I played and still play quite a few not western vn's and unfortunately almost all of them are disappointing with rare exception, and biggest reason for that is simply that most vn's have terrible writing unlike Lil, Im at a point where I would be glad to read any vn western or not , but give me the good writing, recently I played fruit of grisaia and we get flashback of one of the girls backstory where she together with other people gets into accident and long story short people are forced to kill and canibalize each other, and man you read it and there's zero weight to the story , it reads more like comedy even thou it tries to be serious, the writing is just pathetically bad.
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Does f95 signature with Otoha (and by extension Nodoka, Yasu, Touka) exist? Can't see them in the linked post (https://f95zone.to/threads/lessons-in-love-v0-38-0-selebus.48158/page-52#post-3956847)
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Give her a few more batch of events and she'll likely turn into a good character.
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Not contesting the first point, but the second I can't agree with. The story is 100% better with her in it:
1. She gives Yumi a reason to trust Sensei after the unfortunate bridge incident
2. She's even more of a catalyst to Rin's not-so-homie-like attraction to Sensei
3. She's an excellent source of external conflict directed at other girls, so it's not Sensei always filling that role.
If she was a one-dimensional D&D villain whose sociopathy always manifested slasher-film style, I'd agree. But she's a deep and complex character, so brilliant she has little in common with the peers she cannot empathize with. She reminds me a lot of Mia from Californication, only less self-centered. Nodoka is ruled by her desire to experience everything, to better be able to write about it. She may be a sociopath, but without the borderline or disassociative disorders to really turn her into a monster. Instead, she's this giant gray area of amorality that makes her interesting as fuck, if you can get past the way her manic episodes are written.
Edit: Not to mention, Hot/Crazy axis in effect.
Is there any way to increase tsukasa_love to 1?
Because as a aftereffect of the last punishment, my tsukasa love point is now 0.
Because as a aftereffect of the last punishment, my tsukasa love point is now 0.
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So where the hell does Nao-chan fit into this story? Should I be concerned for Kaori's safety?
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You mean as if Nao-chan is underway to get help? No, wouldnt worry. My guess would be more that she sent her to the storage building for abducted girls of burger friend mac burger man while she is at work. Probably an idea from Niki.
Edit: Yeah, i havent seen her in the corner there standing. So she isnt at work. But this might still be the overall idea.
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Well, in this case you really should, i am convinced that Nao-chan will turn out to be some sort of eldritch abomination that even the dunwich horror would shit its pants.
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Just call Kaori at night
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A little wary about Makoto and Nao-chan being around eachother.
It seems like Kaori is new Sekai, Nao-chan is new Ami, and I guess John might be the new Nozomu.
Which is kind of funny if it's implying Sekai saw her actual husband as a big chicken she had for a pet.
So, I think Kaori is safe, or at least, safe besides the possession stuff going on. I'm a little more worried about what Kaori does to others, tbh.
We still don't know what actually happened to Yumi and Tsuneyo during the 5th Reset, but Kaori apparently being on the roof likely implies she was around during the reset, and she did just show up at Tojo Ramen, red eyed, and not exactly looking friendly:
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Nao-chan, on the other hand, probably isn't too dangerous, but I guess we'll find out.
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A happy face is a happy place. Please remember to smile.
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Actually legit loved that music, even now I have it in my playlist.A happy face is a happy place. Please remember to smile.
And that event atmosphere was phenomenal, went through a rabbithole of "abandoned malls" on youtube after it. Though most of them ended up as wholesome stories how, for example, "there was a pet store on the 1st floor and the clerk there allowed us to play with animals, one of the happiest memories of my childhood" and stuff like that...
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I like to imagine Selebus staring directly into the camera while I read this