VN Ren'Py Abandoned Home Trainer - Domestic Corruption [v0.2.1] [Deviant_smite]

[smite2001]

so will I get to punish Nina by fuckin her ass?

Most definitely.

It is said that "New, slightly less childish portraits for Nina." were added, but right now there is no portraits for her at all. There should be some bug there.

I usually don't use portraits when the character's face is clearly visible in the main cg. I only have a handful of portraits for the characters and that means the facial expression on the portrait would differ from the one in the main screen most of the time.

That doesn't mean I don't have to put some more effort into using the portraits, especially for the MC.
They are just somewhat of a pain to code into the game, and right now I don't have too much time to spare.

 

[Guyin Cognito]

Hey, smite2001, quick question about this gag:

Spoiler: David watching "cartoons"

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Is she ... being forced to hold cum in her mouth ... in front of a crowd?
I'm guessing this is an Akabur game, probably a trainer, but I'm not sure who that character is.
Can I ask what the name of this is?

 

[quorkboy]

Spoiler: David watching "cartoons"

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As the game as few actual choices I'm left wondering how did I not get this scene? I played the latest update from my last save. Do I need to start again? At no point did my MC watch TV.

 

[smite2001]

Hey, smite2001, quick question about this gag:

Is she ... being forced to hold cum in her mouth ... in front of a crowd?
I'm guessing this is an Akabur game, probably a trainer, but I'm not sure who that character is.
Can I ask what the name of this is?

Yeah, Akabur it is, and you figured out what's happening pretty precisely I think. It's Hermione from the Witch Trainer game. One of the endings to be more precise. The game is very light on CGs, so I didn't find a more obvious one. At least it has the house crests in the background to give a hint as to what it is about.

 

[smite2001]

As the game as few actual choices I'm left wondering how did I not get this scene? I played the latest update from my last save. Do I need to start again? At no point did my MC watch TV.

You didn't get it because it is in 0.2.1. It seems like youre playing the android version, which is only 0.2.0. As I mentioned earlier, I do not have an Android phone, and there were people making conversions for all the other versions pretty quickly. If no one does it, I will eventually, but I'd have to set everything up first (it's a pain in the ass) and then can't even test it.

 

[quorkboy]

You didn't get it because it is in 0.2.1. It seems like youre playing the android version, which is only 0.2.0. As I mentioned earlier, I do not have an Android phone, and there were people making conversions for all the other versions pretty quickly. If no one does it, I will eventually, but I'd have to set everything up first (it's a pain in the ass) and then can't even test it.

I'm playing the Mac version but somehow missed that a new one came out yesterday. I'll play 0.2.1 later today! .

 

[Guyin Cognito]

BAD NERD! How could you not recognize the house crests from Harry Potter!
I have failed my nerd check this day ...
Thanks for filling me in, though!

I finally finished 0.2.1, and it was lots of fun. Various thoughts are spilling out somewhat ramblely.
That was definitely the best inclusion of supporter names I've ever seen. I hope you start a trend with that!
Looking forward to more of everything,
including Hannah, perhaps a "Prank War" of some kind? Hmm, social media, hmmmm...
If I were David, I would offer to give more and/or better orgasms to Nina based on her grades.
(But, what happens if she gets an "F?")
(Suddenly, I'm reminded of getting game tokens based on report card grades at Chucky Cheese...
... which feels like a very awkward thing to be remembering right now.)
I like the characters a lot. Ayleen is a lot of fun.
Wouldn't mind seeing a humorous "nightmare" sequence about a chubby Nina. For some reason, I'm seeing her getting lectured on her diet by a talking salmon.
Can't wait to meet Josh's sister. I wonder if Josh's debt will come up.
Not sure about this Molly path. Sounds like a good way for Nina's new motivational figure to end up living in a van, down by the river.
Okay, the thoughts in my head are getting gradually sillier. I think I stayed up too late. I definitely have a bit of "everything's funny when you're tired" going on.
Thanks for your work and your game, good times!

 

[Dalkala]

Holy fuck i never write here, but i had to say the writing is amazingly good. It hits all the fantasies right on the head. If the fantasy scene when MC is watching porn is something similar to what we'll get in the future, i honestly can't wait for more.

Now.. from personal experience i know how annoying it can be when every single player tries to give you their own opinion about your work, but the only thing, and i truly mean the only thing, that seems off in this game is how the MC is form such a family and has some sexual history, but has never heard of the dom/sub kink. It seems to me that literally its the first kink almost anybody discovers. Especially with his personality. Maybe adding a line that he knows about it, but has never sought it out or that he had intentionally avoided it because he didn't want to give in to his personality/being mean to people. Its a minor gripe, but i think it would make him a more believable character.


Despite all of that, still an amazing start and i will be watching this game from now on. Best of luck!

 

[smite2001]

(...) how the MC is form such a family and has some sexual history, but has never heard of the dom/sub kink. It seems to me that literally its the first kink almost anybody discovers. Especially with his personality. Maybe adding a line that he knows about it, but has never sought it out or that he had intentionally avoided it because he didn't want to give in to his personality/being mean to people. Its a minor gripe, but i think it would make him a more believable character. (...)

I didn't mean for him to come off as completely ignorant, more like a litte naive. His dominant behavior got him into trouble, so he treated it as something to avoid and fix about himself. That includes not delving down that particular porn rabbit hole.
I will see what I can do to make it a little more obvious.

 

[SlaveStates]

Nice game so far.

