VN Ren'Py Onhold Inner Demons [v0.42.6] [GrayTShirt]

[The Ponderer]

I was thinking about the clothing of some of the ladies. Yeah, zippers are definitely out of place. But it's what I had available at the time. Luckily they'll have some extra sets of clothes, that should help with some of the fantasy/medieval themes. I really don't want to change Hilda's lounge wear though. Gotta highlight those curves!
I'll be working on the text box in the next update, transparency and image composition should help.
-GrayTShirt

Understandable, good luck and godspeed.

 

[SupermanikSol]

Loving this game so far! The women are all beautifully stacked! The incest is great, the presence of futa/trans characters is great, and I absolutely love the squirting GILFs! Can't wait to see more GILFs! Also, please don't change the size of the MC's dick. It's porn, the cocks are supposed to be big. Don't like it? Don't play it!

 

[theneedle]

Pretty decent, looks like there's some potential here for a decent story.
Glad I gave it a quick try instead of skipping over it.

 

[GrayTShirt]

GrayTShirt For some reason, I haven't gotten my hands on this game earlier, but I'm really glad that I gave this game a chance, it's absolutely amazing . I really like the way the female characters look, and the pumped-up MC alpha with a big dick fits perfectly into this game, and the sex scenes looks gorgeous. I wish you good luck, and at the moment you are doing everything perfectly. P. S please don't add NTR

Thank you for the comments!

 

[GrayTShirt]

Pretty decent, looks like there's some potential here for a decent story.
Glad I gave it a quick try instead of skipping over it.

Thank you for giving it a chance! I'm curious, how long did it take you to get through? It gives me an idea of how big future updates could be.

 

[kfrazer099]

Thank you for giving it a chance! I'm curious, how long did it take you to get through? It gives me an idea of how big future updates could be.

GrayTShirt I wouldn't worry about that. The story is good and the scenes are super hot, so any update is a good update

To answer your question, I'll give you a rough estimate - Took me around 10 min for the demo, and around 1.5 hours for the update. Though I have to admit, i may have spent a little extra time than i would've wanted admiring the story and the models.

 

[theneedle]

Thank you for giving it a chance! I'm curious, how long did it take you to get through? It gives me an idea of how big future updates could be.

I didn't pay attention to the time, but it the amount of content for a story on chapter one was pretty decent. Felt like atleast a solid hour or so. The balance between the story and the sexual content was nice, looking forward to when the story catches up to the prologue and we find out what makes the MC special.


I'm quite a fan of a fantasy setting, looks like this could be interesting.

 

[Nayko93]

good start
the render are well done , writing is pretty good , story seem interesting , sex scene are long and well done , list of planed fetish really interesting

but ... some stuff maybe need a few adjustment .. ( this is just my personal taste , no need for violence .. )

the MC : I don't know why but I don't like his face , he look a little too old and he look dumb , but not the innocent dumb , more like brute dumb , and it don't go well with his personality showed until now
I have to compare it to the MC of SpaceCorps , muscled body , red hair and a good face that go well with his personality
but it's weird because one some image he looks good and on some other he looks older and with a bad face

the body is maybe a bit too muscled but just a bit , the body hair don't look good , I'm not a fan of body hair in the first place so I can't be objective but this one seems weird , I think it's better to not have it ( and it's more work with rendering )

and now for the tech part , I thing you need to add transition between some image , maybe not for sex scene since it's happening in a short time each new image is just a new camera angle or something that happen immediately after so a direct transition is good , but at the beginning when we see him travel it lack some fade and dissolve transition

a little rule that can help you : when the next image happen more than 5 second after the previous one , put a 0.5 dissolve transition
when it happen more than 10 second , put a 1.0 dissolve transition
and when it change location , pass from one scene to a other or when it's a travel and we the see progress of this travel , put a fade transition
this way you will have a good rythme in your story

 

[Techstar]

