VN Ren'Py Abandoned Kindread: The Redburns [Ch. 5] [Inkalicious]

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Badjourasmix

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I'm guilty of being on the fence about this.
So the aim of the game is, of course, to get the girls. Plural.
The state of your relationships may be different at the end, but hey, you'll be swapping body fluids. Yay!

The fence-sitting comes from the fact that not all of the girls that enter your orbit/bed will be available for your harem. Some will be... taking a different path.
So, yeah, unlike other fine harem games here, you can't collect them all.
That is understandable, If we end up with both mom and sis that is enough for me to be happy.
 

ImperialD

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o.k. i'm stupid about which download i should get .. i wanna be able to fuck my sisters or mom ... or dad and daughters ... and maybe knock them up also ... ?
 
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Rintal

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Haha! What?! Didn't notice? *tilts head, squints eye* ....mmmmm. Nah.

I can say that after googling 'reverse cowgirl pov' there are many, many differences in the female form, and this is a fair representation. Still a work-in-progress lighting-wise though.
I'm not sure if I can explain it correctly with my English. You see, there is very thin skin between the anus and the vagina. Usually, it is pulled very tightly around the bottom of the penis. Sometimes, you can literally feel it, how it slams into your dick, like a thin thread. And not a single woman has labia there.
In any case, in the picture I roughly drew how it should look.
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inkalicious

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I'm not sure if I can explain it correctly with my English. You see, there is very thin skin between the anus and the vagina. Usually, it is pulled very tightly around the bottom of the penis. Sometimes, you can literally feel it, how it slams into your dick, like a thin thread. And not a single woman has labia there.
In any case, in the picture I roughly drew how it should look.
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Nice edit.

Yep. That is also a fair representation of what it could look like, but my version is just as valid. Honest. Google it.
(this is a porn-filled site, but I genuinely wondered if I'd get slapped by a mod for adding source photos of real reverse cowgirl in action)
For example, the two states seen in this example:
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You also have to take into account...
  • The varied types of genitals that are out there
  • The age of the female (e.g. experience)
  • Is she rising up or coming down?
  • How far will I edit this one image, in amongst hundreds (I've been guilty of blowing through my available production time on an image that will last a click in real time.)
I do enjoy feedback and chatting about female parts, though this time we'll have to agree to disagree.
 

rahkshi01

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I'm guilty of being on the fence about this.
So the aim of the game is, of course, to get the girls. Plural.
The state of your relationships may be different at the end, but hey, you'll be swapping body fluids. Yay!

The fence-sitting comes from the fact that not all of the girls that enter your orbit/bed will be available for your harem. Some will be... taking a different path.
So, yeah, unlike other fine harem games here, you can't collect them all.
Ouch this kinda hurts. I mean usually if a girl gets excluded from a harem I would prefer it to be due to a choice I made on my part, whether that be intentional or accidental. Say for instance since this is apocalypse and zombies if I made a mistake or possibly on purpose and a girl died then the whole choice and consequences are on me, rather than say if there is no choice and she dies anyway the whole thing would be forced. A scenario in this case where if the player likes the girl or not and is given the freedom of choice to keep her or not would possibly only be beneficial to the game. I have read where you said most choices don't matter, but giving crucial choices like this every once in a while will help to keep the player engaged and immersed in the story which in the long run can only help to improve the overall quality of the game.
 

inkalicious

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Isn't cum on food already in though? Or does this mean that future content of this kind will be more in-depth? I'm looking forward to more of that btw.
Yep. It's been available as a choice and if you choose it, then there's more where that came from.
 
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inkalicious

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Ouch this kinda hurts. I mean usually if a girl gets excluded from a harem I would prefer it to be due to a choice I made on my part, whether that be intentional or accidental. Say for instance since this is apocalypse and zombies if I made a mistake or possibly on purpose and a girl died then the whole choice and consequences are on me, rather than say if there is no choice and she dies anyway the whole thing would be forced. A scenario in this case where if the player likes the girl or not and is given the freedom of choice to keep her or not would possibly only be beneficial to the game. I have read where you said most choices don't matter, but giving crucial choices like this every once in a while will help to keep the player engaged and immersed in the story which in the long run can only help to improve the overall quality of the game.
A few things here, so I'll take them one at a time.

Choices do matter, they always have. I've been explicit that even inconsequential choices might matter. I've mentioned this example before, but I'll hide it for those who want to avoid spoilers and walkthroughs.
The very first choice you make, whether to join Megan/Mom or go exploring, has a big impact, but not till much much later.
I think where you've read that "choices don't matter" is part of the FAQ, in the form of a question from the user. I had to tackle this as, in early releases, no-one was seeing how the choices were stacking-up, so they thought choices didn't matter.
I've also singled those that don't matter and there's only been a few: Choosing where you first went in the warehouse (you'll get lost anyway) and looking at Marie's pussy (she doesn't care). The rest have effects.