 

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[3D Reaver]

Another horse cock game.... Mc looks he is about 35-40 years old... Aunt can't be more an round 20... So he have a lot work to do....

he looks like he is in his early to mid 20s . men don't have smooth faces like that in their 30s.im talking about wrinkles not facial hair. maybe if you compare to the usual mc in these games that look about 14, and are shorter and thinner than the women.
il agree about the aunt and the horse cock though . at some point the size starts to look ridiculous

 

[SharkVampire]

Well this is game is something. I was expecting some typical incest story for one evening, but turns out its quite crazy stuff (in good way). The preview info don't give much information what will wait you in game, it's pretty standard so you can easily miss this game if you are picky. Ayleen got my attention, she doesn't look like model from magazine, but still she is qute attractive and I think she looks like a person who you can easily meet in any public place. What is I'm trying to say, is that she looks more like living person, than a doll.

I'm not sure what to expect about future versions, but the beginning was intriguing. The plot is absurd but funny, it's not like I laugh too much, but this game gave me smile. Will look for future version, it's hard to judge for now.

UPD. If i get right the idea of this game about all crazy stuff in this house, I would like to suggest give MC opportunity to buy some very kinky clothes for the girls. How much kinky? It's up to dev

 

[Spfjolietjake]

smite2001 loving this vn. I appreciate why the mc is being corrupted but just hope that before it's over he will actually be totally all in and will stop fighting it.

I really liked the Cafe scene with the "trend setter karen" with how the mc doesn't have to be nice to her.

Please keep the edge with this one. I wish you the best of luck and thank you for letting me play a little of my darkside looking forward to more

 

[smite2001]

I just created a SubscribeStar account, because people have sufficiently worried me that Patreon might shut me down eventually. It is still under review, but you can get the (unmodded) public version of my game there at all times, so consider bookmarking it anyway (and maybe even supporting me).

You can already find it in the main post on page 1, but here is the link as well:

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[Thermophob]

It is still under review, but you can get the pre-patched public version of my game there at all times, so consider bookmarking it anyway (and maybe even supporting me).

Don't do that. If Patreon finds about it, they will put you under review, and demand to remove it from SS.
Let me explain, Patreon doesn't give a fuck about anything, they are just worried to have plausible excuse. So as far as patch can not be tracked to you, they won't act. Publishing patched version elsewhere under same name as at Patreon won't work... I mean, they will ignore it as far as somebody doesn't complain, but as soon as somebody notices and complain to them, they will react automatically. So, in order to avoid all the trouble do it as other do. Publish the same version at both platforms, and let mysterious moders from lewdpatcher to do their work.

 

[smite2001]

Don't do that. If Patreon finds about it, they will put you under review, and demand to remove it from SS.
Let me explain, Patreon doesn't give a fuck about anything, they are just worried to have plausible excuse. So as far as patch can not be tracked to you, they won't act. Publishing patched version elsewhere under same name as at Patreon won't work... I mean, they will ignore it as far as somebody doesn't complain, but as soon as somebody notices and complain to them, they will react automatically. So, in order to avoid all the trouble do it as other do. Publish the same version at both platforms, and let mysterious moders from lewdpatcher do their work.

Hmmm... That certainly gives me something to think about.

I like that I can use paypal with patreon, but that is basically it. I'm actually concerned that they will shut me down over there because, I admit it, Nina DOES look young. Not so young that I'm worried about F95, but just about patreon. That's actually much more of a concern for me than the incest thing.

Maybe it would be better to just remove patreon (not for current members, just not blatantly advertise it anymore) and slowly transition over to SubscribeStar.

I will follow your advice and check that the SubscribeStar version stays unmodded for now.

 

[Paz]

Hmmm... That certainly gives me something to think about.

I like that I can use paypal with patreon, but that is basically it. I'm actually concerned that they will shut me down over there because, I admit it, Nina DOES look young. Not so young that I'm worried about F95, but just about patreon. That's actually much more of a concern for me than the incest thing.

Maybe it would be better to just remove patreon (not for current members, just not blatantly advertise it anymore) and slowly transition over to SubscribeStar.

I will follow your advice and check that the SubscribeStar version stays unmodded for now.

Slowly building your SubscribeStar for the off-chance push comes to shove is probably the better course of action.
At least Patreon rarely outright shut down pages, if ever. The usually put the page Under Review which gives you a bit of leeway in terms of time and means to get it back up.

But it surely doesn't hurt to have an alternative.

 

[Thermophob]

Hmmm... That certainly gives me something to think about.

I like that I can use paypal with patreon, but that is basically it. I'm actually concerned that they will shut me down over there because, I admit it, Nina DOES look young. Not so young that I'm worried about F95, but just about patreon. That's actually much more of a concern for me than the incest thing.

Maybe it would be better to just remove patreon (not for current members, just not blatantly advertise it anymore) and slowly transition over to SubscribeStar.

I will follow your advice and check that the SubscribeStar version stays unmodded for now.

Well, there are few games with MC's who look 12 at best. But you can make her 18 without room for ambiguous interpretation. For example, showing her driving, attending a college, having part time work, etc...
Subscribestar, as you will soon find out, is less user friendly. You first need to collect certain amount of money before being able to get your payment from them. Users must use their cards and real bank accounts, insted of PayPal... And finally, they charge more than Patreon. You certainly need to have account at SS, but at certain point, it's not viable as serious alternative to Patreon.

 

[Mathesar]

I like that I can use paypal with patreon, but that is basically it.

PayPal is the source of the incest ban, actually. Games like Dating My Daughter used to be huge on Patreon until PayPal told them they'd drop Patreon if they didn't ban certain things they found objectionable.