VN Ren'Py Abandoned Kindread: The Redburns [Ch. 5] [Inkalicious]

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Sin Eater

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I see some comments about how young the mother looks. Its strange to see complaints about this. I live in a state in the midwest and see woman as old as 58 looking as if they're in their mid 30's. I also see what you'd typically expect of folks in that age range. Genetics and taking care of yourself can do wonders, sometimes. I personally know a few woman in their 60's that look no older than 30 and haven't had any work done. Its kinda scary. All that aside I absolutely love this game.
 

Alderon55

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This game's got a lot of promise. Girls are great, just if you plan to go with NTR give the player a way to avoid it, please. Otherwise, keep it up, gonna be keeping a close eye on the updates!
 
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DasKapitan

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asgardtipar2

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I work on this game in any spare time I have. It's not my job, but I will keep plugging away when I can.

For the tech issue, I've no idea why you're not seeing the names. That's a bug I've never seen.
The patch needs to be installed for each update, as it changes dialogue not just names. It does change the dialogue title for the older female, but this shouldn't affect any other character.
aha.. Well gg for the work on the game I guess.. Btw here is the example of what I am talking 1550364649321.png
 

Dyhart

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i do not use incest patches..so to me they are just random babes i lucked out and ended up with...if i ignore references that point to them being related I'm ok with boinking them(in 8-9 updates..HAHAHAAA!!)
haha I think it was you that made me actually LOL with a comment about the dialogue in a game that was clearly designed with incest in mind but without the patch. Something like "we can't do that, we're roomates" like...umm... :LOL:
 

Dyhart

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This is down to my noob Honey Select skills at the time. They've improved, but HS still isn't great at subtle ageing. Hopefully their dialogue, characteristics and approach to things help show an age gap.

Didn't you say in an earlier post that the incest patch was not by you? It's fan made? I would have thought this was not "supposed" to be an incest story.
 

myuhinny

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I started over as I had named them one sister and the younger one was name sis.

Named mom Mary but had to open the console and edit it to Mom so the sister would quit calling her by her name.

Keep up the great work!

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@Dyhart

Too much didn't make sense if they were not related and there would of been no reason for either of the girls to have put up with his preving if they were not related as any other girl would of kicked his ass out the door already.
 

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@Dyhart

Too much didn't make sense if they were not related and there would of been no reason for either of the girls to have put up with his preving if they were not related as any other girl would of kicked his ass out the door already.[/QUOTE]

Ahhh ok. You know that does make sense from some of the comments I have seen on here. Thanks. Will give it a try.
 

Siphon

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Solid update, though I can't figure out what lets your sister flash you at the very end (It happened to me like once), or how to get the shirtless handjob. There also seems to be a path where your mom finds you and your sis sleeping together (clothed, like the start of Ch2), and she seems to get fairly upset and jerks you off.

Do wish there was some way we'd know of the consequences of the choices we pick, it's hard to decide if kissing your sister is the right choice or not, or if you should leave some jizz in the cup.
 

Stareagle lord

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Okay renders and characters are really good, story intro in itself is quite good. the story in general and dialoges is mostly green. But critical stuff well 1 i can't tell the difference of what some dialogues if they do much or any real difference, the only real difference is sex/pictures stuff or not sex stuff. Without a walkthrough or point system there's no telling if choice a does anything to choice b or further other than the current choice place. 2 part is atleast 2 choice's are a no win really with the younger female but at same time it doesn tell anything about ending path or points either so no clue what to pick. and also the dl one i got must have been with incest patch of some parts or atleast wrongly written or so because the way its stated/written there is some kind of family relationship with them.. so for now you get a clean 5/10. a walkthrough if the options does some kind of better ending or whatever in future would earn you 1-3 points. cleaning up those dialogues without touching the incest patch would be a 1+ point regardless of walktrhough or not. adding a point system for showing either sex path/paths or Good guy ending path(if there is one) would earn you 4 points, yeah this is the biggest problem as i said fix it please. and walkthrough would only get you +1 then if you make one. I don't see any need for more people in this game yet atleast. But if Mc would find another woman and her existence would make the other 2 girls jelousy then sure but id rather see a point system or walkthrough if there is any difference in the dialogues options. If not then id suggest you remove the options and just make a story without options its an honest review here. :) and yes you can surpass 10/10 thats the current expectations and if you surpass those expectations i can't see anyway for this game to fail become a real populare game around here and on patreon too.
 

myuhinny

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@Siphon

I think somethings depend on how many you have with them on what might happen but they only happen if you have enough stats with with. Since the stats are hidden you would have to extract the game files and look and see if there is a point gain or not with each option.
 
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Solid update, though I can't figure out what lets your sister flash you at the very end (It happened to me like once), or how to get the shirtless handjob. There also seems to be a path where your mom finds you and your sis sleeping together (clothed, like the start of Ch2), and she seems to get fairly upset and jerks you off.

Do wish there was some way we'd know of the consequences of the choices we pick, it's hard to decide if kissing your sister is the right choice or not, or if you should leave some jizz in the cup.
After several tries I think it only matters whether you mention her hand or ignore it in the decision right before it.
 
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DasKapitan

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Didn't you say in an earlier post that the incest patch was not by you? It's fan made? I would have thought this was not "supposed" to be an incest story.
Just to add to what myuhinny said, this is basically where Patreon has taken us these days... A Dev can write 95% of a story about incest, so long as they never actually mention incest. Then it's up to the community to mod in that 5% of proper references.
 
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Kyril87

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Solid update, though I can't figure out what lets your sister flash you at the very end (It happened to me like once), or how to get the shirtless handjob. There also seems to be a path where your mom finds you and your sis sleeping together (clothed, like the start of Ch2), and she seems to get fairly upset and jerks you off.

Do wish there was some way we'd know of the consequences of the choices we pick, it's hard to decide if kissing your sister is the right choice or not, or if you should leave some jizz in the cup.
(Person who really ISN'T your) sister flash -- play dumb (about hands)
Shirtless handjob -- be nice and caring to (the person who really ISN'T) your mother. "Cute cumface", etc.

Save often and play all options.
 
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(...) Btw here is the example of what I am talking View attachment 247310
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Did you properly name the characters in the beginning?
Or maybe something went wrong with the incest patch.

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Great update - and what a cliffhanger.

It's so refreshing to play a game with decent (= smart & funny) writing for a change - a department in which so many games are lacking.
But I also like the visuals - they may not seem that great at first (compared to other eye candy games), but the gritty renders fit the apocalyptic theme just perfectly.
Even the absence of widescreen (which initially bothered me a bit) serves a purpose and adds to the claustrophobic atmosphere, where you never know what threat might be lurking in the shadows.

I hope there will be many more chapters to come - and I'm already looking forward to volume 2 with the Hendersons.
Just keep doing what you do @inkalicious - and stay true to your artistic vision.
Yeah, I'm talking about stuff like "There's not enough lewd content here yet", "Show us mom's boobs already".
I don't care. I would even play this game if there weren't any lewd scenes at all.

I also really hope that things pick up for you - both regarding job and Patreon support.
 
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