Yeah. Not getting all of the girls is a tough one, but only because it's being stacked-up against ALL of the harem games, especially on this forum.
The one thing I can say is that you won't be fooled into having something with somebody and then it's cruelly whipped away. I can't stop you thinking "I'd give my left nut, and one of the redheads, if she stuck around." but think of it like ships that pass in the night, or a one-night stand. People move on. Stuff happens.

Otherwise you'll be able to make choices and intervene to have the relationships that are available. BUT. Remember, that while you are the protagonist playing the game, all of the other characters are playing their own game.
 
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Zerek244

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A few things here, so I'll take them one at a time.

Choices do matter, they always have. I've been explicit that even inconsequential choices might matter. I've mentioned this example before, but I'll hide it for those who want to avoid spoilers and walkthroughs.
The very first choice you make, whether to avoid Megan/Mom and go exploring, has a big impact, but not till much much later.
I think where you've read that "choices don't matter" is part of the FAQ, in the form of a question from the user. I had to tackle this as, in early releases, no-one was seeing how the choices were stacking-up, so they thought choices didn't matter.
I've also singled those that don't matter and there's only been a few: Choosing where you first went in the warehouse (you'll get lost anyway) and looking at Marie's pussy (she doesn't care). The rest have effects.

Yeah. Not getting all of the girls is a tough one, but only because it's being stacked-up against ALL of the harem games, especially on this forum.
The one thing I can say is that you won't be fooled into having something with somebody and then it's cruelly whipped away. I can't stop you thinking "I'd give my left nut, and one of the redheads, if she stuck around." but think of it like ships that pass in the night, or a one-night stand. People move on. Stuff happens.

Otherwise you'll be able to make choices and intervene to have the relationships that are available. BUT. Remember, that while you are the protagonist playing the game, all of the other characters are playing their own game.

Wow, this sounds ominous. Now I feel bad for not letting Megan/Mom go to the warehouse because I thought I would protect them with it. Seems like they wont gain the experience and will suffer later on because of that decision.
 

inkalicious

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so let me get this straight .. i get to fuck my sister in the ass .. cause she saving her pussy for some other bitch .. dammit that sucks .... well at least i have a shot at mom .. mmmmmm :love:
The little horndog hasn't explained yet why this one obvious pleasure palace is off limits. All that teasing with her other orifices...
 

VelocityRyuga

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I've updated the OP's 'Planned content' spoiler and FAQ with a harem explanation.
Went through the planned content and was even more amazed on how diverse your game is going to be. Honestly, I really think it's my favourite, you're doing a fantastic job!

Now I read how you don't like giving deadlines, and how you're busy as well, so you only get to work for a few hours a week which is understandable. However since you've given a sneak peak on upcoming content - I really really can't help myself but still ask, Is there any news on an update (Chapter 6)?

Even something around the lines by the end of this year, half way there, renders complete just posing will be enough to control my curiosity for a bit longer. I'm not entirely sure if you mentioned something in the earlier comments so apologies if this is a repetitive question. I probably won't get a chance in time to contact you again, so in advance - merry christmas!
 

Majima@22

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A few things here, so I'll take them one at a time.

Yeah. Not getting all of the girls is a tough one, but only because it's being stacked-up against ALL of the harem games, especially on this forum.
The one thing I can say is that you won't be fooled into having something with somebody and then it's cruelly whipped away. I can't stop you thinking "I'd give my left nut, and one of the redheads, if she stuck around." but think of it like ships that pass in the night, or a one-night stand. People move on. Stuff happens.

Otherwise you'll be able to make choices and intervene to have the relationships that are available. BUT. Remember, that while you are the protagonist playing the game, all of the other characters are playing their own game.
If we end up with both mom and sis that is enough for me to be happy.
 

amBest

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Dude, I kept putting off playing your new update because there just aren't enough good games on this site. The best games need to be enjoyed, like when you're just sipping on fine wine and not actually drinking it. This game is just like that! It's special and I like taking my time with it.

Not to mention this is the only game that I actually replayed while it was on hold (or abandoned?). I never do that! It usually just makes me sad. But I can't help myself. Sam is amazing, your dialog with her is amazing, the relationship between MC and her is amazing. Not to mention mom who is, hands down, best girl.

It's not much, but you can count on my support!
 
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