( ) and guess what DPD is... a duck species? no, is mental disorder:

Symptoms of dependent personality disorder include:
  • An inability to make common, everyday decisions without the reassurance of others
  • Avoidance of personal responsibility, including tasks requiring independent functioning
  • An intense fear of abandonment and a sense of devastation or helplessness when relationships
  • Avoidance of disagreement with others out of fear of losing support or approval
  • Willingness to tolerate mistreatment and abuse from others
  • Placing the needs of their caregivers above their own
  • Over-sensitivity to criticism
  • Pessimism and lack of self-confidence, including a belief that they are unable to care for themselves
ALSO this ins't just about masochism (or sadism from her mother's part) which could be a mental disorder: "Sexual masochism is intentional participation in an activity that involves being humiliated, beaten, bound, or otherwise abused to experience sexual excitement. is sexual masochism that causes significant distress or significantly impairs functioning."

So yeah, i don't think that any of you is THAT eager to be punished when you are not a good girl (or boy ;)), but i'm not giving a diagnostic here and saying that she CERTAINLY have a mental disorder, but that kind of comportment could lead to bad things and the right approach of a PARENT is CERTAINLY no encouraging it or taking an active part (and pleasure) of it...

And I CERTAINLY got carried away in this wall of text :ROFLMAO::ROFLMAO::ROFLMAO:

Just to conclude... THIS IS JUST A GAME FFS!!! you can find it hot, nobody is "kink shaming" you, I'm just explaining why I have mixed feelings about all this.
Imma pop in for a minute and say this. Have any of you actually met someone with a personality disorder? I'm sure some of you have, but most probably have not got close enough to actually understand how it works. What makes a person have a personality disorder is not possessing some trait. But, the possession of such an extreme version that dominates a person's behaviour and seeps through into the entirety of their life.

High dependencies on others does not alone mean Dependent Personality Disorder. Non-indipendent people are reasonably common. Millions and Millions of people have a preference towards dependent situations.

The hallmark of a personality disorder is intense irrational deregulation. Someone with Dependent Personality Disorder doesn't just tend towards dependent relationships. They are pathologically incapable of self-function and act out in extreme and unsound ways when confronted with situations requiring independence. Often this involves dramatic acts of latching, even when not dictated by circumstances.

Some of the features include paranoia about irrational perceived abandonment, going to extreme lengths to avoid any kind of loss of favor with someone they are latched on to, and radical shifts in identity and behaviour to be more pleasing to the person they are dependent on.

I have met subs. I have met people with Cluster C disorders. No, the girl in this does not have DPD.
 
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Iblis

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im sorry guys i tried looking at the previous comments but its just not clear, can the MC be submissive in this game or can he only dominate?
 

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im sorry guys i tried looking at the previous comments but its just not clear, can the MC be submissive in this game or can he only dominate?
So far, he's developing into a dom for the younger girl. The relationship with the older is still a little undetermined. She is a bit of a take-charge kind of girl, but since she is mentoring MC's domination of the younger, I'm not sure I see him being fully submissive to her. If FemDom is your strong preference, this game MAY not be for you.
 

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im sorry guys i tried looking at the previous comments but its just not clear, can the MC be submissive in this game or can he only dominate?
Female domination at this game is actually lezdom. Maledom is main theme of the game, so MC won't be dominated. Look at author's words:

I'm playing around with some ideas, but I can't really get behind male role switching personally. Even when a girl says she is a switch, she is usually just a brat who likes topping from the bottom and rile the dom up, not a true submissive. I can see the MC take a passive role in some encounters and let the girl do her thing, but he won't submit to let's say a spanking and get off on it. It would be out of character, even as an optional choice.
 
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This was real hot, there's been games with a little bit of the punishment of the daughter kinda angle like that Shadows over Whatsit one or Hard Love (though that got real weird quick) ... but it's definitely something I want to see explored more.

I dig the aunt too, I really want to put a baby in her for some reason, maybe it's just because she has such an excellent style of parenting.

I'm not sure if you could do anything that'd lead to an option to not warn the girl in the toilet you were going to come, I tried a few different things (including saying no to helping, but that wasn't implemented yet so maybe is the key).

But yeah, I'm down with this game, I hope it's going to get real dark and rough, and I'll definitely keep an eye on it.
 

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I really really like the personalities of the three main characters in this game.

MC himself is looking to be dominant, and he worries that he's got a mean streak, but he is generally not an asshole and genuinely loves his aunt and cousin. And that's pretty rare for these types of games.

