VN Ren'Py Abandoned I Wish [v1.9] [30avenger30]

[etann]

Whats the main menu track called?

 

[VN..reader]

OH, i don't know what i was thinking.... well, i thought it would be worth a try... Damn right it was!!! BUT ... i had my grandpa pants on and just kept thinking, No kids, you're making bad decisions... you're gonna mess up your lives!!, then i realized ... dumb ass .. this is a porn game... still somehow i had a vested interest in the characters, so hot and so.. innocent ?
poor billie,,, You Go Girl, uh BOY . fuck it, Dev you better get this in high gear buddy, i'm gonna need to see this to the end!!! NOW, or when you can...

 

[Deleted member 1370694]

Was it intentional to make the mc look like a douche bag with the bun and open sided shirt. Also those pants had to be from one of the bad designs they call fashion. The girls look good so giving a benefit of a doubt and trying it.

What's wrong with men having long hair? It's not common but also not super seldom. I think it's a nice change that not every MC looks the same with short hair. I mean the female characters vary as well, so why not the male mcs, too?

 

[WuzzyFuzzy]

Finally! Finally a dev bothers to actually sync audio with their animations. As a video editor it continually surprises me how few devs in these games even bother attempting to include audio in their games. Rarer still is the one that takes pride in how they do it.

I very much like the game so far, but I will throw in bit of critique... The script has a TON of misspellings, grammatical errors and poor word choice (translation). I would encourage you to find an editor/proofreader to solve these problems. Your game deserves better. At the very least, put your script in a text editor with a spell checker. That will take care of a few of them.

Also, you may be getting yourself into trouble with your naming convention. Some of your images use "angel 01" (heavenly being), some use "angle 01" (perspective). In some image files or animations you use "Kayley" for some, "Kailey" for others. I think you're likely making things harder on yourself if you continue to misspell.

Regardless, thanks for your work. That lap dance animation almost melted my GPU....

 

[WuzzyFuzzy]

I have to reply.
Even though you're just one person, it makes me sad that people are so narrow minded.
As it says in the game overview... this is not a sandbox game.
download... or don't download, but don't let someone that doesn't really know anything about the game make that decision for you.

Agree. The main thing is to make your game. You will never please everyone, so be an artist and make the game you want to make and then keep a thick skin and stay polite (as you are doing). There are always those that have the pathological desire to attempt to trigger others (or just whine).

 

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[bsjfan69]

Not good. Grammatical mistakes galore. Unskippable animations (and even mocking the player for trying to skip them). Lying about version number. Nothing redeeming whatsoever about this game.

 

[DrWho8248]

Hmmm... I wonder how moch sex contetn we have here...

 

[Ive-11]

dunno, i just wnna give a try on how taste dark skin girls

 

[30avenger30]

Finally! Finally a dev bothers to actually sync audio with their animations. As a video editor it continually surprises me how few devs in these games even bother attempting to include audio in their games. Rarer still is the one that takes pride in how they do it.

I very much like the game so far, but I will throw in bit of critique... The script has a TON of misspellings, grammatical errors and poor word choice (translation). I would encourage you to find an editor/proofreader to solve these problems. Your game deserves better. At the very least, put your script in a text editor with a spell checker. That will take care of a few of them.

Also, you may be getting yourself into trouble with your naming convention. Some of your images use "angel 01" (heavenly being), some use "angle 01" (perspective). In some image files or animations you use "Kayley" for some, "Kailey" for others. I think you're likely making things harder on yourself if you continue to misspell.

Regardless, thanks for your work. That lap dance animation almost melted my GPU....

Thanks for noticing the music\video sync.
Finally, I was begining to think nobody cares about it.
I sometime spend more time on the audio then on the actual animation, haha.
You're right about the misspellings. I actually speak really good english, but I haven't practiced my grammer for a long time until I started this game.
I tried to find a spell check system that works with atom, but couldn't find one.
Anyway, I think all of the misspellings are fixed now. I should have done it before.
Not sure what you mean about a poor choice of words, but I guess to each is own.
In conclusion... next release will have no misspellings... I guaranty it.

 

[jhustrue]

This game is missing a very, very important tag: Transformation. It would also be nice if it was in the description because not everyone fancies playing a dude that used to be a chick.

 

[RustyCooter]

I can't take any game seriously when the MC has a man bun or a ponytail.


Edit: Come on guys you give more face palms then that.

 

[Deleted member 1370694]

I can't take any game seriously when the MC has a man bun or a ponytail.

Sounds like someone being insecure about masculinity. It only doesn't look good if you are the "milk beard" type of man. It's just another time. The fashion dictates short hair now. It wasn't always. Look at wrestling. Triple H, Edge, Shawn Michaels, Bret Hitman Hart. All had long hair and some of them even still today. Are they all "not to be taken seriously?"

 

[30avenger30]

Hey all,
I thought I'll give you a little update.
next release is about 70% finished.
I almost finished all the renders and animations.
Next week I'll start coding, and hopefully it will be released by the end of the month.
Here are a few previews to get you excited...

 

[Zephea]

I can't take any game seriously when the MC has a man bun or a ponytail.

I think it's kind of cool... although I am a bit older too. My man has longer hair, pony tail length and he looks great. To each their own!

 

[fregonard]

do we have to choose only one girl per route or can we take them all?

 

[WuzzyFuzzy]

+1 for syncing the music to your vid. Amazing how many devs are too lazy to do that.

Also, +1 for him asking her if she wants more "whine". heh...love it.

 

[Darksyde6661]

You ruined a good game by putting sandbox crap in it

 

[Nephyril]

I wish I had a girl who looked good, I'd call her

I wish I had a rabbit in a hat with a bat, and a '64 Impala

 

[supernova874]

Hey everyone,
I'll just answer a few topics that were mentioned here.
First, about the version number.
I had no intention to mislead anyone.
I guess I meant it more as a chapter.
In no place did I say that this is a complete game.
It says in the changelog that it's a first release.
My updates will be 2.0, 3.0... etc.

Secont topic is ntr.
I'm not sneacking anything.
There's going to be Ntr, But it will be avoidable.
According to the forum rules, I can't tag Ntr until there is actually one in the game, so that's why it's not a tag yet.

Last topic is about sandbox tag.
This is not a sandbox game.
It will occasionally have sandbox elements just to get the player to interact with the game.
On this version there is only sandbox interaction at the end of day 1.
On day 2, there is no sandbox interaction at all.

I hope this answers everyone's questions.
Lighten up and enjoy the game.

Regards,
30avenger30

People that are into NTR need to see it in a game even if it's not there yet as "Future Tags" etc. is good to gain some more players that would pass without download it cause ntr isn't a thing in the game yet