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[GrayTShirt]

good start
the render are well done , writing is pretty good , story seem interesting , sex scene are long and well done , list of planed fetish really interesting

but ... some stuff maybe need a few adjustment .. ( this is just my personal taste , no need for violence .. )

the MC : I don't know why but I don't like his face , he look a little too old and he look dumb , but not the innocent dumb , more like brute dumb , and it don't go well with his personality showed until now
I have to compare it to the MC of SpaceCorps , muscled body , red hair and a good face that go well with his personality
but it's weird because one some image he looks good and on some other he looks older and with a bad face

the body is maybe a bit too muscled but just a bit , the body hair don't look good , I'm not a fan of body hair in the first place so I can't be objective but this one seems weird , I think it's better to not have it ( and it's more work with rendering )

and now for the tech part , I thing you need to add transition between some image , maybe not for sex scene since it's happening in a short time each new image is just a new camera angle or something that happen immediately after so a direct transition is good , but at the beginning when we see him travel it lack some fade and dissolve transition

a little rule that can help you : when the next image happen more than 5 second after the previous one , put a 0.5 dissolve transition
when it happen more than 10 second , put a 1.0 dissolve transition
and when it change location , pass from one scene to a other or when it's a travel and we the see progress of this travel , put a fade transition
this way you will have a good rythme in your story

These are alot of good points. Thank you for bringing them up.
The muscled-up MC is actually a plot point that will be told later. The body hair is used to break up the flat, empty skin surface. Rendering times are not a concern for me.
The MCs face looks a little older than his age due to his upbringing. He's been through alot and had to grow up pretty fast. You'll see what I mean in future updates.
The transitional dissolved have been suggested to me also by the person who proofread the script. It's something I'll be looking at in future updates as well.
Again, thank you for the comments. I appreciate the input.

 

[Lysergic]

Great work so far, the sister has some very unfortunate timing at the beginning there, but the including Fiona and Rhona, sex partners who are both attractive and truly mature is rare enough to almost make up for that so more of them would be a welcome developement. Otherwise not much can be said that others already haven't so just let me say, keep up the good work, I personally can't wait for the next update.

 

[punisher2099]

These amazon chicks are hot I didn't even have a problem with the old broads.

 

[Alex Lem]

Thank you for the comments!

And as Professor Black said here earlier, I'm also not a fan of the fact that the girls with whom you are intimate talk about another man and what his cum tastes like, and that it would be nice to have sex with him again, like, is MC a joke to you??And a potential NTR is a shitty idea, Hah I really would not want to hear more about Vincent. We all know about avoidable futa, but other males fucks potential love interests i wouldn't really want to hear about it, though that sex scene and the girls (big fan of mature women) looked phenomenal, and I really love the game at the moment. This is your game, man, I just hope that such scenes can be completely avoided, or they won't happen at all, and adding a little choices options would be nice too, and I really would not like to see the MC's dick reduced in size, this is a fantasy game about demons, where all women look like goddesses, The MC should be suitable for their sizes . There is even a mention that someone does not like the muscular MC, I go to the gym regularly myself, and seriously guys, you prefer that the MC was Shota, and midget or what?

 

[TSL_JOK4R.]

that was amazing i didn't expect to love this game like i did . the scenes are amazing and the charecters are 10/10 but where is the patreon so we could support the dev ?

 

[Purb]

Looking good and loving that there is futa on male and also wondering will there be Male on futa also? And the renders are looking amazing.

 

[Skankhunt 4 2 0]

nice update

 

[GrayTShirt]

Looking good and loving that there is futa on male and also wondering will there be Male on futa also? And the renders are looking amazing.

Thank you for the compliment! As for the futa stuff: male on futa is limited to penetration, futa on male is limited to oral only. No plans on changing that at this time.

 

[GrayTShirt]

that was amazing i didn't expect to love this game like i did . the scenes are amazing and the charecters are 10/10 but where is the patreon so we could support the dev ?

No plans for any funding sites. 100%free.

 

[phupdup]

The dev fat fingered a dissolve statement:

TypeError: 'Dissolve' object is not callable

While running game code:
  File "game/chapter01.rpy", line 1737, in script
    with dissolve(2.0)

game/chapter01.rpy line 1737:

 with dissolve(2.0)

should be

 with Dissolve(2.0)

 

[GrayTShirt]

The dev fat fingered a dissolve statement:

TypeError: 'Dissolve' object is not callable

While running game code:
  File "game/chapter01.rpy", line 1737, in script
    with dissolve(2.0)

game/chapter01.rpy line 1737:

with dissolve(2.0)

should be

with Dissolve(2.0)

There shoud have been an updated fix for this in the Mega, GoFile, and Workupload sites.