The aunt is sexy as hell, and wants what's coming to her daughter to happen. She doesn't want to be the one to do it (yet), but she definitely wants it to happen. Definite voyeur streak on her. I get the vibe that it's going to be MC-Daddy and Mommy disciplining their babygirl.

And the fact that babygirl is so obviously into it makes the situation hot, and not creepy as fuck. She wants to be a good girl. She wants to be used that way. And that desire for it to happen is what makes it hot. I'll be super happy once that safe word gets implemented.

Definitely looking forward to more of this.
 

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Overall a very enjoyable update.

The choice of the MC to cum on Nina's pillow and tell her she can't clean it until she passes the assignment was good, considering she's all too eager to be "punished," so finding something that's different from what she's expecting (and wanting) works well.

I like Hannah and thought her part of the story was suitably funny.

I'm not really interested in Sandra but if we'll be able to choose to not have a relationship with her in the future (as indicated at the end of the update) that works for me.

There were some spelling and grammar errors but nothing major. If I had to criticise one thing it would be that the character renders sometimes looked blurry even though you'd expect their faces/bodies to be the focal point of the scene. This was only a problem when they weren't close up images. It was like the render engine decided that they were background and shouldn't be fully in focus. Backgrounds being blurry is the way it probably should be as that's the way it is in the real world but the characters I'd expect to not be blurry. I don't have specific examples in mind but can go back and grab some screenshots if necessary. The renders in general are low res but decent and I expect higher res will add a lot to development time. Since I'm eager to get the story going I'm happy to accept lower res images.

Nina is still cute as hell! The little lip bite she does in the early part of her last punishment scene is adorable. And I'm looking forward to Ayleen letting me have some fun with her.
 

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I REALLY didn't want to write this, since this could be considered off-topic (i personally don't think it is, since i'm talking about the game theme, but who knows), but since we have to explain everything theses days so be it, BTW i will try to link the "fonts" so you guys don't think that i took this all of the voices in my head...

Here we go, firstly " " is could sound too "heavy" and people often think that is only applied to heavy situations like schizophrenia, so lets replace by " ".
Secondly, what you may consider "just a kink" is indeed a , and some of them are considered "mental disorders" (pedophilia for exemple) and could lead to incapacitating the individual who has them.

So, Assuming that her mother story is true, she probably has DPD ( ) and guess what DPD is... a duck species? no, is mental disorder:

Symptoms of dependent personality disorder include:
  • An inability to make common, everyday decisions without the reassurance of others
  • Avoidance of personal responsibility, including tasks requiring independent functioning
  • An intense fear of abandonment and a sense of devastation or helplessness when relationships
  • Avoidance of disagreement with others out of fear of losing support or approval
  • Willingness to tolerate mistreatment and abuse from others
  • Placing the needs of their caregivers above their own
  • Over-sensitivity to criticism
  • Pessimism and lack of self-confidence, including a belief that they are unable to care for themselves
ALSO this ins't just about masochism (or sadism from her mother's part) which could be a mental disorder: "Sexual masochism is intentional participation in an activity that involves being humiliated, beaten, bound, or otherwise abused to experience sexual excitement. is sexual masochism that causes significant distress or significantly impairs functioning."

So yeah, i don't think that any of you is THAT eager to be punished when you are not a good girl (or boy ;)), but i'm not giving a diagnostic here and saying that she CERTAINLY have a mental disorder, but that kind of comportment could lead to bad things and the right approach of a PARENT is CERTAINLY no encouraging it or taking an active part (and pleasure) of it...

And I CERTAINLY got carried away in this wall of text :ROFLMAO::ROFLMAO::ROFLMAO:

Just to conclude... THIS IS JUST A GAME FFS!!! you can find it hot, nobody is "kink shaming" you, I'm just explaining why I have mixed feelings about all this.
Wow ... huh ...
Honestly? I kind of assumed she was just bullshitting the MC to talk him into going along with her having S&M fun with her own daughter, but I've only played the first release.
 

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Hey,

Little mistake I think, when the "middle aged man" Pierre introduce himself, the MC introduce himself as "David" instead of the name we entered on game start.
 
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"Look at me, I'm a sly seductress!"

That scene was so adorable. I love that the game is going for a combination of funny / cute + caring / sadistic. Too many corruption games focus solely on dark / rough domination when the contrast between cute and cruel can add so much.

