VN Ren'Py Abandoned Hunger for Chaos [v0.2] [SuperWriter]

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EZ8lt

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One piece is good, but I think the others are perfect descriptions. There is nothing more serious than life and death, and both Naruto and Bleach deal with the very serious moments. I can name you like a hundred episodes from each that are absolutely dramatic, and 100 that are so goofy and dumb.
I'm sad that you guys are ignoring the ultimate serious/goofy show, Gintama, in which even the course of one episode the tone perfectly switches from a death serious situation to a massively comedic one back and forth on several occasions.
 

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That's cool. It's subjective anyways and there is no reason to debate such things heh. I visited your site and seems like you got some books published? Hearing good things about Picture Perfect too, but it looked like vanilla romance incest plot which I'm not too into these days. I am looking forward to this one. Very interesting premise, and you seem to have the writing chops to pull it off. Good luck on the project :D
Haha, yup, I have around 25 erotica books published. Both games are based on books I have written because I was an author before I started doing this. But thank you for the support and I hope you continue to play!
I'm sad that you guys are ignoring the ultimate serious/goofy show, Gintama, in which even the course of one episode the tone perfectly switches from a death serious situation to a massively comedic one back and forth on several occasions.
Haha, you know what? I think you're right. not to mention it has some of the most badass fighting scenes in anime history

Interesting game! i really like Torry! looking forward for next update.
not a fan of dialogues in pp.
and the shortness for every chapter.
but this look interesting...

mc can knock a table over+++

hope ch.2 will be good too.
GoodLuck.
Glad both of you are enjoying the game! There's some really good stuff for chapter 2 so stay tuned =]
 
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The Game is great!!! Much supense and the Background of the Story is a real gem. Even the erotic Scenes are well placed. Every aspect is perfectly balanced. In my opinion you are a new shining star in the mass of game developers. I hope there will be more to come. Many thanks for the first chapter!
 

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The Game is great!!! Much supense and the Background of the Story is a real gem. Even the erotic Scenes are well placed. Every aspect is perfectly balanced. In my opinion you are a new shining star in the mass of game developers. I hope there will be more to come. Many thanks for the first chapter!
Wow, that seriously made my day, man. I really do work hard to make these games the best they can be, so it feels awesome to hear that someone thinks I'm doing a really great job. Keeps me motivated too!

I promise you I have a lot more coming =]
 

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Game by Superwriter ? might try it later... still a bit salty that this game is around while Summer Secret died... the mom from that game >>>> everyone so far in this game...

Heck the Mom from Summer Secret also >>>> the cast from Picture Perfect (the only ones that come close are Miracle, and Sasha if she didnt have tattoos).
 
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Game by Superwriter ? might try it later... still a bit salty that this game is around while Summer Secret died... the mom from that game >>>> everyone so far in this game...

Heck the Mom from Summer Secret also >>>> the cast from Picture Perfect (the only ones that come close are Miracle, and Sasha if she didnt have tattoos).
The models from SS, including the mom will be in my next slice of life game. The characters were never the problem, it was just the same old boring incest plot. So you'll be seeing them again as soon as I finish PP =]
 
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The models from SS, including the mom will be in my next slice of life game. The characters were never the problem, it was just the same old boring incest plot. So you'll be seeing them again as soon as I finish PP =]
So long as the mom doesnt get "blacked" I am all for it !! :love:
 
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Im guessing getting the black D. Since pretty sure thats a porn thing like saying brazzers. But not sure. (Possibly ntr i take it in this case?)

Also i like Sasha's tattoos personally lol
I'm assuming he meant, taking a BBC.
So just as long as it's not black, it's fine? That's a bit offensive, especially considering the fact that I'm black.
 
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So just as long as it's not black, it's fine? That's a bit offensive, especially considering the fact that I'm black.
When I say "blacked" its more than interracial sex... its about the stupid "race-play" element that comes with it...

Your a writer, you should know... in your game Picture Perfect the girls always say "damn landlord has a big dick".... in any game with "blacked" the girls never leave it at "damn Darius has a big dick"... its always something stupid and racist like "Damn Darius has a big BLACK dick"...

I mean leave the fucking race shit out of sex you know ? Not you personally... I actually LOVE your writing style ! But jsut about anyone who uses a black male character does it... I think the only exception I ever came across was Ptolemy in some games...

I would say the same of any race though... except its always BBC that does it... I never see "big white dick" or "big brown dick" or "big yellow dick"... NEVER... and it just grates me.
 

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Don't take it too personally. There's a lot of racism being thrown around in the US right now. It's bound to spill over to the net in weird places like this.
Trust me, I know as a U.S. citizen lol

When I say "blacked" its more than interracial sex... its about the stupid "race-play" element that comes with it...

Your a writer, you should know... in your game Picture Perfect the girls always say "damn landlord has a big dick".... in any game with "blacked" the girls never leave it at "damn Darius has a big dick"... its always something stupid and racist like "Damn Darius has a big BLACK dick"...

I mean leave the fucking race shit out of sex you know ? Not you personally... I actually LOVE your writing style ! But jsut about anyone who uses a black male character does it... I think the only exception I ever came across was Ptolemy in some games...

I would say the same of any race though... except its always BBC that does it... I never see "big white dick" or "big brown dick" or "big yellow dick"... NEVER... and it just grates me.
Ah, ok. I just got a little confused because of the term "blacked." It made me think you were okay with NTR, as long as the dick isn't black. You probably shouldn't use that in the future or you might confuse others lol

But I respect Ptolemy a lot because he uses all race of characters. That's exactly what I aim to do with this game. Torry is Hispanic, and a couple of the other heroines in this game will be white and Asian, etc. =]
 
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Trust me, I know as a U.S. citizen lol



Ah, ok. I just got a little confused because of the term "blacked." It made me think you were okay with NTR, as long as the dick isn't black. You probably shouldn't use that in the future or you might confuse others lol

But I respect Ptolemy a lot because he uses all race of characters. That's exactly what I aim to do with this game. Torry is Hispanic, and a couple of the other heroines in this game will be white and Asian, etc. =]
Yeah goodness no, I hate NTR in all races LOL... equal opportunity hater of all races when it comes to that fetish (y)
 

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Trust me, I know as a U.S. citizen lol

Ah, ok. I just got a little confused because of the term "blacked." It made me think you were okay with NTR, as long as the dick isn't black. You probably shouldn't use that in the future or you might confuse others lol
It is really sad in today and age we still get racism so much, especially in a country thats founded on many different races. lol So I feel you Super Writer, I may be white and american fully but I hate all that racism crap. My wife isn't white, so she gets a lot of crap in today's era. (She's latina)

But I respect Ptolemy a lot because he uses all race of characters. That's exactly what I aim to do with this game. Torry is Hispanic, and a couple of the other heroines in this game will be white and Asian, etc. =]
It's nice to see all races. And not in stereotypical ways too. It's why I like some of the harem games I've played as they have such a varity, sad when you see a game with a lot of romances and they are all very similar in appearance and race. lol
 

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Just wondering...If the MC has had too much and goes total sociopath on the psychopath lady,how will it end? If the psychopath gets subdued and bested ,at his mercy what would happen?
 
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