Her blush of anticipation when MC talks about being strict. Downcast to upturned eyes when she's 'slyly suggesting' she should be punished with a spanking. Nicely done.

I like how the scene works whether you read Nina as naive and over-eager or as deliberately egging him on, knowing that trying to top form the bottom would only get him to be more creative with her punishments.

Keep up the good work!



PS: If anyone is bothered by the name mixup and not comfortable enough with Renpy to change it themselves, here's the fixed script.
 

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I just finished the public release version, and will very soon update the thread accordingly.

I took a break from reading/participating in the discussion here for a few days, because I had no good news to give and it was making me feel bad.

Just read through everything and here is my input for some topics that came up:
Bagel/Donut: Donut! As you might have noticed, Nina is in charge of breakfast, because Ayleen only wants coffee and can't be bothered.

Nina has a disorder: I don't think so. As someone with no real medical background, I'd say whether or not someone has a disorder depends on pathology. If it's getting in the way, it's a disorder. Nina could function independently just fine, just not amazingly well. Mostly because she is a bit of an airhead and not super bright. If anything she has an "Early Exposure to Pornography Syndrome"(?), as so many of us have.

Stupid choices: Yeah, they are there. I didn't touch them yet, because I will add some stats to the characters that will be influenced by said choices. So there will be an overhaul of most of the stupid/inconsequential options when I release 0.3, or shortly thereafter. I'm not going to say much more on the stats, because it's not yet set in stone.

Render Quality: I'm rendering on a potato. I try to make it less obvious, but yeah, the baseline quality is outright terrible.

As pointed out by ImperialD: it does work in general but the above is the one instance (of fourteen) where smite2001 forgot to use Pname.
Hey, there was only the one instance in the coffee shop... : / The whole script only had three mentions of "David", two of which in the naming decision dialogue at the beginning.

If you find any grammar mistakes, or just linguistic weirdness, tell me please. I'm not a native English speaker, plus I don't have as much time for editing as I'd like to have.
 
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Hey, there was only the one instance in the coffee shop... : / The whole script only had three mentions of "David", two of which in the naming decision dialogue at the beginning.

If you find any grammar mistakes, or just linguistic weirdness, tell me please. I'm not a native English speaker, plus I don't have as much time for editing as I'd like to have.
I apologize for being imprecise: what I meant was that of the fourteen instances where the MC's name is used in the latest update, you only missed using the variable once. I was trying to disprove the following part of what WINTEX said
its not working in this update script.
For a non-native speaker you're doing very good in my book. Though you probably should take this with a grain of salt, seeing as I'm a non-native speaker myself. :giggle:
 
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I apologize for being imprecise: what I meant was that of the fourteen instances where the MC's name is used in the latest update, you only missed using the variable once. I was trying to disprove the following part of what WINTEX said

For a non-native speaker you're doing very good in my book. Though you probably should take this with a grain of salt, seeing as I'm a non-native speaker myself. :giggle:
It's alright, I wasn't really offended either way. Plus I was replying to like 10 comments at once, so it's probably my own fault for misinterpreting yours.
 
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Couple of things I noticed in 2.0

1. Hannah says "Where would I go to safe mobile bandwith" which should be "Where would I go to save mobile bandwidth"
2. No matter your name, you introduce yourself to the Cafe owner as "David", I'm not sure if it's to avoid giving your real name, or just a missed "Name" call, but yeah.
 

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Couple of things I noticed in 2.0

1. Hannah says "Where would I go to safe mobile bandwith" which should be "Where would I go to save mobile bandwidth"
2. No matter your name, you introduce yourself to the Cafe owner as "David", I'm not sure if it's to avoid giving your real name, or just a missed "Name" call, but yeah.
Thanks for the with/width remark, I fixed it for the next version.
The other issue you brought up I already fixed in 0.2.1, I highly recommend to download the new version.

Unrelated to that, I overlooked that the mac version was labelled 0.1.2 on the front page, but it already had download links to the new version. Both PC and mac versions are up to date.
 
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Render Quality: I'm rendering on a potato. I try to make it less obvious, but yeah, the baseline quality is outright terrible.
I doubt my machine could do better.

The main strengths of this game are the characters and Nina's facial expressions. And those come through well.
 
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A bit disappointed with the new update.. I think it s going too fast, there is no the buildup anymore.. The fact we already know what the daughter wants kills the fantasy. IMO would have been much better to keep the doubt about it, and make us believe the MC and the aunt are still manipulating her..
 
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